OS : Give Hope A Chance - part 5 updated on pg 10

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randomiesta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: blore94-chennai
very interesting... brillnt..!
firstly .. i like the way u described kushi (mission Arnavji)

secondly ... the dumbstuck aman... lol... 😆 [imagining KKGSR ... as ASR... ("NOW" ) come bck frm ur thOughts aman ]

amazing... 👍🏼

Thanks so much :) off topic but i have to say i love your display pic :)

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soniyahkhan

@soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Brilliant OS, Randomiesta!!! 😊Well done, i really liked the track of ur story plus u wrute very well! Superb characterisation of Khushi!!! I'd love to read all of it! Well done and thanks for the pm!

I hardly read any OS's or SS's or FF's cuz of the workload, but im glad i opened ur pm and visited the thread!

Thanks alot!

SUGGESTION: Kindly, add the link to ur next part at the end of the previous part for convenience purposes. e.g. link of Part 2 at the end of Part1.

Similarly post links of all updates below the first part.

e.g.

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Edited by soniyahkhan - 13 years ago

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randomiesta

@randomiesta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: soniyahkhan
<font color="#0000ff">Brilliant OS, Randomiesta!!!
</div>😊Well done, i really liked the track of ur story plus u wrute very well! Superb characterisation of Khushi!!!
I'd love to read all of it!

Well done and thanks for the pm!

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I hardly read any OS's or SS's or FF's cuz of the workload, but im glad i opened ur pm and visited the thread!

Thanks alot!

SUGGESTION: Kindly, add the link to ur nextpart at the end of the previous partfor convenience purposes.e.g. link of Part 2 at the end of Part1.

</strong>

<strong>Similarly post links of all updatesbelow the first part.

e.g.

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

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Thanks so much!! i feel honoured that this coming from someone who writes so well...I'm. really glad you took time off to read my OS and i hope it will live up to your expectations...thanks for your suggestion...i actually tried to post a link..but it didnt allow me too since im still a newbie...but i will do that asap...there is already an index below the first part...thanks again :)

Edited by randomiesta - 13 years ago

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

continue soon,its awesomee 😛

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I just now came across ur OS and read both the parts at one go. LOVED IT!
Can u plz continue. I really want to know which direction this takes. Can u PM me whenever u update?

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Chapter 1

Khushi's thoughts and appraisal of her own self nicely put and also the very KKG like hope for one chance. :)

Chapter 2

Her calmness yet firmness comes across very well. Good job.

Just one thing - Be sure to provide an index for people to find it easier to go back and forth... :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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randomiesta

@randomiesta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Chapter 1
Khushi's thoughts and appraisal of her own self nicely put and also the very KKG like hope for one chance. :)

Chapter 2
Her calmness yet firmness comes across very well. Good job.

Just one thing - Be sure to provide an index for people to find it easier to go back and forth... :)

Hey Thanks so much :) It really means a lot coming from you :) so about the index...there is already one at the end of the first part...I've also posted the links for the first part in the beginning of part 2...i tried to earlier but I couldn't cause i didn't have enough posts.

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randomiesta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: swati-89
I just now came across ur OS and read both the parts at one go. LOVED IT!
Can u plz continue. I really want to know which direction this takes. Can u PM me whenever u update?

Thanks a lot :) I sent you a buddy request, please accept it if you want to receive PMs.