OS: Khushi smart, Manorama smarter

I like how u write from a person's point of view and I have to figure out who that person is. I almost always start off with the most obvious person and tehn when something does not click, I start readig again and then voila I get the answer. Loved this OS, but it seemed an abrupt ending...are u planning to continue this OS?

Originally posted by: nuts

I like how u write from a person's point of view and I have to figure out who that person is. I almost always start off with the most obvious person and tehn when something does not click, I start readig again and then voila I get the answer. Loved this OS, but it seemed an abrupt ending...are u planning to continue this OS?

I was sure, wanted the readers to decide what happens next, that way they can have an end of their choice instead of mine, the only reason it was left like that.

The title caught my attention like never before

Originally posted by: fffan123

Brilliant OS Kalyaani. 👏 👏 👏 But the end seems abrupt. 😲 Please continue. The war of words between Khushi and Mamiji would be a treat to read.

Lets hope such understanding and concern for the other permeates the characters in the serial too. Carry on with this.

Beautifully written! xD

Originally posted by: ClumsyLilGirl

Beautifully written! xD

But you should have ended it properly, even though i do realize that you have left it to us, the readers to decide.. :)

Hmmm, let me see, have a few ideas in mind, will write a part 2, my end for the OS it will be then. 😃

If only mami could do this in the show!

great os dear... wish mami was as smart as you have portrayed...