OS: Khushi smart, Manorama smarter

nuts

@nuts

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Posted: 13 years ago

I like how u write from a person's point of view and I have to figure out who that person is. I almost always start off with the most obvious person and tehn when something does not click, I start readig again and then voila I get the answer. Loved this OS, but it seemed an abrupt ending...are u planning to continue this OS?

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nuts
I like how u write from a person's point of view and I have to figure out who that person is. I almost always start off with the most obvious person and tehn when something does not click, I start readig again and then voila I get the answer. Loved this OS, but it seemed an abrupt ending...are u planning to continue this OS?

I was sure, wanted the readers to decide what happens next, that way they can have an end of their choice instead of mine, the only reason it was left like that.

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

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Posted: 13 years ago

The title caught my attention like never before

loved it

so sensible 👍🏼

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliant OS Kalyaani. 👏 👏 👏 But the end seems abrupt. 😲 Please continue. The war of words between Khushi and Mamiji would be a treat to read.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fffan123
Brilliant OS Kalyaani. 👏 👏 👏 But the end seems abrupt. 😲 Please continue. The war of words between Khushi and Mamiji would be a treat to read.

The end was intensional, you think of what happens next... it's left to you...

I wrote this because I hated the turn Mamiji's character took after helping Khushi initially while Arnav was kidnapped.

Blame 4Lions, they are never consistant.

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Lets hope such understanding and concern for the other permeates the characters in the serial too. Carry on with this.

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809768

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautifully written! xD

But you should have ended it properly, even though i do realize that you have left it to us, the readers to decide.. :)

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ClumsyLilGirl
Beautifully written! xD
But you should have ended it properly, even though i do realize that you have left it to us, the readers to decide.. :)

Hmmm, let me see, have a few ideas in mind, will write a part 2, my end for the OS it will be then. 😃