OS: Tortured Souls (updated part 3)

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Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Beautifully written. I could feel myself chocking up. It was heartbreaking to see the change in Arnav and Khushi feeling helpless. Thank you for the pm.xx

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guyinoblivion

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

you portrayed emotions very well..nice

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dancedanceRR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

That was beautiful! Hope you continue it!

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saikrishnars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

omg!

that was too gud!

plz do continue!

thanx 4 the pm!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Just read both parts and a dejected and pained Arnav is seriously heartbreaking!
Continue ASAP and do pm me please :)

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Riya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Amazing, beautiful. Pls pm when u update.

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awesome OS - very sad, even after so many years.

Please continue. Let him find comfort in Khushi.

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

I Hope He Doesn't Blast On Her . Even Khushi Had Gone Through That Pain & Phase Where She Was Left Alone In This Big Bad World :( 🥺 Hope He Also Think About That Before Shouting At Her 😳