You put your arms around me ArHi OS SequelUP!

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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Count of words don't matter when the words written touches your heart:D

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Alia

@.A.l.i.a.

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

this was just awesome ..
Although it short but it deliver tremendous amount of emotions ..
love it 😍

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

If we are lucky we might just get a scene like this in front of the whole family! Oh how wonderful that would be, a tight hug to reassure their feelings😍
Loved it!😊

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

loved the os very emotional beautifully done perfectly felt loved the emotions loved the hug not caring of who was watching and was not loved it he lied hope she does not leave him after she know the truth loved it thanks for the pm

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Beautiful Rae, just beautiful. Very articulate, neither of them did not needed to utter a single word. It was all conveyed through their actions. Love actually speaks from/through the heart. You continuously surprise me😃.

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Oh my god. That was so beautifully written, that you had me completely captivated from the first word till the last!

I could visualise the entire thing take place, and you took my breath away with the intensity of the drabble.

Seriously, this was amazing!

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

That was nice but hopefully it doesn't happen on the serial I mean Arnav planning his own kidnapping bcoz if that happen than Khushi will lost faith in Arnav but your OS was nice & I liked it.

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hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

AAAH !

you certainly read my mind, missy ! I have been imagining such a scene in my head once Arnav comes back and Khushi's reaction ...

This could've not been any better ! The emotions inner and outer emitted from both, the desperation, the longing ache, the realization from Arnav's pov and the forever pure love from Khushi..

LOVED it to the core ! wished it was longer.