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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mistyrains
I really hope when he returns, we can have something like this on the show.

Coming to the OS, it was beautiful, as usual. I like how this was written in Arnav's POV. The realization and everything else he was going through has been wonderfully described.

I loved the lines about him lying and her speaking the truth, towards the end.

Great job. Now go update 'You are not...', please? 😃

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked it!

And about YNTOO...that may be updated later tonight but the update to "Finally!" is coming up! :D

And that reminds me...CW and/or ROA? :D

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mali

@mali

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

that was very well written and so beautiful. I love how you described their hug. I could picture it in my head. Thank you.

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

nice reunion...hope it happens on the show...

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

would love to see this on screen...😍

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

heya rae..

that was awesome..

brilliantly written..

i so wish this happens in the show..

many thanks for the pm..:)

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

wow just loved it

i know his feeling will be exactly like this if this kidnap plan is of his only

very well written

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tata_tata

@tata_tata

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Nooo no... no... what the... it ended before it started.. dont you think we deserve to hear more.. what happened where did he go.. what did he lie.. aaa...

ok.. now i will calm down..

well written AT..i am sooo badlllyyy hoping that he has gone out of his own will.. and i hope he comes back soon.. the writers have a new twist ready and then we can see some amazing scenes... carrot.. i am giving myself a carrot to sustain these 10 days of complete bakwaas.. till then.. you please keep writing AT.. forget exams ok.. if you are half as smart as you come across with your writing, you'll pass easily!!!!!

PS: and i loveee how you describe Khushi as a something soft :D