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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my dear...

come near me...

release me from this intense suffering...

let me sleep peacefully in ur arms...

oh my dear...death angel...come near me...

tears rolled down her cheeks...when she saw those words in his son's diary...she could not control herself...with each passing second...her confidence is going down...her son's suffering...making her weak...

she knew that her son is not going to recover...but still she stood bravely...for the sake of her husband...who loved them more than his life...if he comes to know about his son's illness..he will die the very next moment...and thats the main reason she hid the truth...

But now..its getting worse...she herself...could not bear the sorrow anymore...sadly there was no one to share her pain...

feeling betrayed by fate...she sat on the floor near the ICU...leaning back against the wall...looking at her only son...through the glass doors...tears were flowing continuously as if there was no barrier...

she sat still..loosing all hopes...

"Mrs. kushi...sorry to say...ur son expired"

hearing those words..made her numb...

not knowing how to react...she remained silent...her voice didn't came up...her eyes were empty and dry...

just then her husband arnav came running...near kushi...

"kushi...kiran kaha hey?" he asked in a serious tone...

kushi remained silent...

"answer me dammit..." he roared pulling kushi up...

kushi remained silent...

Just then stretcher was brought outside ICU...with lifeless body of kiran...

arnav looked at the stretcher...for few moments...everything around him became silent...his heart beats echoed...

"kiran" he screamed...holding his son's face...

and suddenly arnav fell on the ground...

to be continued...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Poor Khushi and Arnav
Why did their son die
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOAH! what a shocker! loved your writing style though! i love how you just jumped into it and introduced the characters and the situation through dialogue rather than narration...love it! can't wait to read what happens next 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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poor arnav and khuhsi ..
their son died..
its really sad..
do continue..
plzz pm ...

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