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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

not liking the slapping part but LOVE the ending part to death!
hahahaha

kushi got her revenge by 'messing up' his hair!
i can totally imagine kushi drying that hair hard! lol

great OS!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Oh I loooveee loveee looovvveee it Zeee...! It's fabulous... 😊

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Neemsundari

@Neemsundari

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Zeee

hey! as i have said before. my POV of what khushi would do. and i totally understand your preach, i have seen and dealt with it too.
one more thing, i did have a warning type thing in red at the begining just in case. in hind sight by all means please dont read my writing if i do note beforehand how its going to play out. hint hint OS: The Slap, 😆

oh and dont be sorry, yo!😆 its all kool voicing opinions
Peace out.
xxx

Your view of what Khushi would do is pretty sordid, I must say, and neither your note nor arnav's "apology" justifies it. In case you didn't get it, that sorry was sarcastic.

Peace be with you, and happy new year.

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

GOD the writers on this forum r DAMN gud. Why the hell cant the CVs of this bloody show write well 😡

It was lovely Zee though i confess i dint like the SLAPgate. Sorry 4 offending u. Loved the rest of it 👏

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hina

@mid-night-sun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

fantastic

superb

excellent😊

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

Your view of what Khushi would do is pretty sordid, I must say, and neither your note nor arnav's "apology" justifies it. In case you didn't get it, that sorry was sarcastic.

Peace be with you, and happy new year.

🤣

i got to say..wow! really?! can i please clarify that this is just fiction yaar. as in not real life. just becuase i have wrote it like this doesnt mean it will happen😆 or i or you would do this in real life. a and i'll repeat what i have said just for you, i i think you missed it.😉

one more thing, i did have a warning type thing in red at the begining just in case. in hind sight by all means please dont read my writing if i do note beforehand how its going to play out. hint hint OS: The Slap, 😆

peace out. 😉

xxx

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Angels11
GOD the writers on this forum r DAMN gud. Why the hell cant the CVs of this bloody show write well 😡

It was lovely Zee though i confess i dint like the SLAPgate. Sorry 4 offending u. Loved the rest of it 👏

not offended yo! 😆 i dont like the slap either, but if i was think about arnav's anger and how far it would go. and i thought what could khushi do if arnav's anger went over board. not saying it will, but its one of those what if, 😆.

xxx

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farhacassim

@farhacassim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Zeee, I loved your OS, as I do all your writing. As an author u have the sole copyright to determine how your story plays out. I think that it's a mark of a good writer that you can stir up these emotions. After all, last time I check this was still an Arhi OS and not reality!

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-GreenEnvy-

@-GreenEnvy-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

finally got to reading an commenting!

look honestly, the slap in this way didnt really bother me, why? because we know that it was a physical emergence of his anger. now if he was a woman beater in the true sense, and he beat her up daily that i would have a problem with, but he didnt.

i thought you did quite well writing for the characters, because arnav, as we know, doesn't think in anger- he's a reactor and it gets ugly. but the next second he regrets is and usually tries to make amends.

khushi on the other hand, is every bit a fiery tiger, but at the same time she is a bit helpless in the situation. not just that, but she understands her husband, her thinking tis her fault? wrong but thats kkhushi, she's been blamed for a lot, she makes mistakes, so its easy for her to assume that it might've just been because she riled him up.

theres nnever an excuse for physical abuse, but zee this was more a one time thing. we know that, and i think its just another side of their relationship. do i think arnav would ever stoop to that? no, he'll fling her around maybe, give her bruises through clutching, but a slap is only if it gets to a dire situation.

on that note, he might just slap her if he in anyway holds her responsible for messing with his family's happiness. why, because in our society a slap is THE way to disgrace someone. if you slap someone, people know that they've done something horrible. its a message.

but again, he shouldn't have slapped her, but literary wise, i see how this could happen in the plot due to his pent up frustration and by then she'll feel so helpless its more of a take it for everyone else, or fight and rin everyones life situation.

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-GreenEnvy-

@-GreenEnvy-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

Your view of what Khushi would do is pretty sordid, I must say, and neither your note nor arnav's "apology" justifies it. In case you didn't get it, that sorry was sarcastic.

Peace be with you, and happy new year.

you don't think khushi should live with a man that slaps her, neither do i. but this isn't about us, it's khushi.
i don't want to offend you, but i mean, as a reader and watcher, i know khushi as quite an unpredictable character. she's someone that's instilled with the age old bhartiya naari values of the whole pati parmeshwar gyan but at the same time she's proactive and a free spirited girl who's not afraid to stand up for the right thing. and yet at the same time when she factors in her family etc she bows to pressure, that's been exhibited in the show already, she is yet to tell anjie bout shyam. so as a character, would she really walk out on arnav knowing the whole family would ask questions?

her reaction to a slap could've gone two ways, and zee just penned down wahat she thought k's reaction would be.

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