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Hi Guys!

my very first one shot on arnav-khushi, wanted to keep it simple and light hearted.however im not too satisfied with it

any sort of criticism is more than welcomešŸ˜†

dont forget to like/comment 😃

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"you will have to admit it" said Arnav engulfing Khushi against the wall, staring right in the eye, dead serious. The intensity in his voice, the power in his stare could break anyone down, but he knew it was Khushi he was dealing with, if that was the limit of his stubbornness, hers had just started

"or else?" Khushi said, keeping herself calm but firm. No matter how intense Arnav was, she always proved him wrong by not being affected by him, or at least she had him convinced so.

"or..else.." Arnav repeated, intensifying the moment moving closer

The battle of silence continued through the weapons of the stares, when Khushi broke the ice

" Do whatever you want, whatever you can, there is nothing in this world that can make me utter such nonsense"

"oh..really?" Arnav accepted the challenge.

"You know you're gona lose" Khushi said, expressing the sweet sound of confidence.

The egotistical Arnav had died for a while, and at this moment he only cared about her speaking her heart out, he knew what she felt for him, it wasn't something two friends shared, it was something more, far greater than friendship

"Agar maine tumse na kehlwaya to mera naam bhi Raizada nahi"

He liked referring to himself as Raizada instead of Arnav, he thought Raizada suited his personality, and the name had power

"to theek hai, naya naam soch lo" Khushi aggressively replied.

Arnav always knew Khushi had ego disorders too but he was never aware she could compete with him.

Arnav nodded and let out a sarcastic smile which forced Khushi to raise an eyebrow

Before the verbal abuse turned into a battle ground, Anjali showed up

"tum dono yahan ho, khaana lag gaya hai aur sab tum logon ka wait kar rahe hain"

"Coming di" Arnav reassured, before Khushi tried to act smart

after the dinner, before Arnav could even say anything, Khushi murmured "to phir naya naam soch liya?"

Khushi liked messing with him as much as he enjoyed teasing her. She knew what she felt for him was real but she didn't want it to be too easy for him, besides she loved making people wait.

"naam to tumhe badalna padega" Arnav teased moving closer, hinting at their marriage which he had planned alone in his head, without considering the fact that Khushi was an important part of this marriage, maybe just a little.

Being the self obsessed person he was, decided everything in his mind as usual and thinking it would exactly happen the way he had planned, but obviously he wasn't shocked at Khushi's reaction. He knew her for 5 years now, he at least knew her this much.

" apne la la land se bahar ao, yahan exactly who nahi hota jo wahan itne bade lekin khali sir mein hota hai" she said, lightly hitting his head, which a smirk on her face. He raised an eyebrow to give attitude, to which in response, Khushi's eyes squinted with that couldn't you get any lamer look

Arnav knew only she had the nerve to talk to him like that and he only had the nerve to take it when it was her.

"la la land mein to aap hain madam" he said looking around, and then at her, with full confidence he knew she felt for him too.

"really?" Khushi said sarcastically, her shining eyes fixed on him, with a slight smile.

He liked how she didn't get all shy and red like all the other girls, he found them so cheesy and it would him sick. What he loved about her was that even though they belonged in completely different worlds, they still got each other, and even argued with the same level of wit and sarcasm.

"really'." He said in a husky voice moving so close, that Khushi was right against the wall, and she couldn't move any further, not that she wanted to.

She could feel his minty breath on her and he could feel her vanilla scent hugging him. Both loved the moment.

Right when Arnav was staring into her eyes, before he could move any further she moved her head side to side, with those sparkling eyes and mischievous smile giving him the you don't have the courage look, as she saw Anjali proceeding towards the kitchen.

Arnav knew she was upto to something, but he wanted to take the complete advantage of the moment, so he moved closer and kissed her cheek. Khushi was slightly surprised while Anjali witnessed it all. Khushi was happy that he kissed her but she was also excited to see his reaction after he finds he showered some love in front of his di.

"Chotey!" Anjali called, trying to control her laughter as she was expecting to see an embarrassed Arnav.

Khushi quickly moved away from the wall and gave a smile to Anjali who was just admiring the adorable couple.

Right after h now shock in saw his di, acting as if he had sensed it coming, he winked at Khushi with that naughty smile of his, before she left the hall giving him one last don't think you won look

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Thank You for your time 😳


p.s. this is a One Shot so i wont be continuing it or so my apologies to those who wanted a continuation but i promise i will entertain you guys with more OS'sšŸ˜†šŸ˜³

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ongongong thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U did a great job! continue soon and do PM me!
OnlyHope thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sucha cute one šŸ˜
There nok-jhoks :P
Iqraaa please write more 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like it


Pm me buddy


thanks šŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you everyone! i wont be continuing this OS as mentioned above but i will definitely be writing more in the near future :D
Thanks again<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I likeee! It was so good! You know, when Arnav said 'madam,' reminded me a wee bit of Asher šŸ˜›

I loved it! Scope for improvement but nevertheless, I louvvee! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Iqra!!
very nice!!

I really wished we did see some romance before marriage...b/c us ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai!!!šŸ˜†ā˜ŗļø

What I liked about ur OS was that they both were equally stubborn and if he is the lion...she is the lioness...completing him.




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ss374

Wow Iqra!!
very nice!!

I really wished we did see some romance before marriage...b/c us ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai!!!šŸ˜†ā˜ŗļø

What I liked about ur OS was that they both were equally stubborn and if he is the lion...she is the lioness...completing him.




thanks sobi<3

yah i didnt wana make one less than the other, cus im a big fan of witty/sarcastic couples lmao
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww that was quite lovely! :) You have the talent! Keep at it! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aawwnie!!! you gave us a daring Khushi in the sense of not stuttering and not blushing when arnav is close to her and I love it!

too bad you wont continue, but more os's form you, i dont mind!!

arnav was naughty in this one! love it!

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