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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi all - This has started out as a one shot based off today's epi. So I'm not sure yet if I will update. I will try though if there are enough people to read it. Let me know if you like it, and want me to continue.


REVELATIONS

He felt someone collide with his back, and automatically spun around, while trying to steady himself. Thrown slightly off balance, he stepped quickly to the side, as he watched her continue on her way, head bowed, as if she hadn't just walked right into him. 'Something is definitely up with this girl' he thought to himself, as he shook his head and made his way across the room to his sister, who was talking to her husband, and La. He reached them just as La, grabbing his arm, leaned over his shoulder and shouted "Chamkeli! I think I left my bracelet up in ASR's room, go get it for me.. Please." She added as an afterthought. Not sure whether the familiar way she held his arm, or that she had barked out an order at her like that annoyed him more, but he caught her hand, and less than gently pushed it away, turning to chat with his sister about upcoming events, his eyes unconsciously following her as she made her way up the stairs, crossed the landing, and disappeared, as if she were sleepwalking. Distracted once again a few minutes later by yet another arm clutch from La, he missed Shayam excuse himself from the group, and head up the upstairs. A few minutes later, growing tired of the talk of Poojas and engagements, and his eyes flitting to the stairs every few seconds, he broke away from the group, circling around the room, before reaching the stairs, which he slowly began to climb.

Her mind was numb, she had no idea what she was still doing here, no idea what she'd do when she finally made it home, and no idea how she had gotten through Angali's introduction of Shayam as he husband, without screaming in shock and helplessness. She wasn't sad, she noticed, as she entered the bedroom, pausing just inside the doorway, lost in thought. Shocked yes, because it was unexpected, and unthinkable and sick in such a perverted way, she refused to concentrate on it. Helplessness, because she knew she was trapped, but she didn't know how yet, or what form it would take, but deep in her very bones, she knew she was doomed.

He grabbed her shoulder, spinning her around, apologies and explanations falling from his lips in desperation. She refused to listen, backing away, her eyes filled with anger, and disgust. But, he needed to explain, needed her to understand why he had done, what he had done, why he couldn't let her go, why she must help him with his plan for their happiness. 'And, if words wouldn't do it,' he thought, the terror of losing her fuelling his already twisted mind, 'then surely his actions would.' And, without hesitating, he launched himself at her, a thick, beefy hand clamping over her mouth, another grabbing her wrist, ignoring her struggles, and muffled pleas, as he backed her into the wall, pinning her against it with his body, freeing his hand which grazed up her arm, feverishly to her neck, stroking lightly with his fingers, as he whispered soothingly into her ear, promising her the world, if only she would stop struggling, and then suddenly she did. Her body went limp, and slumped forward slightly against his, her arms relaxed, and her head eased back slightly. Feeling a surge of triumph and a rush of passion, he relaxed his palm over her mouth, smiling, and starting to relax his weight against her, when the smile turned into a grimace of pain, as he felt sharp teeth sink into his open palm. Recoiling in shock, he let go, grabbing his palm, inspecting it briefly, and she ducked, then bolted, across the room, reaching the door before he realized what was happening.

He made his way up the stairs in long easy strides, his brain switching effortlessly from the morning's events, to the work he had scheduled for the afternoon. His gaze downturned, he had nearly reached the landing when for the second time that day he was almost thrown off his feet, feeling not just a collision, but hands shoving him to the side as she streaked past him down the stairs. Unconsciously reaching out to steady himself, he froze as he caught a glimpse of her face as she bounded down the stairs, tripping repeatedly, and drawing every eye in the room below to herself. 'She's terrified' he thought, and his feet almost as if commanded by that thought, began to give chase. Ignoring the uproar occurring in the room, the loud shouts of her name by almost every member of the family, and even the sudden rush of bodies moving after her as she weaved her way through the furniture, past the large columns and stumbled down the entryway, he caught up with her just as she reached the front doors, grabbing at the handles, frantically tugging at them, sobbing uncontrollably. He approached slowly, and afraid to startle, or add to her hysteria, turned around and threw a warning look at the crowd his family was forming, some distance behind him. "Khushi" He said softly, turning back, stepping as close as he dared, his eyes taking in her shoulders as they jerked repeatedly, while she tried to open the door, how in her hysterical state she didn't notice the latch secured into place, how her head remained bowed seemingly unaware of anyone, or anything. He waited a few seconds before inching closer, planting himself firmly behind her, "Khushi" He said again, his voice still low, soothing "Let me open the door for you." He waited, watching as her shoulders lost some of their frantic rhythm, then slowly stopped jerking, hands still firmly gripping the door handles, the knuckles on her fingers, white and rigid. Hardly daring to breathe, he moved his arm around her, trying unsuccessfully to ignore the sounds of her ragged breathing, the choked sobs, he kept moving his hand towards the handle, then slid his fingers between hers and the door, clasping them, then gently easing each one free, before drawing her hand out, careful not to exert too much pressure, and bringing it down slowly to her side. Her hand was icy cold, he noticed, just as he heard the voice boom out from behind him, while he simultaneously watched her other hand drop from the door, and she unconsciously moved backwards into him, her whole body stiffening, her fingers digging into his palm, eyes never leaving the floor. Instinctively, he moved his arm around her shoulder, then reflexively half turned towards the voice, his body tensing, as alarm bells sounded in his mind.

His eyes took in the scene in one glance, drifting over each player, gaging their impending reactions from their present expressions, dismissing them, then zeroing in on the final one, who stood the furthest away, solidly blocking her from view. "What's going on over here?" He called out loudly, forcing a note of confusion into his voice. They all turned, one by one, flashing him looks of uncertainty, mingled with fear at what they were trying to understand. 'All but one' he noted, his eyes drifting back to the figure near the door. Moving forward almost casually, he stopped near them, smile firmly in place, eyes passing over the clasped hands, the two bodies almost glued together, and he forced his mind to focus on the situation at hand, refused to let the rage take control. 'What's going on Saleh Sahib?' He asked curiously, a half smile on his face, looking inquiringly into his eyes, then glancing back at his wife. "If Khushiji is upset, maybe it would be better to let someone else take care of her." He said still smiling, then dropping his voice "Instead of you doing it in this fashion" he said in a low disapproving voice. Suddenly speaking louder, he reached his hand out towards her wrist "Here, let me take over." He said, his voice carrying across the hall, then stopped as he suddenly saw him shift slightly, dropping her hand, then reaching out almost lazily, before he felt his hand lightly grip his forearm. He snapped his head up, startled further to see his brother-in-law's eyes rest on him for a moment, then drift over to the stairs, then back again, and lock. "It's OK, Jij" He said casually, before he raised his voice slightly, eyes holding steady "Lavanya." He called, "Take Khushi upstairs to my room now." ' It all happened in a rush, as she stopped near them, took Khushi's hand in hers, tugging her forward, then stopping, her eyes widening in alarm, and hesitating before fearfully requesting he remove his hand from her shoulder, which he did after gently telling her to go upstairs with Lavanya, and that everything was going to be fine. Throwing him a look of dread mixed with awe, Lavanya led her away, both moving robotically, while the rest stood watching, no one daring to interfere. He stood stock still for a moment, his eyes following them, his mind urging him to act, and act fast, before all was lost, before he'd have to plan again, from scratch. He turned slowly, and eyes once again scanning the faces around him he started to step forward before he felt the hand that had never left his arm, close around it like a vice. Head snapping up, he looked into the dark eyes of his wife's brother, eyes, no longer unreadable, but burning instead with barely controlled fury.

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renee27 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃😉😊i love you for this update...
i was all sad sad today since today's epi marks the start of what we all feel khushi's tumultuous journey...so having arnav by her side is wat we all are desperately hoping to see...CV's plzz listen...we r literally praying on this forum to give the poor girl some rest...it will b unbearable to see her shunned by all...heartbreaks are OK but not more than one week
too much speculation on arnav's course of action has left almost all of us drained...i sooo wish sometimes that it was all a book which i can finish in one go...but its a damned SP show which is giving me sleepless nights
u have put this beautifully here...he understands ithout her evn opening her mouth n he is all caring n protective...i wud have admired a punch there but too much to ask at this point since baby anjali is present in the scene ready to burst into tears
have always admired ur writing
tell me ur name pls...i cant call u headoverheels...
n do continue...need some positivity😃

Edited by renee27 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue...
you won't believe but Khushi bumping into Arnav lost in her thoughts in the upcoming episodes is exactly what I thought after I had finished watching today's episode..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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⭐️the start is scary and i want arnav to bash up shyam and khushi should say all about that crap to arnav😡
thanks for the pm and continue very soon can't wait😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it yaar..i juz loved ur way of writing..writting down every one's pov separately abt situations..and the use of words ..and writting abt imp
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG continue continue please and PM me when u do!!!
Oh btw i should say that i loved it!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You know I am a fervent fan of your other Fan Fiction, in fact, its one of the main reasons I sign into this forum every day, hoping to be gifted with another chapter and this one, which is clearly taking the two of them (ASR and Khushi) on another trajectory is incredibly intriguing. You should be shopping around for a book deal, you are scarily talented. I intentionally slow down when I am reading a post or a fiction piece you've written so it doesn't end too soon, and to be able to catch the nuances you always highlight. Also, you are incredibly funny, so its like icing, meet cake...

I will quite possibly have to cash out some investments and buy you a boat as a THANK YOU, for you to use as a permanent writer's abode so you can continue to write and write and write. Of course, that might just be a paper boat, with the way the markets are right now, but you'd still get my all. People are going to be extremely surprised when they read my will to find I've left my most precious possessions, my box of celebrity hair clippings and two stuffed meer-cats to an awesome forum poster called HeadOverHeels..

Seriously, my dear, PLEASE, PLEASE extend this into an FF and do so immediately! If there is anything else you've written, POST!
Edited by napstermonster - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is fantastic...really loved it...please continue and do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing post
keep it up
love arshi
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
nice part pls continue soon

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