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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

lol... that was hillarious... :D

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Annie

@ayaniie-chan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Rae, you're too versatile!!.. i read two of your OS[es] today only & they are totally different from one another.. the ones I read earlier are also different but the comparison today is more obvious, I really love this, it is just the cutest story ever, Ayaan being the most adorable baby ever, I could imagine both his parents' features & characters on him ! Too good~ Loved the ending & the transition between dream & reality.. the ending was great where Khushi acknowledges reality yet yearns for that dream!! Keep it up!!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

very beautiful ...bought tears to my eyes ...keep on writting ...

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Pam K.

@EverydayCloud

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Wow. That was really, really good :D The writing and the emotions in it were just perfect! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Psychedelic
Awww! It was dream!! :( Felt bad for Khushi. I always imagined in my mind that Arnav's kid would have him wrapped around his/her finger and Khushi would be the antagonist among the trio. :P But I like this, Khushi playing her Husband against her kid! :D The dream was indeed wishful! Loved that you used the dialogue "Asli duniya mein sirf dil toot te hai"

Thanks for the PM Rae! :)

Thank You! :)

I am glad you enjoyed it.

And that is my view on ArHi and their kids as well but I wanted to portray a different side here. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Lyraa99
this was another fab piece by u rae...
first it was so happy happy and finally it left with a touch of sadness... which added magic to it... love such stuff
awesome

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it. The contrast was what I was aiming at.

Originally posted by: PixieFlame
Wow! :(

Thank You but dont feel sad.

Originally posted by: mandy15
awesum os dear:)
loved it:)

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: greenarrow
Awesome OS.. Ayaan nice name..

Thank You! :)

I actually rejected so many names because they didnt sound like ArHi's kid's name! Lol! ;) :D

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl
Arnav telling Shaitan's story to his son, this is way too cute.
And the child, you have described him so perfectly.
Adorable story.

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: anurao.66
A fantastic OS Rae, I just loved it. Please continue if it is possible.

Anu

Thank You, Anu! :)

I think this is going to remain an OS...but if I get inspired I shall surely continue. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Poonam786
Awww.. How cute! Loved it! And I'm holding onto the hope that one day Khushi's dream will definitely come true.. :)

Thank You! :)

And same here. :)

Originally posted by: Shruti_P
wow
such a cute OS
ayaan is such a cute name...(CVs u read the name we want one kid of arnav named ayaan ok)
coming back to OS again

lol...gobi less future...🤣
and shaitaan aake un bachon ko kha jata hai jo gobi nahi khate...arnav is becoming more like khushi...😆

and then u cracked the dream rae...😭

asli duniya me to sirf dil toote hai...🥺...it was so heartfelt

awesome OS

btw when u updating ur FF😛

Awww! I am so sorry!

But the contrasting emotion was what I was aiming for...

Thank You for commenting! :)

And about the ff... *hides behind a tree* :p

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Nmyra
Ahh this is sooo cute - just what the doctor ordered!! Al this IPK forum Plagiarism nonsense has been driving us soo up a wall this a welcome break!! I <3 this!!

Thank You so much, Nymra! :)

That means a hell lot! Glad it made you happy.

Originally posted by: melovemayur
Oh!! It was all a dream!!! In all d OSs I read here, ArHi has daughter..Its d first time they have a son!!

I wish it was real!! Brilliant OS!! n Thanks for d PM :)

Thank You! :)

Really? I didnt notice...glad you did though! Lol!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: appy_12
Baby, you're on a roll!!! :D Every time I get a PM from you I'm like, 'Ooohh! Come to mumma! Lemme get my coffee/cereal/grapes/gulab jamun/moti choor ke laddoo/ ras malai.. Yea, my past week was a sweet one. Dad had come, and well it was 'partaaayyy!' time! You've spoilt me.. I look around helplessly now, when I'm sipping my coffee and don't have anything to read! :D :D

This one was so sweet! Aww.. You know I was watching Juno just now, so this OS came at the right time. I'm in that, 'Wow! I get to give life to another being!' mood! :)

Awesome dear! Keep writing such sweet things!

P.S: Typed too much, nahin? Ignore kar, okay?? Mood mein hoon.. Delete karne ka mann bhi nahin hai ab! :P

Thank You so much! And the fact that you enjoy my OS/FFs with food and/drink make me feel so cool! Lol! ;) :D

And dude...I LOVE YOUR SUCH COMMENTS! No editing, okay? :D