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Posted: 13 years ago
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Warning: This is a very dark OS. Faint hearted people should not continue at any cost. Trust me on this.

If you want a light read then click here: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2993048/os-love-prevails

or here https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2


Wicked Obsession

I love you, that's what he had said to Khushi. How dare he. He would pay; he would make sure of it. He would pay for everything he had done. He would pay with his life. He had stolen his Khushi ji from him. He still remembered that day when he had first met Khushi ji. When he had saved her, he had given his heart to her. His love had slowly turned into his obsession. He had never even realized but one day when he had felt he was losing Khushi ji, he had realized that he would do anything for her...that he would kill to have her. He could kill his own child if he had to. But what had Khushi ji done. I love you too, Khushi ji had replied back to sale sahib on the phone. What hadn't he done for her and yet this is how she had repaid him. He could not tolerate it. She would have to pay too. He loved her, yes, but he could not tolerate her loving anyone else. He would be the only man in her life. He will be the only man to look at her the way sale sahib now looks at her. He will be the only man who will touch her, who will hold her, who will kiss her, who will make love to her.

When Shyam had realized that everyone had found out about sale sahib missing, he had panicked. He knew they would call the police at any moment. So, he had left the emotional fool to weep and he had called the man he had hired to kidnap sale sahib. He had instructed the kidnapper to let sale sahib call home but to shot sale sahib if he said anything about his kidnapping. Sale sahib hadn't said anything criminating, but he had told his Khushi ji that he loved her. He would take pleasure in torturing him before killing him. Oh, he would so take pleasure. The man dared to take what belonged to him. That would not do. He had thought that once sale sahib signed the papers he would put a bullet in his head. But now he had other plans. Plans that included torture.

Sale sahib will have to call Khushi ji and tell her that he did not mean the I love you. He would have to make up some story to explain it to her. He will force Arnav to say something so awful that Khushi ji will hate him. Then she will realize that sale sahib was never meant to be with her, and she will finally see me. She will come back to me. If sale sahib refused then he will certainly torture him, or he might do it either way. He would get so much pleasure. He would water board arnav. He would put him in the interrogation chair. He would rip his skin with a lash. He would take pleasure in torturing him. Afterall he had stolen his Khushi ji away from him. If it hadn't been for arnav his stupid sister, Khushi ji would be his by now.


God I cant write anymore. This was exhausting. I wanted to get into Shyam's mind. I wanted to explore the dark side. I wanted something really challenging to write. Well, this certainly was very challenging. I feel like I need to cleanse my head now. Shyam's head is a twisted place to be in. I actually went and researched torture devices for this OS. Goddd...a shudder ran through me when I read the information about some of the torture devices. Need cleansing!!!! Gonna go watch friends and try to shake it off.

Please comment and let me know what you think...it was pretty hard to write this so let me know if I succeeded in portraying Shyam's twisted mind. Also let me know if I should finish it or not.

Add me as a buddy if you want pm's. 😃

Here's part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2994510/dark-os-wicked-obsession-part-2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg...totally wicked...the shyam in ur story makes me want to enter my laptop and kill him...please continue and give shyam a slow painful death by the end of the story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os very nice getting in to that pervert head well written disturbingly well done

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I always wanted to know what goes on in Shyam's head and now I know and it's even creepier than I thought. THANK YOU for the PM!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dillmillgayye

Wow. Thanks for giving us an insight into the devil himself, that too very accurately and convincingly 👏


thank you 😳
It actually took a lot of hard word to write this particular OS even though it was the shortest one I have ever written. It might be because I wrote it at 2 am or because of the dark subject.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

awesome os very nice getting in to that pervert head well written disturbingly well done



🤣🤣🤣
Where did you get this picture??? 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was awesome!!!!😊
It was good to see Shyam's reaction to the I Love You as well.
Please update fast!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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torture devices! wow! i dont think i can take that *faints*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FINISHHH Pleashhh 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome post...i wonder how u can write sooo perfectly...😛
i hate that creepwas thoughts...😵
n thanks for the PM...🤗

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