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thecraze92

@thecraze92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

okay well i was busy with new year celebration and parties, and didn't read this OS till now, after reading your message. I think it is beautifully written and justified the characters. You can't imagine arnav's just taunting her always, and c'mon people, think when we are too angry dont we went out our anger on things or people. I always do, just like arnav, if i am really frustrated i usually would punch something. So read the story, not the slap!

And Zee, great job! dont let the negativity get to you, i know it prolly hurts to read people's comments which are reflecting your writing to offensive, but believe it is totally perfect and keep writing always! I love reading your work and i am pretty sure a lot of other do as well! 🤗

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Juicee Sushie

@Juicee_Sushie

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Zee just read your OS, I loved it, the intensity of emotions and passions were fantastic!!!

Not a big fan of the slap in regards to either sex BUT it also didn't bother me that much; I think if a man or a woman is provoked far enough it can be justified especially as in this case it was a one off!!!

Plus I liked how Khushi covered up for ASR to Anjali and the remorse he showed, in fact we saw more emotions in regards to his remorse in your OS than we have seen in the series regarding his jealousy so I loved it!!!

I bet if Khushi had slapped Arnav you would not be getting grief over it?!

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rechup

@rechup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Really loved it
Amazing piece of work

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

While I don't believe men have the right to hit women, whatever the provocation, I do l believe less protest would be there if Khushi had slapped him back!!!!

Or will the rabied fans not be able to handle that? Sometimes, he really needs a shampoo wash done...to that acid tongue of his!

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mimi

@moon_mine

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

loved it!!!!

it ws jst amazing!!!!

too good!!!!

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Great work!
Really loved reading it! 😃

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Neema

@N33MA

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

My mouth opened wide when you wrote Arnav slapped her!
How dare he lol hoping this wouldn't happen except the last bit.

Oh and I loved it <333

-Neema