The Story line that We Covet, or don't we?

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Nightingale...

@Nightingale...

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

great storyline idea, only i dont think khushis character will allow her 2 actually realize shyams scheming. My prediction was actually that arnav will find out about shyams obsession and make the rash decision of forcefully marrying khushi, hence maintaining the love/relationshi while protecting anjali as well as fitting his character?

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wesha

@wesha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: barun2297
great storyline idea, only i dont think khushis character will allow her 2 actually realize shyams scheming. My prediction was actually that arnav will find out about shyams obsession and make the rash decision of forcefully marrying khushi, hence maintaining the love/relationshi while protecting anjali as well as fitting his character?

Thanks for reading my post.😊

Khushi's character did realize that her fiance-Shyam and Anjali's husband-Shyam were the same two people and also that Shyam is only defaming Anjali to salvage himself in her eyes.

The girl is intuitive about these vibes. Don't think we would be expecting too much from her.

Arnav can do the finding out as well. But then that has to happen after he stops her from leaving Delhi with that semblance of confession and assurance of trust and then he can find out about Shyam, as I said, from Anjali's behavior or Aakash or by virtue of his own sharpness ( except that it will be strange to see him suddenly doubting Shyam without any lead whatsoever because Shyam is after all that anchor to Anjali who held her when she was abandoned before. ).

After he finds out, it should more be about the situation that compels him to show hatred to Khushi than him actually hating her. We have to have that peace of mind.😊 that is why it is essential for Khushi's sacrificial mode to be shown first through her realisation about Shyam.

The misunderstanding phase can easily be the time when Arnav has married Khushi for all the wrong reasons and is making her life difficult by that.

Hope I have made some sense to you!😊

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anjali

@rosette80

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

am satisfied totailly by ur post...thanx!

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wesha

@wesha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rosette80
am satisfied totailly by ur post...thanx!

Thanks 😊

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Like this! I also think this might be the way the show is heading. Especially with the shared past part. Great post!

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Kruti

@NautankiSaali17

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

great post...loved your inputs...totally agree with them as well...will be back with more detailed comment...😳

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wesha

@wesha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Kruti.S-
great post...loved your inputs...totally agree with them as well...will be back with more detailed comment...😳

thanks. 😊 eagerly waiting for those detailed comments ! 😊

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Oh how I wish there was a way the CVs could read your post

So...so...well written and would be perfect for a story we love!

This compromises almost nothing. TRPs, character sketches, audience interest, logic, love, story - everything perfectly in sync.

Amazing!

👏

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wesha

@wesha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: meera30
Oh how I wish there was a way the CVs could read your post

So...so...well written and would be perfect for a story we love!

This compromises almost nothing. TRPs, character sketches, audience interest, logic, love, story - everything perfectly in sync.

Amazing!

👏

Thank you so so much for reading out my post. 😊

Cannot tell you how much I wish the same. It hurts to see when a strong story line with such strong characterization loses direction. Have seen it happen too often on Indian TV. And the reasons are mostly the lack of the time the creative writers get to feel enough before spewing their creative juices again. They simply get bogged down by all kind of commercial interests forgetting the simple fact that, if they just stick to their basic priority of a good story and good acting with grit then money will anyway run behind them.

Well, since this is an interactive mode, as an audience there is something I can contribute and that is why I decided to think it out for them. It was important to run it by you guys but I don't know the next step.

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Rita

@Rita.C

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: barun2297
great storyline idea, only i dont think khushis character will allow her 2 actually realize shyams scheming. My prediction was actually that arnav will find out about shyams obsession and make the rash decision of forcefully marrying khushi, hence maintaining the love/relationshi while protecting anjali as well as fitting his character?

o ho.

you seem to have got that prediction right.

Wesha,

you will have to do bullet points for me. I am not getting it.. Sorry honey, i am not v good with complex story lines. So if I get you right, your point is that getting Khushi to explore and question Arnav's past before this revelation of shyam's duplicity would have strengthened the story?

how and why? would it not have been counter to the CV 's desire to stretch the story? also, if they had done that, there would be greater trust. how would ASR been back then? surely they want to show hatred from ASR, cruelty and then finally understanding and redemption?

Wrong post. Yikes will fix later but love your suggestion
Wish they had taken it and yes they still can

Edited by Rita.C - 13 years ago