Arhi:OS- Road to Redemption Part 2 pg8

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Krani

@Krani

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Oh my god. Dude. I am actually speechless.

Like you have no idea, how amazing that piece of fiction was. I've read some really good stories of what happens after Arnav and Khushi go their separate ways, and I have to say, that yours is definitely my favourite.

You did a beautiful job at displaying every emotion, of Khushi, Anjali, Arnav, Gupta family, Raizada family. Everything.

Thanks for the PM! I really, really enjoyed reading this!!

I normally try and find a line that stood out to me most, but your entire OS was written so well, that I would be copying the entire OS to show you what I loved of it :P

Thanks for such an amazing OS!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

OMG! I had almost decided not to follow the stories till my exams are over- you know how that could be distracting! But i just happened to stumble upon this beauty and I'm left spellbound..!

This is a brilliant piece of writing... Amazingly written... The pain, the anger, somewhat disappointment just stands up so well with the words. And what's more; the hidden love in all these words is put in a fabulous way. I just loved reading this... Calling Anjali a Princess of all sorts, wanting to hate and love the same person at the same time for someone she loves... This was awesome! It kinda makes Anjali the central character than ArHi; and I guess she really is the center point in almost everything; and this fact was brilliantly used her! Loved it!

Way to go girl! Keep it up! And yeah, all the best for your exams!

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Sukirti Singh Raizada

@sukirtiraizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

a really good work...

luved it...

thanx for the pm

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

So poignant!

I loved it!

Realistic too! Her being upset, Anjali wanting to hate her... Arnav's self destruction...

Thank you for the PM!

And good luck!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

I loved this story.. and I understand that you have so many things swimming around your head, you can hardly concentrate wholly on the chronicles.. but thats all right. give us short stories like these ans we are all very happy to wait.. BTW best of luck for your exams!!