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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2

NK jumped into the room… Arnav could just see his feet.

Payel turned to Khushi who was not there…She was on the floor with Arnav asking him about what to do next. They were quarrelling but in whispers

K: yeh sara bakhera aapne khara kiya hai…ab aap hi battaiye ki main kya karoon…

A: maine? Tum chillayi tum…chup nahi reh sakti thi? He mocked her.

Khushi narrowed her eyes.

K: achcha…agar raat ko main aapke kamre mein aake kehti ki jiji jo Jijaji ke saath bhaag ke shaadi karni hai, to aap kya karte…

A: what the…? Khushi Kumari Gupta humein yeh so…

K: arre haan…aap thode hi na chillate…aap toh what the bolte…aur kuch toh aata nahi…

A: Khushi…pehli baat tum mere kamre mein aa hi nahi paati…doosri baat tumhari jiji Aakash jaise bewkoof nahi hai…

K: haan haan aapko toh pyaar ki batein bewkoofi hi lagegi na…kitni pyaari soch hai…bhaag kar shaadi…she said smiling…

A: haan aur usi vajah se abhi hum dono tumhare bed ke bagal mein chup rahe hai…

K: dekhiy…

P: Khushi…Khushi? She had confusion in her tone…

Just then…NK lay flat on the floor trying to look under the bed.

Payel was shell shocked…

P: yeh ho kya raha hai? Nanheji aap...? aur Khushi kahan gayi?

NK had seen Arnav and Khushi lying on the floor.

NK: maine nanav ko dekhaaa (NK tone) maine Khushi ji ko bhi dekhaaa…?

Payel was still sitting on the bed.

She saw two heads pop up from the bed lining, Arnav's and Khushi's side by side…

P: Khushi…Arnav ji, naheji…aap sab … yeh kya ho raha hai…Khushi tujhe pata tha?

K: nahi jiji…

P: achcha toh tu neeche Arnavji ke saath kya kar rahi thi?

Khushi looked at Arnav and Arnav looked at Khushi…

P: unhe kyun dekh rahi ho…? She then turned to NK…app neeche kyun lete hue hai nanheji?

NK: yeah right… NK stood up

P: aur Khushi…she glared at her

Just the Aakash came out of his hide out…

AK: Payel ji…

Payel turned around

P: Aakash ji…?

Khushi and Arnav stood up.

AK: payelji…

P: aakashji…

AK: payelji…

P: aakashji…

Khushi patted on Arnav's shoulder

Arnav looked at her. She whispered into his ears…

K: "yeh poori raat chalegi…Payel ji Aakash ji…"

Arnav turned to Aakash

A: Aakash!! Jo bolne aaye ho wo bolo…

Ak: ji bhai…

P: kis bare mein baat karni hai? Yeh ho kya raha hai?

Aakash entered the room and came to Payel…

She had got down from the bed…

Ak: payelji…

P: aakashji…

K: uff oh jiji…aap dono yeh hi karte rahoge?... Jijaji jo bolne aaye hai unhe bolne…

Buaji (from outside): arre o sanka devi aur uski behen…

Khushi's eyes widened, lip line shortened…she sucked up some air and turned to Arnav, he too was shocked, Aakash and Payel had tensed expressions on their faces… NK did the unimagined stuff…he ran under the bed and hid his face with his jacket…

NK: no nand kishore please… he shouted…

Arnav looked at Khushi with hope in his eyes that she might have some plan…

Buaji by the time was at their door and was knocking…

K: neeche…!! She shouted…

A: what?

Bu: ae titliya…payelia…kaisi aawaz hai arre dawza kholo…she knocked on the door again.

K: jaldi…nanheji ke sath neeche chupiye…jaldi…she gave Arnav a strong push on his shoulder…jaiye…Jijaji aap bhi

Aakash did as instructed.

Arnav was shocked to realise the force with which Khushi had pushed him. He always thought that she was weak… but no she did have enough strength to force Arnav Singh Raizada to stoop down if not make him sit…

A: OK!! He glared at her and crawled under the bed. Arnav and Aakash on the sides and NK in the middle…

K: jiji palang me char jao…

Payel jumped in. Khushi ran to the door and opened it…

K: kya baat… aaa…(fake yawns are basically longer than originals)

Buaji ji didn't wait for her to complete up her fake yawn and pushed her in

Bu: tumre kamre se kaisi kaisi aawajien aa rahi thi… kaoon tha eehaan?

K: k-k-k-kaun Buaji? Kaun hi toh tha…

B: kaoon?

K: kaun?

B: kaoon? Stressing up on the word

K: kaun? She too stressed up…

Bu: dhat pagli… kaoon tha? Abhi boli na koi tha…

K: haan…tha na…

Payel glared at Khushi…

UNDER THE BED…

When the Kaun Convo was going on

A: yeh Khushi kya kar rahi hai… he thought… he dare not speak up or else NK would create a massacre…

He was still hiding his face in the jacket. Arnav and Aakash did not bother to tell him anything. They had more serious things to bother about.

Just then the trio heard Khushi say "haan tha na…"

NK put up his face from his jacket to say something but both Arnav and Aakash literally slapped their hands on his mouth.

Arnav whispered, "one sound NK and you are dead…" he threatened.

NK simply nodded. Arnav decided not to let his mouth be open. Aakash too didn't free his mouth as if he had read Arnav's mind. Arnav gave a grateful nod to Aakash and felt proud that Aakash was his brother.

IN THE ROOM

B: kaun tha nandkishore…?

K: haan…wahi toh they… she said all tensed when suddenly it dawned on her that she was blabbering out the truth…

B: ka kaha sanka devi…swayam nand kishore…she said almost joining up her hands…when…majak kar rahi ho sanka devi… she hit her on her head…

Bu: thik thik batao…

K: k-k-k-k hawa… hawa…haan hawa… she smiled…

Bu: tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai… jao so ja…she stopped and stared at something on the floor…

Khushi followed the source and so did Payel. Khushi's eye brows shot up, eyes widened, lip line shortened… Payel's eyes also widened. She looked up at Khushi who had closed her eyes and stuck out her tongue…

While covering up NK's mouth Aakash's leg was displaced a bit and his boot had stuck out from under the bed. Buaji had seen that…

B: eeka…? She bed down and tried pulling it out… she gave a massive pull and half came out Aakash.

Arnav realised that…he left NK's mouth and NK shouted out, "oh no…Nand kishore…!"

Buaji hadn't let go Aakash's leg. He tried his level best to free it but all his efforts were in vain…

Arnav rolled out from under the bed when Buaji had fully pulled Aakash out…

Payel was shocked. She knew she was dead. Khushi almost fainted because she had never realised that Buaji was strong enough to literally put out a gabru jawan from under the bed that too single handed.

Bu: hay re nand kishore… Aakash bitua… she said shocked

She straightened up and saw Arnav standing on the other side of the bed…

Bu: hay re nand kishore…

NK shouted : NOOO!!!

Bu: hain??? Aur kaun hai neeche?

She bent down again…

NK quivered.

B: Arre nand kishore…

A: come out NK… he declared…

NK at 1st resisted but then slowly started crawling out… Arnav had walked upto the edge of the bed…he was not very far from where Khushi was standing. Payel had got down from the bed and was standing in between Khushi and Aakash. Suddenly Khushi was struck by an idea. Buaji was still looking under the bed watching NK come out.

Khushi grabbed Arnav's hand with one hand… and Payel with the other

K: Jijaji jiji ka haath pakriye… she ordered. Aakash though confused held her and Khushi pulled the other three out of the room.

Buaji turned to Khushi and saw the quad run out. Nk had just placed his hand out from under the bed. It was directly under Buaji's bum. She sat down in shock slapping her forehead and she sat on NK's hand.

NK shouted at the top of his voice : MERA RAATH (haath…hand)

Khushi and the trio were now out in the hall. She quickly opened the main door and pulled them out of the house.

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Hope you liked it

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Thank You everyone for liking and commenting this effort of mine
hope have not let you down in part 2...
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Srijanee...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
your title is soo original!
love the concept and the story!
when you continue plz pm me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
This Is Getting Better 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Bahaha! This was hilarious!
Edited by Rhysenn - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
God it was hillarious...i loved it...i laughed so much that i had tears in my eyes...awesome aand amazing update,can't wait to read the next part...u r an ace writer👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
🤣 awesome part

thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
hilarious dear...it keeps getting better and better...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Please post the next part soon!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome...🤣 plzz PM wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
totally hilarious...

luved it...

thanx for the pm

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