ArHi OS - Dreams Eng Translation AVAILABLE!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res... :D :D

I know u hate just "res"
Will edit in a while :P

*edit*

"WHAT THE??!!" was my first reaction when I realized that all of the adorable things at the start was a dream!!!

Ayaan!! Loved the name in itself 😳 😃
And he was bound to be not so normal, just because he had ArHi as his parents??!! 😆

And the child's thoughts and actions were described beautifully too. . .

"Gobi-less world" cracked me up fully!!! 🤣

And finally, Khushi's disappointment was so heart wrenching, Rae. . . . 😭

"Asli duniya mein sirf dil toot te hain"?? Aww. . . 🥺

P.S: And aren't you supposed to be working on. . . . Oh, I dunno. . . . Your FF, or something. . . .
Just saying!! * Shrugs non-chalantly *

P.P.S: To hell with subtlety!! Go and type the update for your FF, girl!!! 😃 😆
Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woot Woot !!
I read it without your PM..yayyy
And this was chuch a chweeet dreams mera bacha Rae !!
I mean seriously Awwwiieee...And well I knew you made give the most twisted ends...Cause somehow you do that in an amazing way and still the story seems amaaizng !!!
I love you so muchie!!🤗(our usual ritual the jhappi and pappi)
And then aww...I could actually imagine that whole Ayaan thing out there...And how Khushi forced him into the whole gobi khao with Arnav !!
And rakshaas khaa jaayega ??Seriosuly...That was damn hilarious !!I was reading that part and burst out laughing so badly...I have tears in my eyes🤣
And fir the sapna toot gaya effect🥺 That one moment I felt sooo bad for Khushi !!I so wish after all the MUs of the show are cleared we do get such mushy scenes with Arnav-Khu and Anjali's kid cause Im damn sure they both are gonna love the kid !!
And as Khushi said..Arnav would probably be one of the best Mama's if it ever comes to that...And about her not ebing a part of his other half journey...Im saying this to your character(I think Ive gone insane talking to imaginary people )Well Dont make the decisions so soon Khu !!You're under a permanent captive of the world's most amazing and sexy man with the most expressive eyes...So you'd better be there for him always...
Loved the OS Rae !!Muahhh🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS. I am totally in dreamland. Thinking how it will be for Arnav to say Shaitan stories to his son.. Cute Ayaan.. It was super cute. Thanks for the PM which i will eventually get..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

res... :D :D

I know u hate just "res"
Will edit in a while :P

*edit*

"WHAT THE??!!" was my first reaction when I realized that all of the adorable things at the start was a dream!!!

Ayaan!! Loved the name in itself 😳 😃
And he was bound to be not so normal, just because he had ArHi as his parents??!! 😆

And the child's thoughts and actions were described beautifully too. . .

"Gobi-less world" cracked me up fully!!! 🤣

And finally, Khushi's disappointment was so heart wrenching, Rae. . . . 😭

"Asli duniya mein sirf dil toot te hain"?? Aww. . . 🥺

P.S: And aren't you supposed to be working on. . . . Oh, I dunno. . . . Your FF, or something. . . .
Just saying!! * Shrugs non-chalantly *

P.P.S: To hell with subtlety!! Go and type the update for your FF, girl!!! 😃 😆


Hahahahahahaha! Aye aye captain! :p

And if you had THAT reaction, then MISSION ACCOMPLISHED! ;) :D

I am glad you liked it Harshu and gave me the reaction this OS is working towards! Thank You sooo much! :) <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*res**
"In the real world hearts only break"
wow Rae beautiful 👏
Edited by BarunForever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww! It was dream!! :( Felt bad for Khushi. I always imagined in my mind that Arnav's kid would have him wrapped around his/her finger and Khushi would be the antagonist among the trio. :P But I like this, Khushi playing her Husband against her kid! :D The dream was indeed wishful! Loved that you used the dialogue "Asli duniya mein sirf dil toot te hai"

Thanks for the PM Rae! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was another fab piece by u rae...
first it was so happy happy and finally it left with a touch of sadness... which added magic to it... love such stuff
awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-

Woot Woot !!
I read it without your PM..yayyy
And this was chuch a chweeet dreams mera bacha Rae !!
I mean seriously Awwwiieee...And well I knew you made give the most twisted ends...Cause somehow you do that in an amazing way and still the story seems amaaizng !!!
I love you so muchie!!🤗(our usual ritual the jhappi and pappi)
And then aww...I could actually imagine that whole Ayaan thing out there...And how Khushi forced him into the whole gobi khao with Arnav !!
And rakshaas khaa jaayega ??Seriosuly...That was damn hilarious !!I was reading that part and burst out laughing so badly...I have tears in my eyes🤣
And fir the sapna toot gaya effect🥺
That one moment I felt sooo bad for Khushi !!I so wish after all the MUs of the show are cleared we do get such mushy scenes with Arnav-Khu and Anjali's kid cause Im damn sure they both are gonna love the kid !!
And as Khushi said..Arnav would probably be one of the best Mama's if it ever comes to that...And about her not ebing a part of his other half journey...Im saying this to your character(I think Ive gone insane talking to imaginary people )Well Dont make the decisions so soon Khu !!You're under a permanent captive of the world's most amazing and sexy man with the most expressive eyes...So you'd better be there for him always...
Loved the OS Rae !!Muahhh🤗


@First bold - You did! YAY! 😆

@Second bold - That change in reaction is EXACTLY what I wanted! WOOT WOOT! 😉 😆

@Third bold - Oh yeah! :D <3

@Fourth Bold - I have conveyed 'Khu' the message. *nods*

@End comment - I love your comment, Shobu! 🤗

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