Arshi OS: Firstmarks & Fantasies - Page 2

superb os...
i enjoyed reading it...

thanks 4 d pm

i totally loved this...i am still in a dreamy state..😍

AMAZING...LOVED IT🤗

Loved it Di...
u r superb...😊
Arnav nd Khushi r so cute...
Well done...👍🏼

nice one...

fantastic work, great writing style.
loved this new angle.
thanks for the update and PM.😊

Wow...
Just wow; so sweet.
Loved it. M speechless, i liked it so much that i can't even describe it. Surely u owe a wow..

Updated my reserved spot. Sorry for being so late! :)

swati :)

Originally posted by: swatzz

Reserved. :)

*Edited*

I saw your post the other day, I was sure it would be too good. I am so bad, I know. Reserving the first spot and then not commenting for so long. Sorry! I had exams in my way that I couldn't get out of. Had the last one today and I couldn't miss reading this after a long sleep of 12 hours. Enough of my blabbering. Getting back to the OS, I loved it! amazing! So different, so fresh!

I am in awe of the name you chose for her diary and all the related entries to first-marks. superb! By the time I got to Arnav's POV, I was hoping you would continue with her diary entries but Arnav's POV more than made up for it. He was so besotted by her from the first meeting itself! The way you portrayed Arnav was all too cute and too good.

I have something else to say, the reason I reserved the first place at a super fast speed was because when I saw your name, I just remembered some of your stories on Dill Mill Gayye and everyone knows how good they were. I didn't have the time to read the entire OS then but getting a first place for comments for your story was a special opportunity, you know. So I had to reserve it. so sorry for being so late.

I hope you write more about them. I am writing something myself now that I am free. Would love to read something more!

Great OS!

Swati :)

thanku so much swati first for liking my work and for the honor, to reserve without reading, thinking it will be something good...glad to know that you have that faith in my writing😳 i m really so touched with the words yara

hope your exams went fine...wish you best of luck for your coming result that it will be great👍🏼

first i thought to write the whole OS with Khushi POV but later i thought that may be arnav's POV will give it a new side and am glad that you guys liked it😃 thanku so much for liking once again
😃

Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101

AMAZING!!!! yaar i loved it, they're so cute! :)

thanku sooomuch dear🤗

Originally posted by: Usma55

Loved it

thanku so much usma😃😳

Originally posted by: morning_star

i absolutely adored it...u have a natural flair for writing...ur diary entries were amazing,...and ur one shot was tooo goood...loved it...

thanku dear for liking and appreciating my little effort😳 so glad you loved it dear😃