OS: Backing Away (based on sbs)Arnav saver.

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All I could do was run. My heartbeat was beating as fast it could, maybe faster. Nothing crossed my mind. All that came was...forget everything..forget your hate..forget her betrayal..forget everything...just do one thing...SAVE HER.

As I neared her, I saw her struggling...struggling to keep her balance!! Within that fraction of a second I was near her, ready to get her down and give her a peice of mind! But she stopped me. As she struggled again, I took a step towards her, but she warned me that shell jump. My heart was giving in. I couldn't take it. I CAN'T LOSE HER!! only thing that was on my mind was...DONT LET HER GO!!

With another flicker of seeing her struggle, I ignored her threats and before she can fulfill her threat I pulled her. Pulled her as hard as I can, and with that she landed in the place that was meant to be hers but couldn't be. My arms. Feeling that she was safe. That I did it! That I saved her, I sighed in relief.

But the sigh didn't last longer as I felt er push me and walk backwards. She looked scared. She was backing away, but I couldn't let her! Not now, not after the thought of losing her forever came to my mind. I walked forward, but she struggled and walked back.

Please...she whispered. She looked scared. Why was she behaving like this?! Dammit!

Then something came to my mind. Was it..was it because because I yelled at her that night. In the night when I yelled at her during and after the wedding. But why, she never cared about what I said before! But she has been behaving like that ever since the fight. So is it, because I yelled at her. But why would she attempt suicide just because I yelled at her! Isn't that what I did everyday! THEN WHAT!! the turmoil was killing him!

My anger soon came out. I griped her arms and pulled her close. Her eyes went wide!

Don't..don't please..I promise to never bother you...I am sorry..I am sorry for everything..just don't..don't kill me! She said as she hid her face in her hair trying to not look at him.

What the!? I said out loud. Did she just..no wait did she just say..no accuse me of attempting to kill her! HER!! she has lost all her mind!!

Pagal ho tum Kia!!! SUICIDE!! tumhara dhimaak tho nahi haraab ho Gaya! (are you mad! Have you lost it!)

Haan!! Pagal ho gaye hai hum!! You are planning to kill me and you!! You!!

WHAT!! Main..main tumhe Marne ki koshish karunga! Main!! Dammit!! Khushi!!

Haan app, ma..maine appki AUR..AUR lavanyaji ko Ba'ath kerte suna tha. You wanted to kill me!

What!! I rolled my eyes at the crazY girl.

Khushi tum..

Bas..pehle app ne hamse zabardasti shaadi ki..AUR phir Hume Marne ki planning!!

Shut up Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada.

No! Why I shut up! You shut up!! Mr. Raizada. Ajj tho appko Hame batana hee hoga what was my mistake!! Why did you marry me!! WHY!!

You wanna know why..well here's you answer!! I know the relationship you have with Shyam!! Their you got the truth. I yelled

I had said it..finally I had revealed why I married her. Emotions were being betrayed, and they were shown on her face. Surprise, shock, pain, hurt,concern, but mostly HURT.

Why, then I saw them. The one thing I hate the most. Her tears. They flew one by one as she stopped struggling in my arms. She gave in, gave up. My heart was yelling at her to deny it! To tell me I maybe wrong, that I might have had misunderstood her and the situation.but all I got was her staring at nothing in particular and the flowing of her tears.

She backed away.

Hey guys I know it's crappy, sorry for the time waste I just had this whole thing in my mind and I just had to type it up on my phone I don't know why But my hands just typed. Plz tell me how it was thankxxx!!

Kindly ignore the mistakes
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Crazy_soul thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it.this's exactly gonna happen monday.bt plz can u continue it?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its not crappy...its good. i like it 😃 i hope something like this happen because for the longest time I have been racking my brain to figure out how this stupidity of suicide attempts turns into a revelation of the truth. and you gave me slight hope that i am not completely insane..there may be a logical (well, as logical as TV can get) plotline to the order of events..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its lovely...i think something along these lines will actually happen
devsum thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is definitely not crappy, but i want a happy ending.😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great dear! I loved it! please continue and do send me a pm!! plz plz plz! waise, yaar, just wanted to mention, you start off the story in Arnav's pov and then switch to third person in the middle and then return to first person! Maybe you could change that?
but i absolutely LOVED it! U have to continueee! I NEEEDDD to know what Khushi says!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent, 👏please continue. Dont stop half way.

PM me too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue plzzz... its interesting!!! pm me ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awsome when iwas reading eac line i was visualising it 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please Continueee 🤗

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