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sbk2

@sbk2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#941

Priye 🤗

Lovely lovely ODE...you guys all rock.

I am still in tears...after today's episode.

I may skip the epis that show too much angst...I can't take it...😔

i will read the updates and then decide...whether to watch or not.

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Dammmit

@Dammmit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#942

@ Priya, Aish...it took a Herculean effort to write this today. Still processing Sobti-fied outcry of pain and betrayal. Am stuck in those 30 seconds.

Loved both your odes. Beautiful thoughts Aish and Priya!

love made him a fool

the day he let his heart rule

it brought him down made him fall

still very rich but has lost it all

I wont give in , victory will be mine

I was once weak but that was another time

today I stand in this hour of doom

checked are feelings, lest they again bloom

what is love? it is all pain

it just takes and there is no gain

have learned this the hard way

from forth hence will not sway

gone is the dream, it was just that

but its now time to ring in this fact

my heart is now safe in vault of steel

from now on its just a "deal"

your tears will not move me your pain will not torment

I will gift your grief your anguish I will augment

I wish you agony O my nemesis fair

for I will be your tyrant fight me if you dare

Edited by Dammmit - 13 years ago

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showstruck

@showstruck

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#943

@dashing girl..thanks for the link

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#944

Hi ladies

Aish,Shamika,loonili...Awesum odes...

KG lesson - If any buddy PM's u , u hav 2 reply them 😡

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sbk2

@sbk2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#945

EDIT: Just read Shamika's ODE too...lovely! Beautiful words...with so much pain in them!

I remembered an old Lata Mangeshkar Song:

Rasm -e- Ulfat Ko Nibhaayen

Toh Nibhaaye Kaise

Har Taraf Aag Hai Daaman

Ko Bachayen Kaise

Dard Mein Doobe Hue

Nagme Hazaaron Hain Magar

Saaz - e - Dil Toot Gaya Ho

To Sunaye Kaise

Bojh Hota Jo Ghamon Ka

Toh Utha Bhi Lete

Zindagi Bojh Bani Ho

Toh Uthayen Kaise...

Edited by sbk2 - 13 years ago

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Ariel

@Ariel

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#946

Originally posted by: Dammmit

@ Priya, Aish...it took a Herculean effort to write this today. Still processing Sobti-fied outcry of pain and betrayal. Am stuck in those 30 seconds.

Loved both your odes. Beautiful thoughts Aish and Priya!

love made him a fool
the day he let his heart rule
it brought him down made him fall
still very rich but has lost it all
I wont give in , victory will be mine
I was once weak but that was another time
today I stand in this hour of doom
checked are feelings, lest they again bloom
what is love? it is all pain
it just takes and there is no gain
have learned this the hard way
from forth hence will not sway
gone is the dream, it was just that
but its now time to ring in this fact
my heart is now safe in vault of steel
from now on its just a "deal"
your tears will not move me your pain will not torment
I will gift your grief your anguish I will augment
I wish you agony O my nemesis fair
for I will be your tyrant fight me if you dare

Shamika, your thoughts flow so seamlessly..You are like Barun, you come up with something better each time😊

Shwethsy, those lyrics are boootiphul!!

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Dammmit

@Dammmit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#947

@ Aish and Shwetz...thanks for the kinds words.

Shwetzy those lyrics are sooo apt for KKG. Thats excatly what she will feel tomorrow.

Aish: you are too kind. Thanks for the ultimate compliment.

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Dammmit

@Dammmit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#948

Originally posted by: cindrella255
Hi ladies

Aish,Shamika,loonili...Awesum odes...

KG lesson - If any buddy PM's u , u hav 2 reply them 😡

Thanks Cindy.

PM me and I will reply 😆

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mommy2000

@mommy2000

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#949

@Priya, Shamika, Aish ---- lovely...heart wrenching odes, with a hint of the positive (from my priye)
@Kitten -- don't purr --- me lub u --- always ---- actions speak louder than words --- here's a 🤗
@Shwets -- perfect dedication!! I feel like you too!!! Can't bring myself to see the angst...:(
@lucky -- Loved your poem --- beautiful!
@bacchi --- did i already say I lub u????
@dongi -- *KICKS HER OUT* - go study!!!
@LAAALI --- Our's is a true "lamhe" moment!!!! Kabhi main kahoo, kabhi tum suno (so not at the same time)...such a beatifOOL song!!!