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Kopal

@Chani123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: namedx
...*rapes replay button*

Did you here Sobti's voice!!!? The moment he speaks, his tone is lowered to a lovers growl - is he doing that intentionally!!? *faints for the umpteenth time*

Oh yeah!! Noticed that.. Oh so husky! 😳

the way he turns.. holds her waist.. and flips her down... Agile like a lion.

Pouncing on its prey!!

* now i need air*

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namedx

@namedx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#782

I thought of setting it out like a screenplay

Name: (dialogue)

would that make it more readable??

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Kopal

@Chani123

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: namedx
Ok almost there now..

How should we do this? There's too many pages to sift through. Anyway of making the process easier.. 😕

I'll see where I first started my updates, then would you ladies be ok with taking a few pages each and select comments which you think are a MUST?

See.. What we can do is.. We all can go to My POSTS... and select our comments which need to be there.. Ok??

Once we are done sorting our comments.. we can take few pages each.. What say??

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namedx

@namedx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#784

...😳

After replying, I notice his lips parted as soon as Khushi poured on the cold soothing oil, or was it when she first touched his back *goes back to re-watch*

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namedx

@namedx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: Chani123

See.. What we can do is.. We all can go to My POSTS... and select our comments which need to be there.. Ok??

Once we are done sorting our comments.. we can take few pages each.. What say??

Teekh hein, yep that makes sense! lol 😆

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Kopal

@Chani123

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: namedx
I thought of setting it out like a screenplay

Name: (dialogue)

would that make it more readable??

Sounds good

what will be the screenplay? i mean how are you trying to weave it?

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365166

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Posted: 13 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: namedx
...😳

After replying, I notice his lips parted as soon as Khushi poured on the cold soothing oil, or was it when she first touched his back *goes back to re-watch*

And the way he says Suna nahi TV.. he is so into her.. He is enjoying every bit of this live doll he has in front of him.. Cannot believe his luck, count his blessings and everything.. Thoroughly enjoying.. All he has to do is Key her.. She does all the trick 😆

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Kopal

@Chani123

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: namedx
...😳

After replying, I notice his lips parted as soon as Khushi poured on the cold soothing oil, or was it when she first touched his back *goes back to re-watch*

when she first touches his back...😳

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namedx

@namedx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#789

Arnav leraha hein uska biwi ke haath ka mazaa when suddenly, he breaks the silence!! 😳

What the...! You're meant to enjoy the moment Arnav, feel it, lol!!

Arnav: *husky voice* tumhe toh bohat accha laga na ke mein gir gaya?

Khushi: *all ears*

Reduxians: OMG did you hear that husky voice of his!!? The guy is ultimate SWAG!

Arnav: *jumps up and takes her down with him, holding her by the waist, pinning her under him in one swift movement - blink, and you MISS IT!!!

Me: What the hell just happened!!!? How!??? *clicks replay*

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namedx

@namedx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: Chani123

Sounds good

what will be the screenplay? i mean how are you trying to weave it?

Actually we'll just post it the people have commented (may make some changes with wording - adding to it perhaps) but the bulk of posts we keep the same. All that needs to be done is they need to be put in order of events - live update.