One Day You'll Know .. Silence Screams .. - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Sadaf, this is truly amazing...the way you looked into his emotions was fantastic...this was brilliantly written...loved it...

With pastel tears on my Cheeks, With silence On my Lips,
With a boulevard of broken dreams, i try to forget and subsist,
Even having a thousand chaos Inside my head ; i survive
Even having a bundles of acidic rains ; i pretend to be strong
Agony, fury, sorrows, all Words are meaningless for me,
Its my dry heart who has lost the pattern of leafs,

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
amazinly written sadaf👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
One Day! One Day! One Day!
One Day you'll be there ...
even i wonder wen dat one day will cme...😍
gosh Sada u alwayz manage 2 leave me speechless..
🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
U r truly brilliant... 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

It made me emotional...Wow such amazing piece of art...
U r truly a rockstar...⭐️

Thanx for PM ing me such wonderful work..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is absolutely brilliant!!
Im honestly running out of words to compliment your amazing work!!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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how do u do this sadaf !! brilliant as usual


I carry my forlorn silence with myself all around my heart,
When the strange feelings reflects in darkness,
I try to steal myself away at times; but my mind intricates me,
My mind fumbles around for some kinda relieve from ordeals,
Still i found myself standing in the fields of murky shadows
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sadaf how do you do this?? You are too good!!! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice written.liked it 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Sadaf!!
U made my eyes well up!! Especially the last stanza!!

I loved it dear!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
OMG...OMG...wow Sadaf...amazing as usual...👏
this was awesomely written for an awesome epi...😳
really nice...loved it❤️
brilliant work Sadaf...keep it up...!!👍🏼

these lines were epic!!🤪😳

Oh! You know that I Love the stillness,
Oh! You know that I Love the tunes without beats,
Oh! You know that I Love chimes without Rhythms,

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