OS Hum ne aap ko maaf kiya..naddiya26 Part 3 pg 7

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arhilove

@arhilove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: taniks
Lovely from wot I could understand pls translate hindi parts into english.pls do continue

Thanx for ur comments... I will update the last part probabaly by tommorow...but that too would be in hindi... but dont worry ill translate the hindi parts into english by the end of this week...

thnx for readin it

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Ishi

@Desai09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

fab work...

and you wrote the whole OS in hindi... I so loved reading it...

Thanks for writing it...

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LAKSHMI

@barunslakku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

plz contine soon..waiting for it...plz pm me...

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arhilove

@arhilove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: lvishii
fab work...

and you wrote the whole OS in hindi... I so loved reading it...

Thanks for writing it...

aww thank yewww

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ann123

@ann123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

awww...i cud not stop myself frm crying.😭😭 i cud feel arnav's pain through ur os...commendable job..do update soon

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pyrarkh

@pyrarkh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

its truely awesum
i luved the flashback scene

and khushi nae arnav ko maaf kr dia👏

it ws great

update soon

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Loved your OS.. Arnav-Khushi's turmoil.. the flashback was too good... Hope you continue soon.. Please add me to your PM list..

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Awww that was sad how he let her go. Beautifully written. Look forward to reading part 3.x

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

sweeti i am loving it , it was so emotional that second part made me cry . they way she asked him to take care of him self & then the way he request her .. it was very touchy ...

Keep up the good work

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arhilove

@arhilove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: naddiya26
sweeti i am loving it , it was so emotional that second part made me cry . they way she asked him to take care of him self & then the way he request her .. it was very touchy ...
Keep up the good work

awww thank you naddiya ji...I'm so glad you loved the second part...I will soon update the final part where arhi meet in mandir...

and Thankyou for inspiring me to have a go at writing OS/SS

Edited by arhilove - 13 years ago