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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi all,

A thought was lingering in my mind for the past week or so..I have tried to put it into words as best as I can.

Let me know if this is good enough to continue!

And a big thanks to all the FF, SS and OS writers...yous are truly inspiring! :)



Prologue
She had truly loved him...but in return he had snatched away everything that she had held dear...Her babuji's words rang in her ears "Aaj tumhe saabith kar diya ki tum mera apna khoon nahi ho"... If it was not for Akash's pleas she would have never ever set foot again in that house...the house that was once a second home to her...the house from which Arnav had literally dragged her out and left her on the street that fateful night...the night that she was disowned by everyone she called her family...her so-called loved ones!

It had been 5 years...she took a deep breath and opened the door of the car and stepped out.



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IISHAFS thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tht is nice plzz contuied soon
tinsel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start,do continue & add me in⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey looking forward to the reading this. Pl. PM me with updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You should definitely continue! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds interesting!

Can't wait to read the first part!

PM me whenever u update x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it nice start can't wait for more just two request please put english translation and pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting! do continue plz put english translation plz add pm mexxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds really interesting!! Eagerly waiting for your update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GOOD START. i WANT kHUSHI TO BE FIRM AND STRONG

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