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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

before the promo aired where Khushi finds passport and boarding pass of Arnav with Shyam .. I also had this crazy idea that Akash could be the one behind all this cause that would give the story an immense turn...

coming back to the OS : this was wonderful... great work as always 😃 👏

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

wow loved you twist in this.. thanks for the pm this was way too good :D

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Zaynah

@Zaya.Beintehaa

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

WHAT THE

AKASH LOOOL

BUT I DONT WANT IT TO BE

HIM

I HEARD ABOUT HIS TWEET

BUT I DONT THINK SO

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

interesting
not surprised that this was the outcome regarding akash after all it cant be easy living in arnav's shadow
but poor payal though

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

WOW AKASH SO DIFFERENT NICE

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

👏👏thanks...great job...loved it...👏👏

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660889

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

👏 love it what more can i say ty for the pm

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sidhu285

@sidhu285

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Disha Really Good ..What A Unique ideas u Come Across..Loved it

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Kay Dee

@PollyTrolly

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

OMG! I can't, I just can't imagine Akaash as a bad guy!!

But very well written.. 👏

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Nice OS !!!

Do PM if you update 😊

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