Crooner 55 : Mirage - Updated !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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"We pass through the present with our eyes blindfolded. We are permitted merely to sense and guess at what we are actually experiencing. Only later when the cloth is untied can we glance at the past and find out what we have experienced and what meaning it has."
~Milan Kundera

'The Tale of the Antecedents'

I need to come up with superlatives to describe the Crooners, sweetheart, because the dictionary is simply running out of words for me! This Crooner put today's episode in such vivid perspective! You could not have chosen a better metaphor than mirage to showcase what we have seen in those set of eyes! The Gaiman quote setting the precedent; an oasis gone, shards in the dust! Your poem, a tapestry weaving each emotion, each sentiment that Khushi went through so beautifully! I am spellbound! Today's epi was like watching a movie...we are now at the interval...all the i's have been dotted, the t's crossed...now we wait for the unfolding of the drama...There was a finality to it...in many ways...Here we go!

Deal or No Deal: Well, right off the bat, a reassurance from the CVs that nothing will happen to ASR...Her "train jitni lambhi ummar hai inki' pretty much dispels any death wish for our resident "mechanic"; Shyam can plot all he wants! When he's willing, Raizada Repair Center is fully charged and operating (no pun intended!) Her "toh kar deejiye na" meets with refusal...she does not relent...he plays along...Reference to your mirage, illusion, the minute she says "gayab hoh jayega"; their time in this togetherness is limited! His "mujhe kya milega"--this is about him after all--gets a "aapko kya chahiye!?" Yet again, her asking never stops, but she never receives a straight answer. Talk of bistar and niche sohna gets a terse "uski koi zaroorat nahi"!!! Amen! We have confirmation from the horse's mouth that he wants her in his bed...when the reconciliation does happen, fireworks are guaranteed!😆 But for now, lets live with the dialogue, nothing else!

Then the condition...deal or no deal..."kal hum dono Shaantivaan jayenge...Bhool na maat... kyunki main yaad rakhoonga..." Yes, eventually, Shantivaan--that peaceful abode-- will be the destination for BOTH of them! Yes, a promise is meant to be kept! But for now, she will not be at peace to go with him. Her footsteps will cross the threshold there, yet she will be put to the test. Herein comes the test of her love and her trust. And, we have a long time to go before Arnav himself will come through on his end of the deal!

The Diamond in the Rough: Beneath the hard core, a treasure... Buaji...Buaji will be CRITICAL in bringing ArHi together. Buaji corrects Khushi's "mistake." Buaji apologizes...She will "sudhaar"-resolve- the issue! "Hum ko pata hi nahi chala"...she never knew the misunderstanding...The blue tooth conversation was very interesting here...she doesn't understand why he needs the device...in her mind it doesn't allow you to listen to someone completely...Loved the analogy to being deaf! Sure enough, her "babua, dekh ke" gets a slip & fall into dung...I too did not understand the point of this scene other than to show that Arnav listens to only that which he wants! Frankly, the religious significance of the fecal matter was not apparent to me, and the Rabba Ve there was completely unnecessary!

Lady in White: I did not read too much into this scene until the conversation between Manu & Mamaji. I think Mamaji pretty much spelled it out for Manu, ArHi & us...His 'tum hi bhoot hoh' a reminder to keep your eyes open, and stop being delusional! Again, your reference to illusions vs. reality very apt here! So are we now done with bhoot gate, once & for all!?😕

Of Mirrors and Marriage: A scene reminiscent of so many before it...A Rabba Ve that was heart wrenching, just like the one's before it...the Antecedents...The mirrors & those mirror curtains in the dressing room when he taunted her, in the RM when she glowed in delight at his gift of bangles, the morning of their wedding when he reminded her of her missing bindi, without which she is incomplete...the night of her suhagraat...that most beautiful of evenings--when pain shattered her dreams...to the Heer Ranjha enactment, when immortal lovers' truths were revealed...looking at each other through the clear glass door when she talked of Sundari & Shaitaan...and today, we saw it yet again...when sadness, confusion & anger permeated their souls; that vortex of unending emotions!

Her friends prod for a synopsis to her special day...She hesitates remembering the pain...yet, she indulges them, & in turn, herself! Her description of her lehenga very much that of her own joda...given to her by his sister. She highlights what she loved about it...Every detail taking what was in her heart..It spoke to her because it had was partly "haraa", forest green, her favorite color-- like wet, lush, majestic, pristine mountains...and red, the color of matrimony, of him & them! Yes, the joda had both their beloved colors...yet, she was the only one wearing it; admiring it! No one to compliment, no one to look beautiful for! The jhumka-heavy, yet intricate in detail...awaaz karti...like the bells in the temple where they married! Her bangles-- covered her wrist & created the intimacy between them that day--not the person who should have taken them off to reveal those beautiful wrists! The ghungroo on her payals made her aware of crossing the line...into this disillusionment; a sham! The chand sa sundar tika...a tainted mark on her forehead, for what they had gone thru together, but nonetheless, she slept under the moon that evening, alone! The pallu...she had no hand on her head to remove that pallu, yet the sky with all its stars draped itself over her head...Yes, Priya, here we saw a melding of what was her dream, and what was the reality! While she only spoke of the dream, her eyes spelled her pain!

He hears all of it; feels her pain...His eyes touch her beautiful face! Yet, the mirror shows a hint of guilt, endless questions, confusion and in his very last look at her, anger! Yes, she has questions to which he will not give answers. She doesn't deserve his answers! I can't help come back to the mirror scene with him reflecting in it! The mirror tells him he doesn't want his loved ones to be hurt; he would rather internalize their pain! Yes, everything he did for the Guptas--from apologizing for his lack of 'Amma,' getting the pani puris & pasta, fixing things for people to make them happy--all showed his vulnerable, "good" side. Yes, it showed he loved her, he has always loved her. Allowed him to acknowledge that love! Yet, the very same mirror, drew out the anger, resentment, and how broken he is! Those last few seconds on his face spoke volumes! Such contradicting emotions all exposed on a surface that never lies! The past is still there...and will always be, yet soon all will come unraveling! And yes, the mirror will be present to share the truth!


Scratching my head moments: So in a small house full of ppl, Garima & Buaji are clueless to the Raizada Repair Center happenings...Yeah, CVs, you guys dropped the ball on this one! Zucchini becomes chinni...makai ka baccha becomes baby corn--loved the sentiment behind making Continental food, but to be honest, they were in the midst of wedding preparations! I could not buy that they would drop everything to decipher ingredients & cook up a "damaad worthy" meal.

Why is everything related to the wedding being done at the GH? The initial conversation between Nandini & the elder ladies was about guests staying there...now its become Grand Central Station for all things wedding?😕

Kushi remembers all the incidents in his "initiation" to get to know the neighbors; but didn't all of those things happen the day before? Ahhh, naughty Khushi & her one track mind!😆 So, are we to assume that Arnav got a custom bath given by Khushi at the hand pump two days in a row?!😳

Was it just me, or was Arnav totally turned on during the cleansing today!?😆 His face reminded me so much of the dhaaba scene in Nainital, right before the lifts her & takes her in!

And, won't Payal attend Preeto's wedding? Why are the CVs pretending Payal has taken a sabbatical from her own Dilli based maayka ?😕

Something tells me Preeto's wedding will have some kind of a hitch...This rushed affair, the sangeet & shaadi all in the same day business just hints to something is amiss! This will exacerbate the situation for ArHi, provoking the outburst!



Sanaya redefined grace, beauty and what it means to have a tortured heart! Sobti was like a kaleidoscope of emotions...each more brilliant, vivid, and breathtaking than before! Hats off too to the actress who plays Buaji! Just loved her today! The dialogues with all the puns & entendres were some of the best we've seen so far in this track! The actors got into them! Extras need some work...but hopefully, one more episode & we are home free! I finally saw the body doubles in play today😆, and yes, the episode worked even without the leads in the same frame together! What can I say about copyright, yaar...We'll soon have to start registering everything we put on the site! Hail, Woodwa Ve! It finally got its "true" due!😆

Yes, we are back to where our saga really started, sweetie...A lot has passed and been seen...Time to get our popcorn & drinks ready for the next big chapter...The empty vessel(s) wait(s) to be filled! Absolutely love your song pick today (and I adore Phil Collins!)

So take a look at me now,
'cos there's just an empty space
And there's nothing left here to remind me,
just the memory of your face
Take a look at me now,
'cos there's just an empty space
And you coming back to me
is against all odds
and that's what I've got to face...

Couldn't capture what is to come any better!
Edited by Nandalala - 13 years ago
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For Khushi:

Wind to thy wings. Light to thy path. Dreams to thy heart." Anonymous

For Arnav:
"Keep your heart open to dreams. For as long as there's a dream, there is hope, and as long as there is hope, there is joy in living."

Two strangers. Leading diametrically opposite life. Destiny brings them together first time in divine presence. They keep meeting. In the process each learning about the other. They are no more strangers. Each hold a special place in others heart. And they decide to give a name to this relation. The problem here was the foundation. Somewhere the trust factor didn't come into picture. So for this relationship to solidify,the foundation of trust has to be laid. Till now the girl was part of his world. She lived and breathed his world. She got aquianted,adjusted and became a part of his world. That was one half of the story. Accordingly destiny brought him to be part of her world. Now he is living and breathing her life. One single action of his has turned their life upside down. So for him to realize that this change in life style was required. Now he will take actions to rectify that. Today was saw that in his eyes. His guilt ridden face. So the dawn for the relationship based on trust has begun. They both have to toil for the end result. Yes girls be ready with tissue boxes..
Side Note: I couldn't take my eyes off Sanaya in the last scene.Is she beauty personified or what.
And also when Barun enacts those guilt feeling, its like he is living it. Those eyes!!! It conveys a million emotions. He is the best.
Edited by mommamia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Priya, ur poem has left me speechless dear...Its so touching, magical 👏 👏 👏 👏
The perfect title & opening quote 😃
So the countdown has begun...The episode was a decent mix of comedy & emotions.
The Raizada Repair Shop was set up at the GH, another of Khushi's 'Irritate Laad Governor' plans. But our business tycoon cracks a deal with his Sankadevi Patni. Again, awesome ASR dialogues here - 'Main kya chahta hoon, kya tum woh karogi' 'Tum bhoolna mat, kyunki main yaad rakhoonga'
Ok CVs, one doubt here, upar aur neeche kaun soega, yeh kab decide hua?? Phir se dhokha diya na 😡 😡
Barun was briiliant with his expressions thru out this scene 👏 👏 I luved how Arnav handled the repair jobs with utmost sincerity & dedication...But torch, spectacles ??...C'mon CVs, kuch bhi dikhate ho 😆 Khushi's cunning smile bugged me here...Luved Buaji's entry, how she talks abt his status & orders everyone to leave. And the way she pulled Khushi's ears was too good. Way to go Buaji 👍🏼
Priya, I second u for the Best Jodi award...Arnav-Buaji 😆 what rocking chemistry !!!!!
Makai ka bachha & zu..chini (kaun type ki chinni hai bhai, humka bhi khilaye diyo 😆) What a cute scene...The ladies always worried abt the taste & well being of their Sexy SIL...
The Garima-Payal phone conversation looked out of place. And why hasn't Payal been invited for Khushi's best friend's wedding 😕 😕 CVs, plz roshni daaliye...
The cow dung scene...No logic & the RV not required...But Barun looked super HOT here & amazing expressions 😍 😍
Sanaya looked very beautiful in the new outfit but wish her hair was free flowing rather than using those hideous clips again...The extras were stupid...
Sanaya was brilliant in this scene, her expressions & voice modulation 👏 👏 At first she was hesitant but after her friends pushed her, she narrates a story straight out of her dreams. The perfect wedding which she had dreamt of since childhood, her outfit, jewellery, every detail pouring out. But deep inside her heart, the harsh reality of it all not forgotten, The FBs of the marriage in the temple, how her dreams were shattered. The very person, who meant everything to her, responsible for breaking her heart. Her Prince Charming...
And she is unaware that her Prince has witnessed it all. Arnav, holding the cooler in his hand, listens intently to her, what marriage meant to her, her dreams & expectations from the same. There is confusion in his eyes, regret coupled with his own pain. Barun's eyes portraying the confusion perfectly 👍🏼 Luved how he gulped, turned & then looked back at her...
She notices him, he doesnt blink. Their teary eyes reflecting the pain, unspoken words exchanged between the two. She wants answers to her questions, is willing to go to any lengths for the same. He is unable to understand the conflict within. He is guilty of destroying her dreams & her spirit but not able to express his own pain & anguish. Both hopelessly in love with each other but both victims...
Priya, I attended the Barber's meeting & we r visiting the temple tonight with our morcha. Plz join in sweetie 😉
Copyright issues ki toh bahar aa gayi hai, ek hi bada se petition file karna padega 😡
The tagline suggests ???? Ok CVs, I am not sure if I want it but if Barun is fine with it then I am happy 😉
Abt the kidnapping rumour, I hate it & wish good sense prevails on Gul & Gautam. Plz dont go the Ekta way guys 😡
Edited by amisuv - 13 years ago
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What i missed in the whole of recent epis is the depth of emotions. But Friday epi is slowly showing up. The actors are damn tired. The eyes look so weak, poor babies.😭

Coming to the crooner it was nice. For me no complaints. Kushi is the highlight. Arnav is cute with Buaji yes best jodi.😆
Again wet hottwa with full clothes😆. He looked more dignified and hot when fully dressed and wet.☺️
Haaha wood and plank showing up. 😆 You must really think, to sue them for copy rights.😆

Kushi's action of pipe is so cute when Arnav said not to say a word after he got Cowdung. 🤣

It's heart wrenching seeing kushi's pain and hurt. The regret and confusion in Arnav is visible. Some are complaining that he is smiling in the scene. 5times i watched that scene but have not seen him smiling only regret, gulps and confusion, looking back. 😳

The sad Rabba ve is so intense and it's playing in my mind till now. Overall superb epi. 👏 👏

Edited by sask.ch1 - 13 years ago
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res,...yay finally one first page for crooner...wooo hooo
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nice episode d last 5 mins were my best... Loved it... Crooners gonna Enjy it laterz...
Edited by BarunForever - 13 years ago
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Hi honey, Long time no see actually. Well first congrats on the 50 crooners and you are IF-Rockerz. Party time.


Awesome crooner.
The lines of Neil Guiman was fabulous. That was so apt for the episode.
The first arhi convo was indeed good. I really liked your vies on Repairing everything and She understanding that it was indeed time to return there.
I actually ;loved the scene where buaji understands it was Khushi's doing and held her ears. Arnav enjoying it was worth a watch. Barun acted superbly in the first part especially when he said Not a word. Though i too felt the cow dung scene was unnecassary.
Mami and Payal scene was indeed a relief to the boring fillers and Mama was definitely funny.
Bluetooth scene was fab.
The fianl scene was beyond my words. It was fab. Sanaya looked very pretty and also her eyes were so expressive when she detailed her dreams.
All in all a Fab episode.
And Awesome post as well.

Edited by Bunny_Bear - 13 years ago
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Great crooner as always guys. I felt to pen down the episode is quite difficult because of the intensity it had. You guys did a great job.

There is something completely different that made sense to me yesterday. Anybody felt yesterday, that the cowdung Rabba-Vey was one sided? Khushi was having a good time while it affected Arnav again. And in most cases, it is Khushi who breaks the Rabba-vey or gets out of the impact fast. Many questions the depth of Khushi's love for him. But wasn't she the first to realize she is in love? She never got the approval from Arnav- every time she felt things are going right, Arnav made sure it came crashing down on her. Even after the last Heer-Ranjha act, Khushi gave a chance to her love - she forgot everything and just wanted a confirmation from Arnav on his feelings. Again, Arnav broke her hopes. She, being the one spreading happiness all around, has suppressed both her pain and her love under a facade. Yes, just like Arnav, Khushi is living with a facade too. All the Rabba-Veys happening these days are not needed to remind Khushi of her love; rather it's Arnav whose love needs a revival. He is the one who actually needs to free his heart, not Khushi. Over the last few days, Khushi has been happy with Arnav, not because of the way they looked at each other but because of the small things Arnav did that touched her. I now feel her love is more matured than Arnav's. When Arnav will finally free his heart and walk to her, she will accept his love with open arms.
Edited by Omoraboti - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandalala

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Ahhh...Gaiman!!! Super love!!!

working title - bed breaker - Mirage😉🤣

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