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Hi, friends I am an one of the fan of IPKKND.. I just love ARHI.. Here I am going to write a FF.
It's for first time. So I am really tensed. I am just giving the characters sketch and waiting for your comments..and also please do comment about the title..should I change it?
Place: Shantivan
Scene One: At the drawing room, in the sofa elders members of two families GUPTA and RAIZADA are discussing about party.
Scene two: A 12 years old girl (Anjali) entering in the room and go to a 8 years old boy( Arnav) who is drawing a picture. The girl: "Chotey, have you prepared the gift? How much time will you take? Hum!!".
The boy: "Di please dont say about this gift to her. Promise me u'll keep it as secret between us".
Scene three: A 6 year cute girl(Khushi) jumping here and there and doing action on how her teachers teach in the school..Her mom is scolding and asking not to do that . But every one is laughing. Another boy (NK) is busy to bring the newly bought game to show it khushi.
will I continue friends?? please feel free to share your opinion
It's for first time. So I am really tensed. I am just giving the characters sketch and waiting for your comments..and also please do comment about the title..should I change it?
Place: Shantivan
Scene One: At the drawing room, in the sofa elders members of two families GUPTA and RAIZADA are discussing about party.
Scene two: A 12 years old girl (Anjali) entering in the room and go to a 8 years old boy( Arnav) who is drawing a picture. The girl: "Chotey, have you prepared the gift? How much time will you take? Hum!!".
The boy: "Di please dont say about this gift to her. Promise me u'll keep it as secret between us".
Scene three: A 6 year cute girl(Khushi) jumping here and there and doing action on how her teachers teach in the school..Her mom is scolding and asking not to do that . But every one is laughing. Another boy (NK) is busy to bring the newly bought game to show it khushi.
will I continue friends?? please feel free to share your opinion
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