OS : Just my love (Updated) PART 2

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Part 2.

No, this couldnt be happening, thought arnav. A drop of sweat slipped off his head. He could feel her pain. Shyaam dropped the revolver. NK came running from the other side. And there, stood arnav. He just couldnt believe what just happened. He said to himself 'No..KHUSHIII'. He shouted, crying like a two year old girl. Who just lost her doll. He went running towards khushi and held her. And shyaam was standing just behind him.

Shyaam - I'll..I'll call 911.
Arnav - YOU! Shut up! NK! Call 911, NOW.
Shyaam - Arnav jee dekhiye Khushi jee will be fine.
Arnav - Dont you f**** dare take my wife's name with your mouth!
Khushi - ar..arnav jee.
Arnav - Khush..kh..khushi?! Are you o..
Khushi - Arn..arnav jee. I might not survive this. I just want you to know that i have loved you a lot. I've never loved someone so much. For you? I was ready to give up everything. And.. after all this, you still chose to trust this guy over ME? I thought you loved me as well? You ACTUALLY showed today what kind of a person you are. I guess, its not in my-

And she passed out.

Arnav was in tears, he became speechless. Shes right, how could i do this to her? How, why, WHEN? I didnt even ask her what happened, just WENT ON with my own plans.

NK - Nannav, now is not the time to think. The ambulance is here, lets go!

Shyaam had already disappeared. After all, he was the one who shot her. Obviously he was scared.

Arnav's heart was becoming weak minute by minute. His love was dripping with blood, and had sweat all over her. All because of him.

They reached the hospital and the doctors were taking her inside the operation theater.

Arnav - Doc..doctor. Please let me go inside. I cant leave her alone. Her? I cant stay alone without her. What will i do without her...Oh my god. What happened? NK is this a dream? DREAM? A nightmare right. God whats happening.

He held his hair tight, he regretted each and everything. And there came the flashbacks of EVERYTHING bad he did to her, EVER!

Doctor - Mr Raizada, control yourself. Its just a bullet. She'll survive.

Nk - Nannav, control. I'll call everyone and let them know.

Everyone reached the hospital, and they were very scared. Arnav was surrounded with everyone asking him questions and there came his di.

Di *Crying* - Chottay, look at me. Look at me, everything is gonna be OK. Dont worry.
Arnav - She..she got shot because of me. All because of me. She suffered because of me.

*After 2 hours*

The light of the operation theater went off, everyone was scared. Arnav's heart skipped a beat every minute.
Arnav - Doctor how is she?!?
Doctor - Nothing to worry about Mr. Raizada. She's perfectly fine. She's taking a rest at the moment. You can see her when she's up.

To be cntd. Stay tuned for loads of rabba ve's! And please leave your suggestions down with what kind of rabba ve's y'all want. I'll try to fit them somewhere. Thank you. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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update soon
and pm me when you update please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update! I really liked the emotion from Arnav.. Keep writing! For a rabba ve, you might want to include a scene where Khushi is unconscious and Arnav hold her hand with tears flowing from his eyes... Just a thought :)
Edited by arnavandkhushi1 - 13 years ago
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Glad Khushi is fine now x loved the way u described Arnav's emotions :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice os. Please do carry on.
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awsome plzzz continuee ..thnkooo...wait ur update
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Please update soon and send a PM!

Thanks =D
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I am loving this *rubs hands together*
Awesome Update
Thx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you everyone for ALL your sweet comments! And i've continued my OS. Here's the link to Part 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3066991/os-just-my-love-part-3-updated

And if you're a true arshi lover, please join us on facebook! www.facebook.com/ipkknd2027
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Felt nice after reading the 2nd part !!

And I guess since you're bringing on the RVs, I'll hang around some more over here !!

So can you PM me next time u update ?? Pitty please !

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