IPKKND: Misguided Feelings

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome OS! i loved the title how you described shyaam and arnav's thoughts! even though arnav is like getting on my nerves nowadays with his i-know-it-all attitude! but the way you describe his inner turmoil, is amazing. i hope he suffers worse than this on the show!

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

nice description of the siblings' emotion

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Written excellently. Thanks for the PM!

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chahaat.

@chahaat.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

brilliant OS. loved the description :)

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

That was so beautiful, love how you captured their true feelings and emotions :)... and talking about essays? are you kidding me i've got 2 to do and i'm stuck on IF lol :)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

This is sooo wonderful...physically speaking, there is so little going on, but emotionally speaking...WOW. The powerful emotions of both siblings were just described to perfection...with the whole dramatic irony of the fact that neither of them know the reality of the person they love...so touching<3

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Nayika u have had me bedazzled again!😆...love dthe way u made the two contrasts betwween Anjali and Arnav...but I didn't know at first that was two different takes thought it was from Arnav's point of view and Khushi's.

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Raj

@GillRK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

if ur essays are anything like ur stories ul pass with flying colours :) gud luck :)

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invalid

@invalid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

oh wow that was amazing

I loved the very last bit of Arnavs

especially how you described the way he loses him in a world of her eyes, forgetting everything only to step back and realise everything is still a little bit broken

beautiful piece of writing xx

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hodan1987

@hodan1987

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

"Devotion"...I think as soon as read that word I just thought of Anjali and her unhealthy love for her husband,..I didn't know why at first until I saw your note, then it made sense. As always, great work.

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