OS: An IPKKND fable - Page 4

nicely written...good work..😊

Such a cute fairy tale...loved it...very unique!

perfect fairy tale i loved the prince and the angel waterfall and the cherry blossom tree

Wonderful.! I'm going to tell my niece this fable when she demands to hear a new story. I totally love it. Its amazing.

its a beautiful fable... reminds me of fairytales... :D

Kushi mushy and shyster wow cute names you have =D

It was beautiful...I had no trouble imagining Arnav & Khushi in this magical fairytale.

awesome update... so cute😳

👏One of the best that I have read on this forum. Heartwarming, beautiful and oh so delicately woven together. Loved it ,,,,!

Originally posted by: mirnalini

Ok...you might think that I am crazy, but I can just not help but comment again!

That was honestly the most beautiful thing I've ever read! Probably because I can feel the depth of their emotions 'cause it's an adaptation of IPKKND and we all are so well aware of the plot and whatever's going on.

In the end when Shyster burns the tree and Ruff-ruff finds her with the remains of what he treasures the most, their reactions are just heart-breakingly beautiful! [if that's even a word]

When Ruff ruff came home some hours later, he found Mushy sitting at the foot of the tree, hugging its trunk, sobbing. His heart stopped for moment when he saw the tree burnt down. Then he saw Mushy. And it resumed its firm, steady rhythm again. Dhak-dhak. Dhak-dhak.Dhak-dhak.

Mushy looked up at him, tears streaming down her face. "I couldn't save the tree. Your tree, it's gone. I'm so sorry. It's my fault. I should've gone with Shyster."

"The tree is burnt. Its roots are alive. It will grow again. We will replant it and tend it together. But if you were gone, my heart would stop beating."

Mushy and Ruff ruff walked into their home together, where they lived happily ever after.

Mushy is crying because she could not save what he loves the most...just the way Khushi tried to keep Shyam's truth from Arnav 'cause she knows how much he loves his sister. And she couldn't bear the thought of putting him through that kind of hurt.

And then Ruff-ruff says,

"The tree is burnt. Its roots are alive. It will grow again. We will replant it and tend it together. But if you were gone, my heart would stop beating."

Though Shyaam has ruined his sister's life because of Khushi...the same way that Shyster burns the tree for Mushy, Ruff-ruff knows that they can nurture the tree back to life. And I hope, that Arnav too will come to this realization.

I'm truly in love with what you've written. And trust me I'm very lazy when it comes to leaving comments. I usually don't if I can help it. Or usually leave a smiley or a couple of words if I do. But you've forced me to rant all the way through like a crazy lady!😆

Thanks! I'm so pleased you liked it enough to write me a long comment. To be honest, I enjoy writing everything I write, but sometimes I want to try something different. This was one of those times. I am glad it worked for you. And your interpretation was pretty much spot on.

Cheers!
Vidhya