OS Hum ne aap ko maaf kiya..naddiya26 Part 3 pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Arhians,

Hope you all are doing well and lost in arhi's dream land...lol

So here is the final part of My OS Hum ne aap ko maaf kiya. Hope you guys enjoy reading it...

Her is the link to part 1 and 2...which is on page 1 btw...



Part 3

Arnav's heartbeat was getting intense as he was getting closer to the mandir where khushi was waiting for him. An ecstatic state took him over as he was about to reunite with his soul mate. All the memories of good moments they had shared together were flashing before Arnav's eyes, bringing a smile on his face after years.

Arnav arrived at the Mandir and stepped out of the car. His heart was now beating ever faster as if it was about to explode.

"Damnit! ye traffic jam bhi aaj hi hona tha. 7 bajj gaye aur khushi 6 baje se mera mandir main intezaar kar rahi ho gi" He headed towards the mandir clenching his fist in frustration. A payal lying on Mandirs stairs caught Arnav's attention. "I have seen this payal before." a thought crossed Arnav's mind while picking up the payal.

"Yeh to khushi ki payal hai, kahin khushi ko kuch..." anxiousness took him over and he rushed into the mandir screaming khushi's name but found her no where in the mandir.

"Khushi ... khushi...tum kahan ho khushi, damnit ..." He punched his fist hard against the pillar causing blood to shed out of his hand. But he was least interested in paying any attention to it, as the fear of khushi being in trouble had completely taken him over.

"kya hua ...aap mandir main chillaa kyun rahe hain ...sab theek to hai na beta...?" pandit ji asked walking into the mandir..

"Aaap ne kahin khushi ko dekha pandit ji...I mean meri patni yahan mandir main mera intezaar kar rahi thi...main traffic ki wajah se late ho gya aur mujhe mandir ki seeriyon pe uski payal..." Arnav broke into tears.

"Haan aik larki paanch baje se yahan kisi ka intezaar kar rahi thi. abhi thori deir pahlay to yahin thi,,,lakin phir main zara kaam se bahar nikal gaya aur abhi waapis lauta hoon"...Pandit ji replied putting his hand on arnavs shoulder to comfort him.

"Khushi...tum kahaan ho khushi... maine phir se deir kar di ...mujh main phir se tumay khonay ki himmat nahi hai...waapis aa jao khushi waapis aa jao." Arnav fell on his knees feeling so helpless.

"Jab se maa ko aapne mujh se cheen liya,maine aapse kuch nahi maanga. Log samajhte thay mera aap par se vishwaas uth gaya hai... magar main aap se naraaz tha ...iss liye kabhi aapke saamne haath nahi phelaaye...Magar aaj main aapse apni khushi waapis maangta hu bhagwaan...meri khushi mujhe waapis lauta do...khushi waapis lauta do.
Arnav cried kneeling down infront of Devi Maiyya.

Khushi who was now standing behind Arnav was shocked to know that Arnav always believed in the supreme power, God. "Hum Arnav ji ko shayad kabhi samajh hi nahi paaye... Kitna dard diya humne unhe unse door jaa kar...Devi maiyya humay maaf kar dijiye...humay maaf kar dijiye" Khushi thought to her self and called out his name...

"Arnavji..." A voice penetrated Arnav's ears. A voice he had been yearning to hear for five long years. Arnav turned around and saw the angel standing right in front of him. Tears rolling down Arnavs cheeks and It felt as if time froze and they both looked into each other's eyes drowning deeper and deeper into the ocean of love.

"Shukar hai bitiya sahi salamat waapis laut ayi... " Pandit ji's words broke their trance making them aware of their surroundings.

"kahan chali gayi thi ...Damnit... Paaglon ki tarha tumhe doondh raha tha,...tumhari payal mujhe neeche pari mili aur mujhe laga...mujhe laga ki maine phir se tume kho diya ... Dont you ever dare do this back to me...samjhi tum" Arnav yelled at khushi holding tightly onto her shoulders.

"Wo Hum ...hum chanay lainay gaye thay saamne waali dukaan se...hum kab se aapka intezaar kar rahay thay aur bohat bhook bhi lag rahi thi... " replied khushi while wiping off arnavs tears.

Arnav Pulled khushi into a his arms hugging her with all his might. "khushi...khushi tum...khushi mujhe..." Arnav was struggling to utter any words.

"Bass Arnavji...hum aapko ko rotey huway nahi daikh saktay...aur kuch kehnay ki zaroorat nahi hai... hum dono ka pyaar shabdo(n) ka muhtaaj nahi hai." Khushi was crying hugging him even harder.

"Khushi mujhe maaf kardo...main jaanta hoon tum ne mujhe bohat pahlay hi maaf kar diya tha magar aaj main tumharay moonh se sunn na chahta hoon ke tum ne mujhe maaf kiya..." Arnav broke the hug and wiped of khushi's tears.

"Hum ne aapko maaj kiya arnav ji... hum ne aapko maaf kiya...aap bhi humay maaf kar dijiye...aapko aapki zindagi se... apne aap se door karnay ke liye ...hume maaf kardijiye..." Khushi broke into tears once again...

"please maafi maang kar mujhe sharminda mat karo khushi...tumhe maafi maangnay ki koi zaroorat nahi." Arnav replied cupping khushi's face and wiping her tears off, using his thumbs.

" Aur aap bilkul nahi badlay... ghalti apni hoti hai aur daantay humay rahtay hain, Laad Governor kahi ke... khud poora aik ghanta late aaye... aur hum chanay le kar waapis aaye to hum pay chillana shuru kar diya..." Khushi shouted at arnav staring into his eyes with an anger filled with love.

"What the... tum mujh se iss tarha se baat nahi kar sakti ... ghalti tumhari thi jo tum wo stupid chanay lenay chali gai aur mujhe itna pareshaan kiya..." Arnav replied in anger.

" hum jaisay chahain aap se baat kar sakte hain samjhe aap...aur hum aapki dhamkiyon se darte nahi hain... apna ye Raakhshas wala roop le kar kisi aur ko daraiye ga Mr. Raizada... Khushi shouted back at Arnav ...

A silence took over for a moment and they both burst out laughing, realising nothing had changed between them...They were still the silly Arnav and khushi who could literally fight over anything no matter what the situation was.

"Hai Devi maiyya ye kia... aapka to kitna khoon beh raha hai"... Khushi screamed noticing arnav's bleeding hand. she felt as if her heart was bleeding along with his hand.. "Hum jaante hain...jab aap ko laga ke hum museebat main hain to zaroor aapne apna haath kisi diwaar main zor se maara ho ga... ghussay aur pareshaani main dimaag lagana to bilkul band kar detay hain aap..." A concerned khushi shouted holding arnav's hand and tore a piece off her dubatta to bandage Arnav's wound.

Arnav looking at khushi with love and affection filled her maang with his blood to claim her from God for eternity, before she could bandage his wound. Khushi started bandaging his wound and tears were rolling down her eyes. "Happy Diwali Khushi Singh Raizada"... Arnav placed a gentle kiss full of love, affection and concern on khushi's lips...They both had flashbacks from the diwali night six years ago when arnav was about to kiss khushi.
"Happy diwali Laad Governor"... Khushi whispered looking down blushing.

"Aaj main apne aur khushi ke parivaar ko diwali ka aisa gift doon ga jiska wo soch bhi nahi saktay...main sabko unki khushi lauta doon ga... " Arnav thought with a smile and they both headed towards the car.



THE END

Thanx for reading It everyone...

If you enjoyed it then don't forget to hit the like button...and please do comment and let me know how was it and how I can improve my work in future.

And naddiya ji, thanks once again for inspiring me to write...I cant believe how much people loved and appreciated my work.

Love

Sonia.
Edited by arhilove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Wow awesome Ur am amazing writer
Loved da ending x
Thanks 4 da PM
Umuahhh
xoxoxoxo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Nice ending! Thanks for the message!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: KaShGurTiLuverr

Wow awesome Ur am amazing writer

Loved da ending x
Thanks 4 da PM
Umuahhh
xoxoxoxo


Aww dear ...thanx for the lovely comment... wasnt expecting such a warm response from every one for my 1st OS... thanx for liking it dear...thank you

Wish I get same comments from ma teachers on my courseworks aswell...just a wishfull thinking...😆

But thank you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: emistry

Nice ending! Thanks for the message!


Aww Thank u dear...thhnxxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Since the like button is not working I shall leave a comment . Awesome job:) well done.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Really nice continue soon and do
Pm me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSG_luv

Really nice continue soon and do
Pm me :)


thanx for rading and liking my work... I'm not going to continue this SS im afraid...part 3 was the last one

but surely when I will write my next one, will surely PM you...

Thnx for the comment dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
vry well crafted...thanx for dese lovey dovey moments...now m gettin vry greedy n hope dat dese moments cum early in d series also..tx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome...kabhi bhi kuch likho to do pm me...becoz ur writing style is nice

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