FF:KSR refuse to be with ASR.updated PART4(page 5) - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you all who read and double thanks to everyone who commented and liked my FF.
i am happy that u all liked my story but still somewhere i am a little sad coz my FF is not getting the response the way i thought it will get.there are so many view but still only few comments and like.
i would like to know from everyone whats the element missing in my FF according to you all.i just want to develop my writing skills and if i will get more responses than i can work with more determination..
i appreciate your views and will work upon my writing.

n one request to silent readers please atleast press the like button.

above all i will continue this FF for everyone who liked my FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update! thank God ,she is fine!
Can't wait to read more! Plz update nxt part soon!
Thx for the update & pm:))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART IV-

and khushi slept peacefully in arnav's arms and arnav woke up everytime to check on her and see is she needed anything.

night passed by...but it was still raining...

arnav woke up and went to freshen up and went downstares to talk to the lady who had helped her...
and when he came up he didnt find khushi on the bed.he got worried and went to the hall to search for her
"khushi...??"'

his breath was increasing everytime he called khushi and she didnt answered.and then he felt a sign of relief when he was khushi standiing beside a window with a glasss window pane.her eyes were enjoying the beauty of the beautigul rain drops that were coimg on the glasss pane.her hands were on the window pane.trying to feel the rain.arnav slowly came from behind and put his hand on hers on the window pane.oh it was such a lovely gesture full of love...and said

"thank god khushi you are fine.pleae never do this again.i cant lose you.i will not be able to live without you khushi"

and saying this he gave a sweet kiss on her side of the neck.khushi accepted his kiss.her eyes filled with tears...


arnav slowly slided his hand in her hairs and put the hairs side making her bare back visible to him and he again kissed.tears were rolling down her cheeks now.he turned her to face her.and wiped her tears with his loving hands and kissed her eyes

she was dying now.he was making it more difficult for her to leave him and go.she didnt wanted to go away from him...

he lifted her up in his arms and made his way to the room.and laid her down on the bed
"khushi you are still not perfectly ok.you need to rest..."

"take rest khushi..."
and he kissed her forehead.

she was all he wanted and he was all she wanted but still the circumstances were pulling them apart.god only knew what destiny had in store for them...

arnav had no more power to see teras filled eyes he wnet up to leave but...

khushi held his hand from behind...

"please dont leave me arnavji..."

arnav immediately came close to her putting his other hand on her hand which was holding him...

"no khushi i will never ever leave you.never again i will even think of hurting you.khushi i love you and cant live without pls dont g away from me dont take me away from yourself khushi..i will not be able to live...please khushi..."AND HE WAS CRYING.the mighty ASR was crying today.

khushi got up and hugged him tightly.

"arnavji i also love you.i also cant live without you..."she was crying with happiness.arnav was happy beyond words.it seemed as if time had stood still admiring the beauty of their love...

arnav finally came back to reality and he slowly moved his hands to hug her back.his hands slowly moving over her waist and back and his grip getting more firm but still still his grip had never been so loving.
he didnt wanted to loosen his grip fearing that if he loosened his grip he will again loose her.

khushi moved loosening her grip but arnav said
"khushi please dont leave me.i want to stay like this forever.please let me not wake up from what seems to be like a dream to me..."

they stood like that for sometime but were disturbed by mrs.singh.she had brought breakfast for her.she kept and went away...

arnav took the breakfast plate and feeded khushi...

he moved her finger over the sidelines of her soft lips to remove the stain of the food...oh he wished to kiss those soft and beautiful lips...

and then laid her down again to make her rest...

he made her to sleep... care seeing her face with his hands...and she slowly fell into sleep again because of the fever and the pain in her head...

and arnav sat there just admiring her beauty...



i hope you liked this part also...i am not getting much time because of my hectic schedule so pls appreciate it and give your comments and likes if you liked it...

bye and take care😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was sweet and a romantic update liked it very much. Update soon. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really nice update👏 👍🏼
plz continue sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow! That was a sweet confession!
Thx for the lovely update & pm:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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VERY CUTE PART

LOVED TO SEE THEIR LOVE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats it...she has forgiven him...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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totally loved it
arnav is so caring. thanks for the pm. update soon and please make it a long update please.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey friends i am busy too much today so i will update the next part later in the evening today till then stay tuned😛

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