updated part 5, page3_toota sabr ka baandh-ss

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Posted: 13 years ago
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After verbally abusing Khushi, arnav left rm. he went for a drive hoping to calm himself. the cool wind sure helped arnav in cooling his temper but it also brought along the realization that once again coz of him khushi is hurt. His every uttered word came back to haunt him.
he slammed his hand on the steering
Arnav: dammit, ye Maine kya kiya. Mujhe Khushi se maafi maangni hogi.
ASR still has not realized that this time he went too far. he is still thinkin that Khushi will forgive him.
In rm khushi, instead instead of feeling sad and depressed, went into full sanka devi mode.
khushi: aaj hum inhe batayege ki buaji hame sanka devi kyu bulati hai.
Saying so khushi wiped her watery eyes and nose on her sleeves, removed her dupatta from the neck. tying her dupatta around her waist she proceeded towards the kitchen.

plz tell me whether I shud continue or not


part 2 & 3 updated below
part4- page2,
part 5-page3
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sabby91 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2

Khushi can feel her blood boiling with rage. so she did the first thing that came to her mind.
she went to the kitchen to make jalebis.
her jiji and buaji always used to say that " khushi comes up with the best ideas while frying jalebis and watching sallu's movies.
since movie was not an option right now. she went to fry jalebis.
and so happened that while making jalebis khushi thought of a plan that was as simple and straight as jalebi.
here arnav was regretting abusing khushi and trying to find words to express his feelings.
he rang the doorbell of rm expecting khushi to open the door as usual. but he was greeted by a panicked hp.
hp: arnav bhaiyya achcha hua aap aa Gaye.
arnav : Wat happened
hp : wo arnav bhaiyya, khushiji ne apne ko kamre me band kar diya hai.
arnav : Wat
he ran to his room, various thoughts flitting thru his mind.
he hoped that he was not too late. his world was already shaken. if something was to happen to khushi his life wud end. if Di was his soul, khushi was the breath that kept both his body and soul together.

will update the next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
coool
nice going
wanted to see what sankadevi had in her mind
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3


khushi knew wen arnav had arrived at rm and had staged her act accordingly.she wanted to hurt arnav as much as he had made her suffer. she now realized that she had forgiven all his mistakes,no,deeds easily. he didn't knew what she went through. he must be made aware of the consequences of his actions. only then will she forgive him. she just didn't want him to say sorry, she now wants him to repent.
if today she is unable to take this step, she will always remain the raizada's doormat, forever his punch bag.
khushi knew that there were 3. things arnav valued most, Di, khushi and office..
khushi can't hurt Di, coz Di is like a sister to her, and khushi is not suicidal so that left the office.
khushi gathered all official papers she cud find in the room.
she then called the admin office of rm and asked them if they have the copy of the papers.
once she received the confirmation , she started collecting other required weapons
plzzz comment and tell me whether u like it or not.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Awesome Story.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I am loving it.
Well done. I so want to see what KHushi does.
Looking forward to the next update.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4


khushi right now just want to hurt arnav not harm him.
she collected all the official papers and kept them in a neat stack. she then collected all his clothes and threw the pile on the bed. next came the shoes, ties, wallet, Bluetooth, his favourite vases, plants and then finally the laptop.
She then went back to the kitchen and brought back a can of gasoline and matchbox.
in her room khushi sat innocently on the bed with all arnav's prized possession surrounding her.
the show was about to begin.
here arnav ran to his room.
Wat he saw left him stupefied.
he cud clearly see khushi sittting on the bed thru the glass door. her neck was bowed. she looked dejected.
the room was a mess. all his possessions were scattered around the room. he tentatively knocked on the door and called out to khushi.
khushi raised her head.
the look in her eyes made fear course thru the mighty ASR. her eyes were red, but she didn't look as if she was crying, she was ready to kill, and ASR seems to be the likely target.
khushi: AAP aa gaye.
arnav: khushi I m sorry, please darwaza kholo..
khushi did not say anything, she just smiled. and for the first time her smile didn't light up her face as usual. instead her eyes became more bright. there was no hint of softness in her face.
for the first time she looked like a vamp
she got up from the bed and going to the switchboard she switched off the lights.
the room was plunged in the darkness

so how was it.
plzz tell me whther I shud continue or not
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
sorry guys
won't be able to pm anybody till monday
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry guys
won't be able to pm anybody till monday
takniqi kharabiyon k kaaran(technical problems)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part5


As the room was plunged into darkness, arnav who till now was standing motionless was jolted into action. he banged his hand against the door and shouted
Arnav: open the door dammit, khushi lights on karo tumhe andhere me darr lagta hai.
khushi's voice wen came was deadly soft but clear.
khushi: ab nahi lagta. ab to roshni se darr lagta hai, pata nahi kab saath chod de.
arnav felt as if a knife was plunged into his heart. he knew that he was the reason behind khushi's sadness. hell he is reason for this gals sufferings.
khushi: aaj hum aapko hamare dard ki jhalak dikhayege. kaisa lagta hai jab sab kuch cheeen jaaye.
there was a sound of striking a match. and a light flickered in the darkness. khushi's face was glowing eerily.
khushi threw the lighted stick.
Arnav's eyes followed the path the stick took. it fell on something which instantly burst into flames.
Upon closer look arnav saw that it was a small pile of papers that were burning. hell it was his official documents that were goin in flames.
arnav : Dammit khushi kya kar rahi ho tum.
khushi: ye hamse humari duniya cheen ne ke liye. aapki wajah se hame Lucknow chodna pada. hamara ghar chooth gaya hamse.
The room was now fully illuminated. khushi now picked up arnav's clothes and threw them on the burning pile.
khushi: ye hame bezzat karne k liye. lucknow me hamari izzzat uchaaal ne k liye.
arnav : bas karo khushi bahot ho gaya. open the door dammit.
khushi ignored arnav and picked up arnav's shoes and threw them on the pile.
khushi:ye hamse badsulukhi karne k liye.
Arnav was shocked, he Cudnt belive his own eyes. is she the same khushi with whom he fell in love with.
khushi then picked up arnav's ties and handkerchief and threw them in the flames.
khushi: ye hamse hamare rishte cheen ne k liye. Aap ki wajah se hum fir anaat ho gaye the
khushi then picked up all arnav's toiletries and threw them in the flames.
khushi: ye hamara vishwas todne k liye. aapki wajah se hamara devi maiyya par se vishwas uth gaya. aapki wajah se hamare insaaniyat par se vishwaas uth gaya.
khushi then picked up arnav's wallets and threw them too
khushi:ye hame hamari har waqt aukaat yaad dilane k liye.
next khushi threw the vases in the flames.
khushi: ye hamare sapne choor choor karne k liye.
khushi then picked up the laptop and threw it into the flames.
khushi: ye hamari zindagi ujaad ne k liye. hamse hamara sab kuch cheen ne k liye.
the room was now full of smoke
arnav was now in the asr mode.
arnav: pagal ho kya khushi.
khushi(shouting):haan haan pagal ho gaye hai ham. pagal the hum jo aapse pyaar kiya. pagal the hum jo aap par vishwaas kiya. pagal hai ham kyunki humne ye socha k kahi na kahi iss asr me arnav chupa hai. pagal hai hum Jo aapko bhool nahi paa rahe. pagal hai hum jo us insaan se jude hue hai jisne kabhi hame dukh k alawa aur kuch diya hi nahi. hamari umeede hamare sapne jisne toda hum abhi bhi uske zindagi me dukh k parchaayi bhi nahi dekh sakte. pagal nahi to kya hai hum..
the room was now fully filled with smoke. khushi's vision was now becoming hazy. she was having trouble breathing.
but inspite of this she was feeling really light almost weightlesss.. it felt right to shout out her feelings.
but soon darkness engulfed her and she lost consciousness

so how was it. shud I write more. please do comment.
Edited by sabby91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz update soon

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