A Promise ( a random thought)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was middle of night when he heard knock at the door he look at the bed she was asleep

Arnav:when she is here then who is making the noise ?he just got up from recliner and walk to the door as he open

Akash pull his arm

Arnav:What?

Akash: buaji called babuji had got a sever heart attacked.

Arnav: look in at sleeping khushi"i will bring her you go "he just walk in and sat next to her"Khushi"placed his hand on her shoulder to wake her

Khushi: just in sleep turn

Arnav: "khushi get up "pat her cheek

Khushi: just open her eyes look at him"aap thek haan ,tabiyat thek ha "she just sat

Arnav"i am fine"hold her hand "khushi i a bad news "

Khushi: kya she look in his eyes

Arnav: babuji

Khushi: hold his arm"kya huwa babuji ko"

Arnav: cup her face ""khushi he had a sever attack "

Khushi: look at him"hum ko jana hai"

Arnav: shake his head in yes help her in getting up

Khushi: just ran to door,he just picked her duppata and ran behind her .


in car he just placed her duppata in her lap and hold her hand tight

Khushi: look at him "who told you?"

Arnav:Akash they left before .

Khushi: he will be fine

Arnav cell started ringing he just picked it up on other end it was Akash

Akash"bhai come quickly he want to meet you""

Arnav: i am on my way

Khushi:why he want to meet you?

Arnav: look at her "i dont know "he just drive fast to reach there ..



At hospital

Buaji: hold Khushi hand"babuwa he want to meet you "

Arnav:let her come with me

Buaji:shake her head in no

Arnav: "i am with her let her come" he just hold her hand tight

Buaji:shake her head as the walk in

Babuji look at Arnav and ask him to come close to him he was holding Akash hand in his one hand

Arnav just shift her hand in his left hold his hand in his he asked Akash to removed his mask,he did it as he said "babuji Promise me you both you will take care of my daughters after me and will be with them in think and thin"

both brothers in chores "we will"

Babuji turn to Arnav" she is very dear to me never leave her alone as she had in enough in life "

Arnav : "i will not leave her alone it is my promise to you ,she is very dear to me too" he placed his hand on his heart

Babuji just closed his eyes for ever as he felt his heart beat was same as his for his khushi ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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yipeee🥳
i m the first to comment ...hurrraaahhh
love this os too
u don't even know how happy i m to be first one to comment on u r os

look how happy i am...heheh

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: danno

yipeee🥳
i m the first to comment ...hurrraaahhh
love this os too
u don't even know how happy i m to be first one to comment on u r os

look how happy i am...heheh

it make me laugh when you guys fight for first

i will added one more shot at night see will you be first again or not😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26

it make me laugh when you guys fight for first


i will added one more shot at night see will you be first again or not😉

aww...hehhehehehe😆
one more os
okkk
mai apni poori jee jaan laga doongi per baki sab mai bhagwaan ke haath mein chodti hoon hehehhe
😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats a good one - Keep writing more OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it. So nice. Sad for Khushi but happy that Arnav promised to be there for her.
Thanks Naddiya.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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god i loved it di
it was beautiful di
i hope arnav keeps up his promise well
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Too good,
how do u write such beautiful stories, love them
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heya

beautifully written...
loved the way bauji made arnav promise...

many thanks for the pm..: ]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was good one..hope he keeps his promise

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