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prologue
anjali raizada-a widow who has only one son called arnav
arnav singh raizada-a doctor age about 30, lives in Mumbai wiv his mother . He was married but her wife is dead(its not khushi).
Khudhi gupta-she lives in delhi and works in a big company. She only has a sisterr and they are settled in delhi. She is 27 old
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
We saw a girl dressed in dark blue patiala salwar kameez, borders were embroided in red. She was lightly made up and had chocolate brown, curled hair. She was wearin big earins to go wiv her clothes and she had a small suitcase which she was carrin. As she gets out ov the train in mumbai station we saw the station crowded wiv all types ov people. Some of them were there to see off people, some were excited to go on a holiday but she looked much tensed. It looked as if she was waitin for someone but when she found no one there and her hopes gets low she started to walk out ov station.
On the other hand we saw a boy standing in hospital's corridor with his friend. He was wearing a collar black t-shirt followed by Armani jeans he had a coat on top and has gelled his hair.
akashi (his friend)-yaar arnav tu shaadi kyun nahi kar leta...tu kab tak bhabhi ke yaadon ke saharye jiye ga.
arnav-akash tum jab dekhu yeh baat leke beth jatye ho...abhi to no shaadi.After his work finished arnav gets in his car and drives towards his home.
She walked out ov the station finkin 'how could he do that...woh aesa nahi kar sakta uspe maine bharosa kiya or woh...', while thinkin all this she didn't realise how far she walked. She came to very lonely place where she found some badmash guys there...the first one said,
'kia kamal ki cheez hai' (as she looked pretty)
The second one-excuse me madam app ko lift chaye?
The Girl-no thank i'll manage. She sarted to walk fast but the boys followed her. She was very scared. The badmash boys stand front ov her and they started to touch her. They were forcing as the girl shout for help. A car went by stopped on the corner. The man walked towards that girl to help (its none other than arnav)...those boys left her and walked away. arnav came to the gal and asked her if she's alright.
arnav-aap theek hain', she kept on cryin, 'dekhein app chup ho jaye...chalye main appko ghar chord deta hoon. App ka naam kia hai.
'khushi' she replied.
'Ok khushi aap kahan rehti hain...i'll drop u home' arnav said. Khushi was clueless as how to answer him.
Khushi-main delhi main rehti hoon or kisi kam se yahan ayi hoon per jisye mujhe milna tha woh to aya hi nahi.
arnavl-oho ho sakta hai woh late ho gaye ho so would like to wait for him?
Khushi-woh late nahi ho sakta. Hamye subha milna tha or ab sham ho gayi hai so...
arnav-i see. Ok khushi app mere saath chalye hum unko dhundh ley gain and don't worry main akele nahi apni mama ke saath rehta hoon so u could stay wiv us for some time. Khushi was confussed as what should she do? Will be good to trust a stranger but there was no other way left so she sat in the car and arnav drove towards his house.
Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago
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Yayyy...me first!!..lol...wow its an amazing concept...totally different...( I like dfferent) anyways...thanks a bunch for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
As arnav and khushi entered they saw anjali sittin there n havin coffee.
anjlai-arye arnavl tu agaya or yeh kun...
arnav-mama yeh khushi ji hain, turns to khushi 'or khushi yeh meri mama.'
Khushi-namaste aunty.
anjali-namaste beta
After taruf and all that arnav explained his mom that she came here for some work but the person supposed to pick khush as she doesn't live in Mumbai, couldn't come and she is tryin to call him from ages but he is not pickin up so she might stay here untill 2moro. anjali agrees to that.
anjlai-khushi tum chaye ya coffee kuch lo gi. Khushi was really sad so she could only say
Khushi-aunty kuch bhi nahi. arnav left to change his clothes as arnav left anjali felt strange because of khushi's behaviour. She was very uncomfortable so anjali asked
anjali –khushi ek baat poochu mind maat karna...tum kafi udaas lag rahi ho. Koi prob hai tum comfortable nahi ho?
Khushi-nahi aunty...aisi koi baat nahi hai...she stops for some tym and finks a while...kia karoon bata doon (to herself) woh aunty main...kia...woh
anjali –mujhe apni maa samajh ke bolo
Khushi gets emotional to hear maa because she is Orphan and lives in a orphanage with his brother so she replies...
Khushi-aunty main yahan kaam se nahi balke delhi chor ke ayi hoon. i came delhi and left my brother,i used to chat with a guy and w fell in love and i came here i trusted him but he did not come..yahan settle honye ayi thi or phir apnye bhai ko bhi le ati per ab main kia karoon kia wapis chali jaon...
There was complete silence but than anjali speaks up...
anjali-ho sakta hai kehe is busy and he could not come.ya koi emergency bhi to...ho sakta hai woh kal tak contact karle...
Khushi's face brightens up and she turns her face around and finds arnav there. There was complete silence but speaks anjali
anjali-main chaye lati hoon. She left
arnavl was just starin at khushi and than smiles...
arnaV-I think mama is right. Woh zaroor contact karye ga. Acha tum fresh ho jao wahan upper right main ek karma hai tum wahan reh sakti ho...go and get fresh. He walks away. arnav goes to his room and pick his wife picture )
arnav with wet eyes-aaj khushi ka pyar dekh kar mujhe bohot akela pan mehsus ho raha hai...tumhe gaye hue 5 saal ho gaye per tum aaj bhi yahin basi ho...tum kyun chali gayi...i love u very much...and keeps his head down khushi heard all because she went to thanks arnav for what he done as without him she would have been in big trouble but gets really sad for arnavl. Kashish went in to console him.
Khushi-arnavl, he turns around,dont say nythng i hav heard everythng,dont b sad who will also meet someone in life, or tum ro ge to ussye bohot bura lagye ga. She takes him near window, "woh dekhu tara woh wahan se tumhe dekh rahi hai or dukhi ho jaye gi tumhe aese dekh ke so smile" he smiles, "thats like a good boy (he's not a boy) friends" she asked gives him her hand arnav thinks for a while and eccept her friendship.
Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue !!!!
loved it 👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3
It was the next morning. The sun was shining, birds were singing, wind was blowing. We saw khushi coming out of her room. She was dressed up really nicely because she was going to look for her boyfriend. She was really happy. arnav was also set to leave for hospital.
arnav-khuh chalo main tumhe chord ata hoon station tak
Kh-thanks
They had breakfast and left 4 their work. In da car arnavl said
"mujhe call karke bata dena kia hoa or agar prob ho to pick karne bula lena." arnavl smiles as khushi.
Kh-i hope ke mujhe woh aaj mil jaye or haan bohot bohot shukria itna kuch kia main kaise yeh ehsaan utaroon gi.
arn-doston main ehsaan jaisa kuch nahi hota. Dosti tumne start to ki hia per isye nibhaon ga main. Acha yeh to batao ke uska naam kia hai.
Khu-uska naam shyam hai
arn-hmmm nice name.
arnl-Lo station bhi agaya. Byekhsuh!
Khushi stepped out ov car n started to walk but turned back n smiled sweetly to armav n said bye. arnav l was feeling bad because he doesn't want khush to leave, he doesn't know himself why was he feeling that way. While thinking all that he reached hospital. He went to his cabin where he found akash
aki-yaar tu itni der se aya hai. How come? arnav tells him everything happened yesterday.
aka-tu usye apne ghar le gaya. Tu pagal tu nahi hai?
arn- or main kia karta. Well she's nice gal.
akai-hmmm shuru shuru mian yesa hi hota hai and than...
arnl-aka tu pagal hai. Its nofin like that...
aka-ya ya...acha sun aaj ek patient aya hai...well uska kal accident ho gaya hai and woh coma main chala gaya hai. Uske family or uska kuch nahi pata chala hai.
arn yaar log kyun carefully gari nahi chalatye. Ab koi agar family main hoga to kitna pareshan hoga. Kaise contact kare. Koi driving licence nahi mila...
aka-i think woh motor cycle main tha n wahan se kuch nnahi mila...well main police se baat karke malum karta hoon.
arnl-main bhi us patient ko check kar leta hoon...
aka-ok...acha sun mujhe aaj jaldi jana hai
arnl-whatever...ok chalye jana...
akai_thank you
arn-hmmm. Both leave. After half an hour akas enters in arnavl cabin.
aka-yaar woh police waloon ne bike ke number se us insaan ka naam address wagera pata laga liya hai...
arn-hmmm
aka-tu khush nahi hai
arn-kia kaha tu ne
aka-arn what are u upto...tu khuya wa hai...whats the matter?
arn-pata nahi subha se kuch kaam karne ka maan anhi hai bas dil kar raha hai betha rahoon kuch na karoon...
aka-or jabse tunye khushi ke chura hai tab se hu raha ahi
arn-shayad haan...what ji nahi aesa kuch bhi nahi hai...woh to aese hi.
akai-hum love guru hain hum se koi baat chupti nahi. u r in love beta...
arn-ya as if...well tujse argue karne ka koi fayda nahi hai. Main ja ke us patient ko phir se karloon
aka-ok than. arnav was really unhappy that khushi will not come back now.
arnl-yeh mujhe kia ho raha hai...khushi hi bar bar kyun dikh rahi hai...just then he saw khush standing there. arnavl walks towards khush. He was really happy...
arnav-khuish tum yahan ...kaise i mean kyun? Oh god
'sir sir sir!!! Yeh khushi kon hai main to nurse hoon (hahaha) 😆 😆 😆
aynav backs off...I 'm sorry...nurse leaves
arna-im gone mad...all day he was thinking about khushi n akashi was teasing him...akashi left before 4 n it was time for arnavl to leave he was thinking whether to check for khushi in train station? He decides that he will. By time he gets in the train station it was already 7.00 and it was dark. So he looked for her h but she was not there
arnav l-i think uska boyfriend agaya or woh chalye gaye...good...well yh. he l was about to leave when he heard 'bachao bachao' it was khushi voice. He runs where the voice was coming from... he saw some boys were around a gal. He walks forward and saw that it was kashish. He runs and pushed the boys. It was boy who tried to misbehave wiv khushi that day.
arn-kh u ok...he walks towards those boys and bashed them. It was a big fight than those boys escaped...khushi was cyrin like hell
arn-khush don't worry chalo..hel wraps his coat around khushih n takes her to his car...
Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago
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nice start do continue soon
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loved this part as usual 👍🏼
continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very interesting lovely arnav as a doctor its different from other ff work. Amaing updates cont. Soon
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i like the start of this story! completely different and i love it!

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