OS-Tom and Jerry Part 2 - Page 3

Originally posted by: tia.o

Lol... I love the new names Khushi has for him, caveman, fire breathing dragon... And omg, I nearly choked when ASR wanted to break every bone of Aman's body in Alphabetical order. Love it... They truly deserve each other.please continue...

Thankx tia... Tht alphabetical dialogue is one of my fav also... I actually heard it frm sumone..so used it.

Originally posted by: guturgutur

interesting.. there were bits when I lost the continuity, but overall, verry nice OS. tfs!

Thankx for pointing out the fact tht continuity was missing n I agree wid yu... B'coz i wrote it in small sections and at different places.. But i'll try to improve nxt time... Thankx once again for yur valuable feedback.

Amazing!! Loved it!! Pls do continue!

wow !!! cool...
finally !!! d barriers r gone !!!
hope there is a 3rd part...

loved it
pls update soon

loved possessive arnav... please do continue!

Originally posted by: ashred12

wow !!! cool...
finally !!! d barriers r gone !!!
hope there is a 3rd part...

Thank yu for this lovely comment... And I've nt planned third part for this OS... Writing is not so easy for me and i think there r so many Gr8 writers on this forum.. So my absense does'nt matter much.. But thnkx for liking my work.

Originally posted by: natashaa46

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#6600FF">wow ! just read both the parts of ur story n absolutely loved it👏</font></font>

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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#6600FF">its just sooo seem natuarlly related to the actual story coz in there too we have seen the sudden closeness of rnav ...he wanting to be close to khushi ...not understanding y he was jealous of NK at times ...n then the realisation ...😳</font></font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#6600FF">so i enjoyed ur story n hope to have something like wht u wrote in the show n i just it wont be long coz as soon as arnav finds out tht truth n repents of his acts of thinking khushi as cheater ...we can surely have cute scenes ...n cute - naughty encounters of arhi bedroom r sure there !☺️</font></font>

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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#6600FF">So, lets just wait n watch ...coz ...ArHi ROXXX!!😳</font></font>

Thank yu so much for reading and taking out the time to write such a beautiful comment for my writing...And i agree wid yu Arhi rocks!!!!!!!

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