OS: If Only... - Page 6

Originally posted by: JennyAvni

For a sec I got confused which was the actual dream 😉

"A million words would not bring you back, I know because I've tried, neither would a million tears, I know I've cried."----- beautifully said-- is it u or a quote?

Loving ur cute ideas... Thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: starlight06

Brilliantly written from khushi's POV try also to bring out the caged feelings of Arnav also in his sleep I dont like to see him sleeping peacefully on a soft bed .I want that bed to feel like thorns for what he is doing to Khushi.

Originally posted by: polly2312

I have given up hope on him completing that sentence ever... 😕

Originally posted by: -Neloufer-

Beautiful
Looks lyk while riting u urself were lost in dese thots

Originally posted by: SankaDevi20

Yeey! You penned down something I was thinking about for ages! What would happen to khushi sleeping outside if it started to rain!!?? And I love the consequences you gave to it! Him being all worried, arnav style. And then when she asks, he turns away like he totally would and would march out of the room - so both characters totally in character! Loved khushis dream :p for a second there I thought it was real! Lovely OS!