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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Love your reduxes! Waiting for the update..
I might give it a try too 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: payasa

Brilliant episode in all and all...how eagerly I was waiting for such thrilling encounter filled with...

Love...anger... greed... betrayal...

web of deceit.. Slowly getting denser and denser...

Its not the ego, its not the self respect for which she wants to prove herself clean...its for ,she doent want to be fallen in the eyes of the man she loves the most...her helplessness...her pain...her concern for arnav...overtaking her..

Excellent SI... loving her all over again...

Ditto on all your points! Loved it. Especially the @blue one. SI was rocking for the last two episodes. Did you observe a slight change in the way she speaks? Her tone of speech has changed! It is as if her voice is hollow. SI is seriously awesome in depicting a khushi whose soul got shattered! There is sadness this girl invokes in me even with out a tear! Well done SI for the last few episodes.


Originally posted by: Arhimaniac

yes the repeated FB of anaconda adorned by khushi..matlab khushi in snakes arms...

My prediction: The papers he has received might or might not be Shyam's doing...sign or not sign ...pata nahin ASR will see Khushi and Shyam talking in his cabin and misunderstand the situation again...He will leave from there..
Khushi runs after him as shown in SBS yesterday saying aap ghalat samajh rahen hain...he goes away and then plans for London to renovate the new plant...


You really cracked me up here 😆...anaconda... LOL

Another MU in store? What the!!! What suits best for a man who likes to close his eyes and be in dark when the sunshine is right outside his window? Sometimes I feel that, this fella is using his Dark past as an excuse to escape from reality, as an excuse to shut himself from more pain and agony of truth! Just have one thing to say... Move on buddy...

Originally posted by: ArHi_4ever

R


Arnavji, this 'pagal' is going to change your definition of life, trust and relationships. There is no purer soul, no purer heart than what you have been blessed with in the guise of Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada. She is going to heal your wounds, renew your faith and give you the hope to live, dream, dare and believe.


My Note: This is my first indepth analysis on the Redux. Hope you like it. I am not as good as Tanthya, Doods, Anna or Nia but just gave it a shot 😉


Haaa... awesome and sweet analysis. Loved it to bits.
I loved the way you defined the pagal called KKG 🤗. Do write tomorrow as well.
Btw.. what do i call you?
Edited by sree07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Shwetha!

Edit:

New Diet in Town: IPK Diet

Makes you invariably eat your own words the next night between 8 -8.30 pm on Weekdays and the odd ME days. Those on this diet, do not seem to complain though.😆

Side Effects of IPK Diet include:

Jumping to conclusions, Not fully hearing, seeing the bigger picture and raising own Blood Pressure and of course Misunderstanding sometimes justifiably so.

Takeaway from the episode.

Thank you For starting the process of resurrecting Khushi and in keeping with the IPL season, throwing an exceptional and often rare Googly.👏

Now is a wonderful opportunity to use your supporting cast really well.

We saw a glimpse of that with the awesome Buaji and Mamiji scene.

Both have immense love and concern for Bitwa hence the quick phone call by Mami to Bua to figure out what is wrong and Buaji's retort.👏

Please show Buaji & Mamiji united when Bitwa goes missing and Shyam's truth come out both fighting for Anjali and Khushi.👍🏼

Arnav Thinking is always a good sign and nice to see the usually reclusive Arnav who works in his room alone working in the presence of everyone (GH hangover perhaps?)

The dhaaga dialogue👏

It is neither cute nor funny the whole Bubbly-Payash triangle, Can you plz handle it better.

Pointers:

1. Since When did Akash become so impatient with Payaland is not letting her speak?

Doesn't gel with Akash's character unless Arnav has confided in Akash about Shyam and Akash is bit furious with Payal for not telling him earlier?

2. It would be RIDICULOUS if Shyam takes over the property yada yada *yawn*.

Arnav Singh Raizada would have made sure that Shyam does not get anything ever, by transferring the entire property in Akash's name and even if he signs anything over to Shyam it would mean Zilch cos ASR does not own anything.

I know the trend of this show whenever something gets over-hyped it is a red herring, but Think CVs think, It is okay if ASR is unable to think clearly in the matters of the heart, when it comes to his business and the well being of his family, ASR would be extremely shrewd and ensure his Di and his family does not face any hardships.

3. Decide if Anjali is pregnant or not. A woman who is 6 months pregnant is supposed to have 6 months tummy and not 6 pack abs.

Gul & 4 Lions Story suggestion (You did ask for it😆)

May:

Arnav come back towards the end realizes Shyam was the culprit, Khushi was right.

Till then Give us the strong willed Khushi we love and do your exceptionally talented supporting cast justice and lay the ground work for their characters for the war ahead.

Bring Payal in the picture either this month or next month vis a vis Shyam.

June:

Keep it happy, Confession, Apologies from both ends from Arnav for every hurt he has caused her and from khushi conceding that he is not always wrong just as she is not always right .

Make it spectacular, let Arhi bond in June, Let them Talk to each other, about each other and about what to do ahead. TEAM ARHI.

Remember ASR with a dash of Arnav and Khushi minus OTT comedy will always work.


Shyam notices everything gets more desperate and slowly tries to create distance between Anjali and Arnav.

July:

Akash comes to know the truth if he does not already..

Payash have an argument over this with Arnav stepping in and diffusing the tension.

Brainstorming session at the Guptas on what to do with decision being taken that Akash will pretend that he does not know a thing and Payash keeping an eye on Khushi and Anjali while Awesome Foursome figure out a way to tackle Shyam.


August:

Rest of the Raizada family come to know the truth about Shyam while Anjali starts suspecting something is wrong.

Confrontation, Teej is supposed to be around August or something right, so for the emotional audience, truth comes out about Shyam around Teej.

September:

War Begins

First round Shyam succeeds in manipulating and isolating Anjali from the rest of the family.

Tension between Anjali and Arhi till Khushi decides to leave.

Shyam gloats completely underestimating Anjali and her love for her bro & her family.

October:

Anjali has her Menthos moment. connects the dots and lies Shyam has been telling her, realizes Shyam is a scumbag and throws him out around Navaratri taking the Durga Maiyya Avatar.

November

After that either end the show or show Anjali however heartbroken rebuilds her life slowly and steadily. (
Rishta Nayi Soch Nayi Remember?)

If need be introduce some guy for her, a psychiatrist, every character needs one anyway, so all good.😆

Want more ideas, Read the Most Important section listed below.😳

And Decide:

About Anjali's baby,

When will Babuji get well and expose Shyam to Anjali,

If Arnav will ever come to know Khushi pawned off her bangles

Khushi finding Arnav's Mom's letter preferably when he is missing that will be a good moment,

NK has he finished meeting the relatives,

Are you going to let Payash adopt Bubbly or will Anjali do the honors or even better figure something good for Bubbly,

Explain why only people with Prakash as surname work for the Raizadas etc. etc..😆

Most Important

Watch your own show this weekend the starting episodes, reconnect with the characters you have created and have completely lost the touch with your characters, your own show and your vision.

You will not be looking for ideas then to take your own show forward.

Ensure People tune in for your next show and not shun it saying 4 Lions start with a Bang and end with a whimper.




Too Good Shwetha!!!!⭐️⭐️ClapClapClap
Pure Dhamaka!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: mommamia

Lord knows
Dreams are hard to follow
But don't let anyone
Tear them away
Hold on
There will be tomorrow
In time
You'll find the way!!


👏👏👏👏 Apt for khushi more than arnav?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sree07


👏 Apt for khushi more than arnav?

The thing is Arnav is in a different plane right now... He is too confused. He loves her beyond this world no doubt..But his Di comes first. So for him his duty will be his hero and that will guide... For Khushi nothing right.. She has to look inside for that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: mommamia

The thing is Arnav is in a different plane right now... He is too confused. He loves her beyond this world no doubt..But his Di comes first. So for him his duty will be his hero and that will guide... For Khushi nothing right.. She has to look inside for that...


When I read it...arnav and khushi. these are the two characters came into my mind.. Payal did not strike the cord with me. Ya.. when I think about it, khushi is still not yet in the same emotional level or complexity as arnav. May be she will never reach that the same intensity as him because of her shallow nature!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: mommamia

Bush,

awesome!! Arnav should start questioning himself.. why on earth Khushi and Shyam will come to his office to have their moments...


Thanks sandy...I am glad keh yeh wala style of writing bhi pasand aaya...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
updated on pg 6
Edited by Arhi_forever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Shwetha!

Edit:

New Diet in Town: IPK Diet

Makes you invariably eat your own words the next night between 8 -8.30 pm on Weekdays and the odd ME days. Those on this diet, do not seem to complain though.😆

Side Effects of IPK Diet include:

Jumping to conclusions, Not fully hearing, seeing the bigger picture and raising own Blood Pressure and of course Misunderstanding sometimes justifiably so.

Takeaway from the episode.

Thank you For starting the process of resurrecting Khushi and in keeping with the IPL season, throwing an exceptional and often rare Googly.👏

Now is a wonderful opportunity to use your supporting cast really well.

We saw a glimpse of that with the awesome Buaji and Mamiji scene.

Both have immense love and concern for Bitwa hence the quick phone call by Mami to Bua to figure out what is wrong and Buaji's retort.👏

Please show Buaji & Mamiji united when Bitwa goes missing and Shyam's truth come out both fighting for Anjali and Khushi.👍🏼

Arnav Thinking is always a good sign and nice to see the usually reclusive Arnav who works in his room alone working in the presence of everyone (GH hangover perhaps?)

The dhaaga dialogue👏

It is neither cute nor funny the whole Bubbly-Payash triangle, Can you plz handle it better.

Pointers:

1. Since When did Akash become so impatient with Payaland is not letting her speak?

Doesn't gel with Akash's character unless Arnav has confided in Akash about Shyam and Akash is bit furious with Payal for not telling him earlier?

2. It would be RIDICULOUS if Shyam takes over the property yada yada *yawn*.

Arnav Singh Raizada would have made sure that Shyam does not get anything ever, by transferring the entire property in Akash's name and even if he signs anything over to Shyam it would mean Zilch cos ASR does not own anything.

I know the trend of this show whenever something gets over-hyped it is a red herring, but Think CVs think, It is okay if ASR is unable to think clearly in the matters of the heart, when it comes to his business and the well being of his family, ASR would be extremely shrewd and ensure his Di and his family does not face any hardships.

3. Decide if Anjali is pregnant or not. A woman who is 6 months pregnant is supposed to have 6 months tummy and not 6 pack abs.

Gul & 4 Lions Story suggestion (You did ask for it😆)

May:

Arnav come back towards the end realizes Shyam was the culprit, Khushi was right.

Till then Give us the strong willed Khushi we love and do your exceptionally talented supporting cast justice and lay the ground work for their characters for the war ahead.

Bring Payal in the picture either this month or next month vis a vis Shyam.

June:

Keep it happy, Confession, Apologies from both ends from Arnav for every hurt he has caused her and from khushi conceding that he is not always wrong just as she is not always right .

Make it spectacular, let Arhi bond in June, Let them Talk to each other, about each other and about what to do ahead. TEAM ARHI.

Remember ASR with a dash of Arnav and Khushi minus OTT comedy will always work.


Shyam notices everything gets more desperate and slowly tries to create distance between Anjali and Arnav.

July:

Akash comes to know the truth if he does not already..

Payash have an argument over this with Arnav stepping in and diffusing the tension.

Brainstorming session at the Guptas on what to do with decision being taken that Akash will pretend that he does not know a thing and Payash keeping an eye on Khushi and Anjali while Awesome Foursome figure out a way to tackle Shyam.


August:

Rest of the Raizada family come to know the truth about Shyam while Anjali starts suspecting something is wrong.

Confrontation, Teej is supposed to be around August or something right, so for the emotional audience, truth comes out about Shyam around Teej.

September:

War Begins

First round Shyam succeeds in manipulating and isolating Anjali from the rest of the family.

Tension between Anjali and Arhi till Khushi decides to leave.

Shyam gloats completely underestimating Anjali and her love for her bro & her family.

October:

Anjali has her Menthos moment. connects the dots and lies Shyam has been telling her, realizes Shyam is a scumbag and throws him out around Navaratri taking the Durga Maiyya Avatar.

November

After that either end the show or show Anjali however heartbroken rebuilds her life slowly and steadily. (
Rishta Nayi Soch Nayi Remember?)

If need be introduce some guy for her, a psychiatrist, every character needs one anyway, so all good.😆

Want more ideas, Read the Most Important section listed below.😳

And Decide:

About Anjali's baby,

When will Babuji get well and expose Shyam to Anjali,

If Arnav will ever come to know Khushi pawned off her bangles

Khushi finding Arnav's Mom's letter preferably when he is missing that will be a good moment,

NK has he finished meeting the relatives,

Are you going to let Payash adopt Bubbly or will Anjali do the honors or even better figure something good for Bubbly,

Explain why only people with Prakash as surname work for the Raizadas etc. etc..😆

Most Important

Watch your own show this weekend the starting episodes, reconnect with the characters you have created and have completely lost the touch with your characters, your own show and your vision.

You will not be looking for ideas then to take your own show forward.

Ensure People tune in for your next show and not shun it saying 4 Lions start with a Bang and end with a whimper.





Sweths...wah wah wowzer...what a post...👏

Totally agree...we have lots of thoughts in common today...
pointers, decide future track suggestions and Most important sections rock...super post today 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sree07


You really cracked me up here 😆...anaconda... LOL

Another MU in store? What the!!! What suits best for a man who likes to close his eyes and be in dark when the sunshine is right outside his window? Sometimes I feel that, this fella is using his Dark past as an excuse to escape from reality, as an excuse to shut himself from more pain and agony of truth! Just have one thing to say... Move on buddy...


😆...he always reminds me of one...

Yaar its my prediction and they are usually wrong...so don't worry...😆

I thought aaj zara apne style main post banaon...didn't feel like a heavy post...episodes main bohat maal masala tha...so tried a lighter version my style...hope everyone likes it...😃

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