Dark OS- Wicked Obsession part 2

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Warning: This is a very dark OS. Faint hearted people should not continue at any cost. Trust me on this.

Here's part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2993364/dark-os-wicked-obsession

Wicked Obsession

Shyam woke up the next morning to the sound of that idiot's voice. "Breakfast is ready, aap tayar hoke niche aajaiye," the brainless moron said. God he could not stand her. He had married her just for her money. He had been broke a few years back and then one day he had run into Anjali Raizada and he had seen a solution to all his problems. He had found the key to the treasure box. His cloud had at last gained a silver lining. He had seduced her, made her fall in love with him. She had become so blinded that she never even suspected that he might be doing this for just her money. But there was a price he had to pay. He had to put up with her day and night. She would never leave him along. She was clingy, and completely dependent on others. And her poojas, he wished he could throw the thali in her face. She was truly a sad and pathetic woman. She actually thought that he loved her. How could he love her? How could any man love her?

When would the day come when he woke up to Khushi ji's voice, when he woke up to her laughter...when he woke up in her arms. It will happen. He would make it happen. Khushi ji, what must she be doing. He had to see her right now. For the past few months, sale sahib hadn't let him even near her. He had longed for her. And now that he had kidnapped sale sahib, he could do as he pleased. So he snuck into Khushi ji's room. The time would come when it would be our room. He and Khushi ji would live together in this big mansion. He only had to wait until sale sahib signed those damn papers, so he could kill him. Then sale sahib's everything would be his...his money, his house, his company, his wife would all be his. The last one he would enjoy forever.

Khushi ji's back was facing him. He slowly snuck up on her and engulfed her in a hug. Khushi ji squirmed. Oh how he loved that sound. How he loved her every sound. "How dare you. How dare you touch me. How dare you enter my room," Khushi ji said in a burst of anger. "Khushi ji I was missing you. I woke up and you were my first thought. So I came to see what you were doing. Besides what does it matter, you will soon be mine," he told her matter of factly.

"Get out before I scream," Khushi ji said. "Fine, I will leave for now, but don't worry darling you will see me soon," he saw her stiffen at that. She looked scared. He didn't like scaring her, he really didn't. But she had given him no choice. What could he do when she choose to love that arnav. She hadnt given him another choice. By hook or crook he would have her.

He left her room and went back to his to get dressed.

Just then he got a phone call, it was the kidnapper.


So here's part 2. I think there will probably be one more part.

Sorry they are a bit short...it just takes me a while to write from Shyam's POV. So, did I do justice to Shyam's creepiness..did I portray him well? 😕

Please comment/like. Let me know if you liked it or if you hated it.

Add me as a buddy if you pm's.

P.S. This is totally random but I watched equilibrium this morning. If anyone is bored and needs something to watch, it was pretty good. Christian Bale was awesome. 😃

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CDlove thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome 2nd part! ewww that evil monster hugged her again 🤢 Hate him!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shyam POV... It felt creepy and poor Anjali... That poor woman! She is so devoted to him and that creep is after khushi... Hope there would be an end for that shameless creep! Thank you for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one! 😊

shyam = pathetic creep! 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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eww,,,he hugged her...not another terrace scene plz...🤢awesome post..loved it...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really gud! you should defiantly continue! xxx 👏
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snake is so sick in his mind he is always right and everyone one wrong awesome update well written
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that was an awesome update well done.. thanks for the PM :D
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Nish!

That's a good update...keep going. 👏
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Nisha, thank you for the pm... yes, you've really caught shyam's creepy crawly nature 🤢! just reading it makes me feel like I've fallen into some slimy ooze... just imagine what khushi must be feeling like having him hug her 🤢! still, can't wait for the update

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