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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am sure its that creep!
i am so hapPy arnav came oN time, cant wait for next
update soON :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww poor Khushi! She was frightened like crazy!

I wonder who it was that was going around the house!

Hopefully it wasn't that idiot Shyam 😡🤢

AWw! Arnav's so cute that he ran home to her! 😍

Great OS! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Is it going to end at that? If it is then please don't continue it I really like this please continue it I loved it so far 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant. wonderful. remarkable. fantastic. fabulous. sensational. wonderful. incredible.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was that darn shyam! We should really praise Abhaas to play the character so well that we can't get over hating Shyam !😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ooh i loved reading this, it was very very interesting, you set the pace so well and described Khushi's fear so very realistically, it actually made me feel scared of the darkness around her, and i am not scared of the dark at all !!

Thanks for this awesome OS Zee :)

Hoping maybe you will continue with Shyam trying to get to Khushi again, or Arnav finding Shyam in the darkness somehow as they don't get the light on for a while!? Your choice :)

Love, Hayley x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shyam.. grrr...!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved the protective arnav.. hope we get to see such a scene in the show...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So so so cute!!!! Please continue it!!!! I really want to see a scene like this in the showww!!!! Pleaseee! I beg u! Continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os zee!! very well written!!!
u had all my attention... glad arnav came on time to be wid khushi...
just wanted to noe though u was it tht was scaring khushi... plz do write another part to it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nicely written thank god Arnav came on time😛

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