OS: The Jealous Disclosure (Intense)

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@coldy07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

That was nice. Actually makes sense. Akash has always been sidelined and overshadowed by Arnav.

Jealousy and inferiority complex can drive you nuts and lead to heinous crimes. Felt bad for Arnav. 😭

I wish you continue with this ! 😊Good one!👍🏼

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onetwothree

@onetwothree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Splendid update...🤗🤗..Akash is d kidnapper..😕😲😲..great twist..👍🏼...wonderful storyline..😊😃

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Oh no akaash ! Lmfao if its actually him on the show it would be so awesome!!

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Tara

@-Smiles-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Disha!!

🤗

Wow!!

Amazing twist!!

AKASH IS THE KIDNAPPER!!
Wow..

I love it!!

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Amazing!!! Loved it imagine if the kidnapper does turn out to be Akash xD

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

The frustration in Akash nicely portrayed. Loved your take on the kidnapper and his motives! :)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

OMG!! Akash of everyone.. 😲

Nicely written..

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azizeh123

@azizeh123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Now my question is how Mami would handle it? Or she is going to support his son????? Or she is in it too. I don't think so.

I could see Aakash motive as a jealous cousin. My God what will happen, if this is the twist!!!!!! Also I saw the promo Khushi found the passport drop by Shyam. Is Shyam is with Aakash too. What a twist will be!!!!!! But one thing for sure now ASR will be hurt and now he will be close to Khushi and might be they will move to Gupta's home and they will have lots of Rabave as he is already use to that home and from there he will raise up with love and affection of Gupta's family and show Aakash & Shyam, that the empire is due to him ASR. Might be lot of hardship but he is ASR and is a winner, but this time with the love of Khushi next to him, her strength!!!!!

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gowri1712

@gowri1712

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: cherry...
Akash! 😲😡 that was a great OS!
that is good idea for akash😆
very well written Disha! it was intense and really good.
awesome as always🤗

awesome!!!!