ArHi OS: Redemption

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Bhavya

@Bhavya8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

That was a wonderful OS!! I liked the easy conversation they had and how Khushi blushed so much! And Arnav was kinda laid back which was great! I especially loved the end with Akash bein so surprised at his roomate. It showed the huge impact of just one meeting! Thanks for pm!!! And looking forward to more updates, OS' and drabbles!

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Flame.

@Flame.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Awwwh this is surely the cutest thing i have ever read or should i say the best OS i have ever read? 👏

Lovely! It was very cute and when it ended i had a big grin on my face.

You should really write more. I loved reading this 🤗

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Aanya, this was soo beautiful! (: I love it when you write!

I really liked how this came out, and how you indirectly said that Arnav quit smoking because of Khushi. It was so subtle, yet so beautiful! (: You should write more! Thanks for the pm!

--Garima (:

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

That was cute! Such nerds they are, talking about the books they like ahahaha

I like how you left it with the cigarettes, leaves it alll to our imaginations :D

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Arshi Analyzers

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Brilliant start! Do continue soon!

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

wondaful os relii cute n swt

luvd da concept

beautifully written

fanx 4 da pm x 😊

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Thank You so much everyone, for your comments 🤗

Most of you think I'll be continuing this, I won't! I simply don't have the time :)

But I'm glad you liked it enough to be continued <3

xoxo

Aanya

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497410

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Amazing Job Aanu!

You already know I love your one shots! I feel your One shots/drabbles are better! I love your FF too. . .but your OSes have such a creative effect on me! 😳

I love this one! And I can totally understand Khushi's PoV here! I suffer from acute Rhinitis . . .so I can't tolerate smoke or dust!

Love their characterization!