The Story line that We Covet, or don't we? - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rita.C



o ho.
you seem to have got that prediction right.

Wesha,
you will have to do bullet points for me. I am not getting it.. Sorry honey, i am not v good with complex story lines. So if I get you right, your point is that getting Khushi to explore and question Arnav's past before this revelation of shyam's duplicity would have strengthened the story?
how and why? would it not have been counter to the CV 's desire to stretch the story? also, if they had done that, there would be greater trust. how would ASR been back then? surely they want to show hatred from ASR, cruelty and then finally understanding and redemption?




Wrong post. Yikes will fix later but love your suggestion
Wish they had taken it and yes they still can


Rita, :) you know I wrote a whole reply trying to explain my point to you with bullet-points et al. And then, with utter stupidity, managed to post the 'reply' without turning on the internet connection.

This was half an hour ago. Without losing heart, I came back again to re-write it again...but God indeed is merciful !!. :P my problems are solved.

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