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here is my ode to angst ridden, dark ASR. Please dont throw chappals at my juvenile attempts. I know its school girl level :)

Originally posted by: Ariel

here is my ode to angst ridden, dark ASR. Please dont throw chappals at my juvenile attempts. I know its school girl level :)

A betrayal so deep, I feel like a fool,

However I spin it, I cant keep my cool,

This pain so sharp, it robs me of my breath,

Your words, they burn me, they scorch my soul,

But I am no flower, I wont wither away,

The darkness has come, I allow it take me over,

In it I find a cloak, in it I have found solace,

my heart's heart, you will reap as you sow,

Blood you will weap, this is my solemn vow,

my wrath you will face, you will bend to my will,

the ache in your heart will be the only emotion I will not thwart,

And yet for all the pain I cause, pain I will feel,

I am my own tormentor, agony on my self I afflict,

every day I will return to break your heart, mi amor,

till the day I stop fighting with myself to feel for you no more.

Aish...

Originally posted by: Ariel

here is my ode to angst ridden, dark ASR. Please dont throw chappals at my juvenile attempts. I know its school girl level :)

A betrayal so deep, I feel like a fool,

However I spin it, I cant keep my cool,

This pain so sharp, it robs me of my breath,

Your words, they burn me, they scorch my soul,

But I am no flower, I wont wither away,

The darkness has come, I allow it take me over,

In it I find a cloak, in it I have found solace,

my heart's heart, you will reap as you sow,

Blood you will weap, this is my solemn vow,

my wrath you will face, you will bend to my will,

the ache in your heart will be the only emotion I will not thwart,

And yet for all the pain I cause, pain I will feel,

I am my own tormentor, agony on my self I afflict,

every day I will return to break your heart, mi amor,

till the day I stop fighting with myself to feel for you no more.

BEAUTIFUL!!!! Aish --- fantastic!!!!👏

@aish : fantastic stuff

aww... thanks so much ladies!! I wrote it last week when that sad precap came out but was too chicken to post it. Anyway, I finally mustered some courage today!

Originally posted by: Priya_128

@aish : fantastic stuff

@all : hiii

@sinnie : congrats girll...finally u jumped to the red bandwagon :P

aish...continuing on...

to feel for her no more

a herculean chore

his heart felt the connection, it bloomed a little

the remnants of it will remain in the middle

pain and angst rule high now

but the feeling will remain, it something called love

anger and destruction of her he will attempt

with every single try, he'll hurt himself blatant

hes not a withering flower, but neither is she

she'll withstand the darkness, and bring out the glee

the act of betrayal was a misconstrued story

the collatrel damage was her, in this battle gory

his past so dark, that makes him a wary

she'll show him his present isnt so dreary

the connection he felt, it will take over soon

but before that they will journey together to doom

Priya and Aish ----- u nailed it girls!!! Will have to get back to it later in the afternoon ------ ciao for now!!

Am still trying to get over that performance!!!!