Music Shot/OS: She Doesn't Mind - Page 2

Originally posted by: subiscs

good one ya!!!😊

Originally posted by: anu17

cool song ha

Originally posted by: Stapleton

nice os annie...
it's awesome

Originally posted by: aparna5293

Ohhh god
annie is that really u?
Kiddos hun? And what ur?;)
that was hott hottt one
song is also beautiful:):)

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the os very well written hot cute and beautifully done so they are spies nice one thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: pgm7

I like I like. The dance was definitely sensuous!

Originally posted by: tina_1234

awesome os

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

awesome OS

Originally posted by: nav_bat

Ola Batool (should I call you by your Special Nickname we gave you??) *wiggling eyebrows*😉

About the Double post, it happens re! Well, you do reply to all the comments I've seen in your Fics, so Aadat se Majboor ho jaate hain!! :P😆

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First things first, I was silly to seek your permission to read this, I mean I read such stuff all the time.😆When you said 'hot' I thought Mills and Boons style hot.🤣

Coming to your Reply...
Hahahahah..😆...Actually even I was thinking if I should rate this or not! Since it had nothing so highly descriptive of the act, from my POV, and was way comfortable to be read, I didn't put up the rating! But still I thought that people above 15 yrs of age should be permitted only!😕
Hahahah...And Mills n Boons...Heheheh...They are one Awesome series too! 👏 Actually I like the way the Authors describe everything... Their's are sensible and pretty amazing enough to read and enjoy! There are books that describe such things fully, you know! While in Mills n Boons describe things beautifully, yet don't go into so much details, since they know the age group of the readers reading it all! Am talking about the books I've come across till now!

Number 1, by the end of the OS, I coudnt even join the parts together, it was like I was jumbled up between the flashbacks and the real part. But when it came to the USB, haha, it clicked to me that ofcourse they are spies. Like seriosuly they are spy's, was my very first question to myself. Just to confirm my doubt I read the comments, which also said that they were a spy, or otherwise I would have actually hyperventilated thinking that I was at the verge of insanity.🤣

Hahahah..🤣...Sorry if it confused you! Gosh!😆 Actually this was all a Figment from my Insane Imagination🤪, which had really gone to the Brink of it, while listening to the Song!!😉 I mean for the first few times, I listened to it with nothing in my mind, but then suddenly I started thinking of Arnav and Khushi, and wondered how would they look in such a video...which of course, initiated all of this!😉

And yes! I don't know why, but I seriously love to write it out in such a way, though I need practice, since it may appear confusing to you! I like the idea of putting Flashbacks in between the present scenes, regarding their or other's actions! You know in real life too, you come across things that remind you of the past, and the whole memory starts playing and then suddenly you find another link to another memory and then it plays and so on!!😳

Let's see, this was my first time, with you wriitng something so serious, and sexual, I mean all I have ever read from you is light hearted stuff, nothing so gripping, so you are a versatile writer.👏

Serious? Hahahah...Was it so?😳 Urm...I didn't know! Well, I didn't tag it as anything for that matter, so its up to you guys to tag it as what it seems to be to you!
Hahahah...Now my hidden talent is coming out I guess!! :P Thankoo Thankoo!!🤗 Practice makes a Man Perfect! So Practising and treading new levels will definitely bring out the Best in me and all the Writers here (including you mah papi 😳)!!

You know what, reading this somehow I was thinking about Arnav, as Tom Cruise.😍 I mean he's even better than James Bond as a spy.😍 (No offense, if you are a James Bond fan, but I would prefer Sherlock Holmes anytime over James Bond, my personal opinion, he aint that witty or good.)

Heheheh...Nice nice!😉 I like it! I didn't think of him like anyone anyhow! I don't know I could just visualise him as himself here! Since his demeanour in the show, pulls up the demeanour of a Spy, but his work doesn't pull him into it for miles! His actions, business all comes in to a Business Man stuff! But his personality, his looks puts him into that category without any problems, if you imagine him so!😛
Hahahah...Am a fan of both!! Though I haven't yet fully seen Sherlock Holmes nor read his books full even, I do like him!! And James Bond toh is 'The British Spy'!! Mind you am saying 'British' spy!! Heeheehee...😉

And there bonding was so similiar to Cameroon Diaz and Tom Cruise in 'Knight and Day'.😍
Wowie!! It did?😳 heheheh...That is a compliment re!! I love that movie very much!! Thanks!!🤗

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Originally posted by: nav_bat

Haha, call me with that, i dont really mind.😉
Hahahaha...My Batwa!!!! Mwh...🤗

Oh yeah, actually, thats why i am in a habit of having press the 'Quote' button instead of 'Edit'😳

Can't agree more!! :P😆

My impression of Mill's and Boons has always been for the 18+ age group, so I hardly even linger around them. Besides, I dont like reading love stories at all, its a surprise how I write one, seriosuly.😳

Hahahah...😆..It's not that R rated!! The books are categorised from pure romance to nocturnal, hot stuff! You just need to check out what categories are what and what are their names!! Keep that in mind, then purchase/read them!! heehee... You will definitely enjoy them but they are kind of high doses of adjectives in English Dictionary!! Hahahah... Pure matlab Pure Angreji!! :P Vocabulary badhane mein bahut acchhi hain!! :P😉

You write like Shalu,(sharneil92), she writes her FF:Hunters and Gatherers in a similair style, half the time I wondering what in the world connected to where, but then upon a little pondering it becomes clear as a crystal.😳

Like Shalu?!😲 Aye Haaye!!😳 She writes stuff really well, eh actually!! The thing is am not currently following her FF, but did read the prologue and the first chappy! She does write very well!!👏

Still, I think you should just have put up a notification regarding the italics being 'flashbacks' I bet half the people would be confused.😳

Mah Papi!! That is the first thing I typed while typing the MS?OS here!! :P Didn't you read it?😕

Oh yeah, sure.😃 I have seen the best in me coming out, I read my first part of We Are Together, and recent parts, and they are like things from two different writers, So much of diversity I am surprised.😳

Aww...Now you see na? But I loved the way you kept it short and sweet there in that FF!! It was quirky and enjoyable!! :P You have evolved that's what!!👏

I agree, ASR has the physique and looks of a spy, its apity he turns out to be rotten buisness man, eaisly could have been a spy.😉

Rotten Business Man?! 🤣 Hahahahah...BULL'S Eye re!!!

I love that too.🤗
❤️
Hahahah...Love you!😳