LET'S HELP THEM ELOPE - ArHi SS - updt prt 3 pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ss pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏thanks...great job...loved both parts...amazing...please update sooon...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣 So they make a run for it. Poor NK trapped. Very funny. 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣🤣 loved it thanks for pm

plz plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnks everyone for liking part 2

will update soon

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love
srijanee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg omg.. tht was too much funny n nk's language made me laugh too much.. remembered tht day whn nk ws in ipkknd.. btw i liked it so much.. i loved whn arnav said mujhe khushi k sath nahi bhagna hai aakash tumhe payal k sath bhagna hai n arnav got jealous from nk whn he ws talking abt khushi.. loved tht n best thing i loved is whn khushi was with arnav on floor n they were talking .. whn khushi pushed arnav's shoulder.. i can imagine arnav's reaction.. what the in shocked.. n loved tht one also whn nk hide himself in jacket... laughed so much.. u have done good job.. update soon srijanee.. love u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy everyone...

thnx for liking nd commenting on my ss
...i have an exam on 7th may so will update on 8th night or 9th mornin plzzz bear wid me ...
thnx again...
love...
srijanee

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Posted: 13 years ago
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rofl all that was hilarious and i read it all today amazing pm me when u update but u do anyways so no prob about that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣 Amazing till now ! Hope you haven't forgottten it 😆 dd me to your PM list 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi everyone i know i am like real late

sorry , had my exams and all and then i couldn't think up something funny.

krishu di helped me a lot to form up the story so thank you di for that hope you like it
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Buaji turned to Khushi and saw the quad run out. NK had just placed his hand out from under the bed. It was directly under Buaji's bum. She sat down in shock slapping her forehead and she sat on NK's hand.

NK shouted at the top of his voice : MERA RAATH (haath…hand)

Khushi and the trio were now out in the hall. She quickly opened the main door and pulled them out of the house.

PART 3

Khushi with all her strength pulled the trio along with her…

P: Khushi? Khushi? Tu kar kya rahi hai…

Ak: khushiji!!!

Arnav was too shocked to speak up…

K: bas bhaagte raho…

They had been running for 5 minutes now…

Finally Arnav came back to senses…

Arnav stopped running and tried to pull back Khushi and the duo…

Khushi pulled him with a greater strength which made him stumble on and take a few more steps…

But he was stronger he finally succeeded in stopping her.

K: kya hua?... bhaagiye… she said pulling him

He released his hand from Khushi's grip with a jerk and yelled…

A: KYA KAR RAHI HO? PAGAL TOH NAHI HO GAYI???

K: kya?... ab aapko kya ho gaya?... chaliye… she held his hand and started running again…

Arnav stopped her…

A: listen to me Khushi…!!

Khushi pulled him and started running…

K: bhaagte bhaagte bataiye….hum bhaagte bhaagte sunege…

A: What??

Ak: Khushi ji aap humein kahan le ja rahi hai…

A: "wow!! Finally… Welcome back Aakash" he said angrily…

K: mandir!!

Still running…

P: Khushi!!

K: Jijaji aapko shaadi karni hai ye nahi?

Ak: ji Khushi ji…magar… aise??

K: uff chaliye na…

A: pata nahi yeh ladki kya kar rahi hai…

K: jo bhi kar rahi hoon aap hi ka kaam aasan kar rahi hoon…

A: what ever…

In the meantime,

NK shouted at the top of his voice: MERA RAATH (haath…hand)

Bu: arre babua…(Still sitting) raath? Ab ee ka hai? Hain?

NK: BUAJI… he shouted again… RAATH…RAATH…HAND

Bu: hain?? Hand…handi (cooking vessel) chahiye…? Magar kyun?

By that time Garima had come out and had tried to follow Khushi and company but they were too fast to be followed…

She came back and saw Buaji sitting…

NK: HAND!! OH MY HAND… he screamed again…

G: Jiji…hand mane haath… uthiye… she said, panicked…

Bu: hay re Nand Kishore…ruko…ruko babua… she placed a hand on NK's head and supported all her weight on that. NK's head was almost dug onto the floor…

He mumbled from there, "main god ko thank you khaoonga agar main yahan se zindagi bach paya (I'll thank god if I escape alive from here!)

She somehow managed to stand up and also helped NK stand up…

NK: Oh!! Oh!! Thank God… he said blowing on his red hand… and rubbing his head with the other hand.

Bu: babua ek baat batao humka… oo sanka devi kahan gayi?

NK: Bhaag kar shaadi karenge humlog… he said still blowing on his hand…

Buaji giggled shyly…

She tried to give him a light push on his shoulder but it was a strong one for him… he fell on the bed…

Bu: ae babua ee ka kahat rahe ho?? Hum aur tum? She said shyly…

G: jiji…!!!

Bu: gaima dekho ee ka kahat rahe…

NK was on the bed, shocked to hell

NK: NO!!NO!!

He dreamt of the very wedding day where Buaji picks up her veil and say "hum hoon do…"

NK: NO!!! He screamed and ran out of the house…

NK: main Buaji se shaadi nahi karoonga…

Garima and Buaji were shell shocked….

Bu: hai re nand kishore… ee sab sanke devi ki maya hai…

Meanwhile…

They finally reached the mandir… it was empty…

K (panting) : pahuch gaye…

A: ab kya?

K: kya ab kya?... ab shaadi she said smiling naughtily…

Ak: Payel ji!! Looking at Payel and smiling shyly…

P: Aakash ji!! Looking at Aakash and smiling shyly…

Ak: Payel ji!!

P: Aakash ji!!

Ak: Payel ji!!

P: Aakash ji!!

A: stop it both of you…and Khushi?... Khushi?

He looked around but she was no where to be seen.

A: now where the hell did she go?

He took out his phone and dialled her number.

He could hear the ring of her phone. He looked around… It was coming from some where very near to him.

Aakash and Payel also searched for the phone and finally they traced the ring to Arnav's coat pocket.

He slid his hand into his pocket to realise that all this time Khushi's phone was with him…

A: damn it…

Ak: bhai aapke paas khushiji ka phone kaise….

A: how the hell will I know? He was super pissed and frustrated.

Khushi had created havoc in his life. Arnav Singh Raizada who planned every single second of his life was now waiting for Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta to return from where ever she had apparently vanished to.

He looked around it was pitch black; suddenly he noticed a faint outline of two people coming towards the mandir from the back yard of the mandir campus. He strained his eyes to figure out who the two people were. He didn't take more than a second to realise that the stick figure like white woman who was leading, was Khushi… he saw her pulling a guy by his hand. His jaws stiffened and he uttered… "what the…!"

Within a few seconds she had climbed up the mandir stairs and was standing infront of Arnav, she held onto a sleepy pandit… who was just in his dhoti.

Arnav looked at the poor pandit…who couldn't keep his eyes open and managed to snore, even while standing.

Arnav glared at Khushi, who turned around to look at Aakash and Payel.

K: jiji, Jijaji…main Pandit ko le aayi hoon… she said hold his hand up… in the jerk the pandit woke up partially

Pa: om…shanti hi… shaadi sampanna hui…. He mumbled in his sleep…

A: what the…? He uttered in shock.

Khushi looked at the Pandit

K: abhi nahi ek minute…!

She left the Pandit's hand and the poor thing started leaning backward. Arnav realised that he would fall any moment so held on to the falling Pandit and made him sit on the floor…his back resting on the marble walls of the mandir. He then turned to Khushi who was busy fussing with Payel. She quickly used her dupatta to cover her head with it…

K: hmm… mangal sutra aur sindoor Panditji apne saath laye hai…ab gath bandhan ke liye…

She looked at Arnav and narrowed her eyes…

A: what? He said looking down at himself. She hastily went upto him

K: aapka yeh gale ka patta nikaliye… she ordered…

A: what?

Ak: bhai…tie…

A: what?

K: uff oh!! Tie…tie… she said holding it up infront of his eyes…

He snatched it off her hand….

A: kyun?

K: gale mein bandh ke latakna hai… humein suicide karna hai… dijiye na…

A: shut up Khushi… he said holding her by her shoulders…. Dare you say that again… he continued looking straight into her eyes. She looked into his brown eyes… she instantly felt guilty on seeing the pain in his eyes.

Payel and Aakash rushed to her…

P: Khushi!! Aisi batein nahi karte… she said with a scolding tone…

Ak: haan khushiji!! he said firmly…

Arnav left her…

K: sorry!... she said looking down at the floor…

Payel hit her softly on her head.

Arnav opened the tie and placed it infront of her…

Khushi looked up at him with a smile… she tried to take it from his hand but he held onto it tightly…

K: kya hua?

A: kya karogi isse?

K: gath bandhan ke liye chahiye…

A: what?

K: oho… shaadi karwane ke liye chahiye…

He finally released his grip and gave it to Khushi… who ran upto Aakash and tied one end of the tie on his wrist…

A: what the…? creases aa jayengi… escaped his lips on seeing what Khushi had just done…

K: hum istri kardenge… uff…chuimui laad governer… she shouted back

A: what the…!

K: haan bas wahi boliye… madad toh kar nahi sakte…

Ak: aap dono ladiye mat please…

Arnav went upto Khushi

A: kya karna hai bolo!

K: us havan ke thaal mein aag jalayiye… tab tak hum Pandit ji ko utha te hai…

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hope you liked it

will update very soon promise as now i have a story
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Edited by sweetlove4barun - 13 years ago

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