OS: Bhare more naina - Page 4

Originally posted by: pakpearl

So melancholic piece of writing...d present track of IPKKND is affecting d innocent minds n loving hearts of my twins😕...first it was Fary with her heart wrenching osher favourite lie.. n it's youwith bhare more naina😭...but one thing appreciate very much...Khushi has lost her lovelife but not her SELFRESPECT !!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awe my "..."😆( You can fill the space with our group ke famous words ) it was very nice and as I had a fight with someone yesterday😡😡 Bhare naine has become my fav song in playlist and it was nice and made me feel like the way Khushi felt🥺💔(My broken heart) except the last part about shyam and to forget him but the song and the way u used it was very nice👏👏

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

I wanted to be on the 1st pg! *pouts* Chalo... not my fault that you wrote such an awesome piece that all the good places got taken 😊

OMG!! Munazza, did you write this?? Did you actually write this?? I have a hard time believing cos you're such a cheerful person, always cracking jokes and you wrote this sad and heartbreaking brilliant piece of writing?! I'm amazed! 😊

That was sooo emotional and touching!! The way you've penned it down... ufff! I'm totally speechless! The emotions are sooo well described! The conflict in her mind... Everything was AMAZING!! Kudos to you for writing this one! 👏 I totally LOVED it!! ❤️

And Ooohhh! Can you continue this one?? I mean seriously think about it! This is such an Awesome start... You should definitely continue this or else you'll have to speak to my chain saw 🤣 (i'll have to burrow yours tho, don't have one of my own😆)

Originally posted by: basket_101

AWWW!!!

That was seriously beautiful!!!! LOVED the way you depicted Khushi's emotions!!

And plus, that was a perfect combination of story-song

Awesomeee job di =D <3 <3

Take careee

Loveee youu =D

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii

awesome os

loved it

poor khushi

but glad she is strong

thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: amritafan

beautiful

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome well written the song was the guide and her feeling were the music awesome os well written very emotional beautifully done thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Sorry Munazza! Now Its my turn to spam your thread 🤣

That was soo beautiful!!!i could feel khushi's battle with her heart...the battle that she keeps on losing no matter how hard she tries because the bond that she shares with arnav is just too strong to break...

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

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I myself was surprised I could write such rone dhone wala OS...Coz I've always maintained humour n comedy are my forte...But know what? I got inspired to write this after u wrote ur OS...I got the idea that day itself, but was just delaying it😆

So u write, n then who knows? Meri batti jali to even I'll write some

You want me to continue??? Ah haan? You know..."I'm just too sad to continue this"

Rings a bell?😉Convince me..coz my chainsaw isnt free to be borrowed...its got many takers..u r in line babes😆

Buhahaha 🤣 Bohat taiz ho gae ho tum!! 😆 where is the masoom Ashum I know? And what have you done to her?? You impostor! 🤣

Yes, You always write comedy so I was really surprised to see this and wo bi itna intense! Ufff 😉 And I think writing sad stuff is easier bus saray gillay sikhway sunnanay beth jao and the OS is ready 🤣 atleast I wrote mine that way... Yours look like you've put in effort 😳

Hahaha! Yes It does actually ring a bell... Don't know where I've heard it before 😉 but actually I'm seriously thinking about converting that OS into an FF cos so many ppl asked me to continue and I already have an idea of FF in mind so I'll just have to bring that one on the track... Not pakka tho! 1 SS sambhala ja nai ra and thinking about an FF! 🤣