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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

awesome os sorry but in my home my dad have always taught the girls in our home if some one slaps you give it back better even if he is angry he should not have hit her yes he apologize but that does not make up for hitting her love how he apologize but he should not have done it in the first place thanks for the pm

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

ahhh! guys i'm getting a bad vibe here. i have just written this on the basis of what i think KHUSHI would do, not you or i. sorry if this has offended your belifs.

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Hally

@HallyH

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Oh I loved it! Arhi are just simply amazing

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Brilliantly done Z!!

I love the way you've written this.

A beautiful blend of emotions and feelings.

Thanks for the PM hun.

⭐️

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Loved your OS.

The ending was great.

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Neemsundari

@Neemsundari

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

This might be fiction, and I take it as such, but I don't think Khushi would live even for a day with a man who slapped her. Nor should she.

Physical abuse is unforgivable, no matter what the circumstance. I have seen physical abuse in my family, and have had to fight against it myself. It is Not pretty. Pretty abhorrent, in fact.

This is the first time I've come across a fictional scenario on this forum that I could not digest. I love your writing, but not the slap. No way.

Don't mean to offend you or anyone else, but needed to get this off my chest. Sorry.