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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS: Mata-e
-Jaan
*Listen to this song while you read it, would give a better effect*
She looked at the wilderness around her, the absolute peace of mind, where only nature and its divinity accompanied her, where she had the liberty to gaze, wonder, stare at any or everything, without the restriction of anyone, without any one directing her life to how it was to be lead. That feeling of hollowness, of confusion crept in her innocent soul, and she just stared at the wonders of nature around her. It was all so magical so divine, she didnt want to move out of the moment. it was what captured her soul, and made her ponder over the things, that had between them. Between HIM and HER. It was a feeling that came from deep within, which felt so lovely to feel, however at the same time it arose unknown confusion in her heart, which her left her wondering over things which were beyond her perception.
Her comprehension, and deciphering skills halted as she thought, of all the times she had been close to him, close to see his every feature emote love, that was deep hidden in the layers of hatred and darkness that he had draped around his beating heart. The way he had untangled her from the confusing mesh of fairy lights she had tangled herself in. The way he had taken her hand into his and steadly walked her out through the lightness, his hand into hers, providing her all the security and protection that she needed in her man. Her DREAM MAN. How, in the most delicate manner and in his perfect granduer, he had tied her beloved anklet around ankle, producing from it a music which it had never produced until his touch had fallen on it.
That almost happened kiss, when his lips were only centimeters apart from her and loved blossomed between them from the heavens. The way he had so boldly asked if she could do what he could, and she had nodded with all the confidence, that she could, only to get him mischeviously, yet mesmerizingly kissing her ever so lovingly on her cheek, for a second oozing the life out of her. He had in the most gentle manner, held her hand, when she was struck so deep with fear of being humiliated in front of her audience, he had assured that he was there by her side, fighting all the odds, and in need she would always find him looking over her, fetching her aid from wherever possible. Only sometime earlier, she had seen him publicly excersing his rights over her, as her husband, and being the one who would rightfully apply colour on her cheeks, and not anyother man had the right to touch her soft milky skin.
She sighed to herself as she realized that they were all just memories, beautiful memories that would always live with her, stored in the most precious part of her heart, where she had build her world of dreams, wheich now rotated around him and actions. Little did she know, lost in her thoughts, that lost in his thoughts, and there world of love, she hadnt noticed him, having caught sight of her walking upto her steadily, concern for her evident in her eyes. She felt the breeze around her chill, gush past at her at a pace, signalling her that he was there. Somehwere near her. She slowly turned around to see, true to the signal of the wind, him standing there, in his white shirt, looking ever the more handsome, standing at her dainty form. They looked into eachothers eyes maybe confused, maybe hopeful, but they looked, for as long as they could, there eyes communicating with eachother. Gradually gaining control over her self, she turned around from his intensfied gaze, to ponder over who she saw stood behind her. Maybe it was all good to be true, she thought, maybe it was merrily her illusion of seeing all this. This was not the same man, who had her pass through tremedous horror, inflicted heavy grief and pain to her, this coudnt be the same man who she had openly expressing her hatred for, this was not him, this was someone else, the person who hid behind the mask, the person who she dearly loved.
For a moment he felt taken aback, but he continued to walk towards her, realizing that her reacting like this was normal. She always did that. As he approached her and drew in closer to her, she vigourously rubbed her eyes, which were itching preety badly due to the red colour that had accidently found its path to her delicate iris, making her aqueous humour function improperly getting more blurry than required. He looked at her rubbing her eyes away in confusion, and not being able to bear her uncomfrotable state, he turned around, so that she faced him now, throwing a questioning look at his as he did so. Her eyes asked him if he still cared, if she could still re live those moments that she had only earlier recalled, but her eyes were blurry, as the itching increased rapidly and she again started to rub her eyes to rid them of the irritating red colour.
He saw her doing that, and not being able to resist her unease, he stopped her hand mid way, as she moved upward once again, in a futile attempt to get rid of the colour. He brought her hand slowly by her side, and as there contact grew she stood their stationary allowing him to do wonders to her rapidly beating heart. He pressed his thumb on the side of her forehead, and lightly pushed away the strand of her that kept blowing on her face, causing hindrance for him to see her beauty at full length. Tenderly, he blew a gust of wind at her eyes, to remove the colour from her eyes. she just stared into his eyes and remembered the time he had done that last time to her. She continued to look into his eyes trying to find the solace and comfort that those eyes failed to offer her in the last few days. Why did he do this to her, she wanted to know that. Why did cause her heart to jump one moment, and sink the other?
Being satisfied with his attempt of removing the grains of colour from her eyes, he felt his gaze on him, genrating unknown sensations, however she continued to look, and he too met her gaze, looking at her beaufitul eyes, that bore into his own, seeking answers to clear the turbelnce in her mind. Realizing the close contact they were at, she brushed his hand off her cheek, casuing hism to be surprised, and seeing the face of rejection he moved away, and started to walk away from her when she interwinde her finegrs into his, before he took them away with his fleeting body, and held on to them as tightly as she could, to stop him from going. The force of her grip, caused him to halt and he turned around as he saw her holding his hand tightly, telling through his gestures that she did not want him to leave just now.
She came forward as he stood stunned, still pondering over her bold attempt, and her tear filled eyes looked into his shocked ones, asking her why ahd she stopped him, when she had earlier proved that she wanted him to go. She reduced the distance between them, and innocently cupped his face into her hand, as he still stared into her eyes bewildered at her sudden reactions. He looked down at her fragile, white hands coming into contact with his rough skin, pure surprise, and a bit of contentment radiating through him.
" Hum app sein kuch phonchna chahtein hain, Arnavji" ( I want to ask you something, Arnavji)
As she said this she withdrawed her hands from his cheek, and moved her eyes down to look at his stationary hand. She brought her own hands towards it and held his hand into hers, brining near her heart, wanting him to feel her rising heart beat which happen to rise only when he was near. She wanted him to know, of her troubles, of this disturbing organ, which was beating and pouding at her chest at such a high frequecy that she was highly confused, and coudnt understand the nature of the fuctioning of this maddening organ.
" Aisa kyun hota hain, jab bhi app hamarein pass atein tou hamarein dil ki dharkan tez hojatein hain? Hum ne samjhna ki bohat koshish ki laikin samjh nahin payein, bhulana chahte hain laikin bhula nahin paye, Aisa kyun hota hain?"
He could feel his heart break, at her innocent question. She had spoken out the confusion in her heart, causing his burried feelings, that he had enclosed around strict bodudaired to revive again, hitting on to these embankments builed by him, causing his heart to wrench in pain. Her innocence, her query, the confusion in her heart, with sentiments over flowing her coudnt resist his eyes from going moist. It was a question that he knew the answer of, that he had wanted to tell her about, but he mistaken her, his had misjudged her, and thought of her as betraying him. But today, she was standing in front of him, holding him close to herself, letting him know of all the beautiful wonders that he unknowingly did to her, like she did to him.
Tears threaten to descend from his eyes, but he fought them back, and lovingly as a sign of gratitude, and a show of his own true feelings for her, he cupped her face in his hands like she had earlier done to him, causing her to flinch slightly at his touch.
"Batayein na aisa kyun hota hain"
She repetaed her question to him, causing all the remaining coudaries that he had build to complete fall down, surrendering his heart completely to her innocent request. His heart was filled with grief and pain, his could see himself inwardly repenting to himself, of the horrible he had commited of mistaking her, of misjuding her love for him. His eyes were moist, and all he could feel was him and her, together, under this coloured roof of cloth, staring into eachothers eyes, him looking into something so pure and virgin, that it scared him that his touch her would steal her virginty from her. Her eyes, constantly maintained contact with his, as that world of hatred feel in front of him crumlbed into pieces. He wanted to tell her, why it happened, because he loved her, because they loved eachother simple as that, but as he prepared to give her the answer, she closed her eyes, and fainted right into his arms, where she rightfully belonged with him, for him, always.
He was taken aback, by her loss of conciousness, as she rested her head on his shoulder, her body lacking any muscular movement, and his tear glands giving under the pressure of the situation, a lone but tearful tear, trailed its way through his cheeks, proving his unlimited love for her. The tear moved, and another followed, but before it could come down, he had already wiped it away, and swung her in the air, keeping his hand one under his back and the other other under her knees, swiftly picking her up from her feet, carrying her to the safest place in the world that he knew off, because that is where it had all happened, every moment that cherised together, had happened there, it was their heaven, their bliss where he took her to, her sleeping place, THE POOLSIDE.
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P.S: So how was it people? Just wrote it down because could resist to write something after yesterdays overwhelming episode. I know its nowhere near to the real magic ArHi created, but just one of my futile attempts.😳
Do hit the like button to appreciate (if you like it), and leave back your comments, they are always welcomed.
Love,
Batool😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res;)

so back on page one😉

ohhh really my dear batool, its futile attempt?
Is just amazing
the emotions, their mind thought
beautifully written.
Nt getting enough of ystrdays epi. Aftr watching atleast 100 times.
All flashbacks u written reminded me of all that romantic arhi scenes.
And arnavs reaction over khushis innocent qstion was awww
and ur descriptiom of how h was trying to control his tears :*
finally their savior ,their poolside
loved it.
If i get such a beautifully written WU, i l read it aftr watching every epi:)

p.s.- exams?
Edited by aparna5293 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww tht was cute as always batool...short and cute 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
WOW...well played feelings and quite interesting narration...
Cheerzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's really nice..and I liked the song alot too..!!
I heard it for the first time..and I have already heard it 10 times..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi , Just a suggestion .. Whenever you write another OS please .. please write it type it in a darker colour , It was such a big strain on my eyes . Sorry... if I offended you . PS : I loved your Os .👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!
I loved it, beautiful descriptions for yesterdays episode
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
simply beautiful OS batool
the emotions were nicely put into words
batool that was gr8
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it loved it loved it!
really beautifully expressed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: subiscs

awesomeee yaar!!! 😊

Thanks alot dear.🤗

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