OS mujhe tum nazar se (OS added )final part at 6

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[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z7lsUzKSdXE[/YOUTUBE]

(he just disgraced her twice ones with the necklace and then with the clothes . i felt this goes with Khushi feeling.)
mujhe tum nazar se giraa to rahe ho mujhe tum kabhi bhi bhulaa na sakoge (
na jaane mujhe kyuN yakeen ho chalaa hai
mere pyaar ko tum miTaa na sakoge
mujhe tum nazar se

meri yaad hogi jidhar jaaoge tum
kabhi nagmaa banke, kabhi banke aaNsoo taDaptaa mujhe har taraf paaoge tum
shamaa jo jalaayee hai meri vafaa ne
bujhaana bhi chaaho bujhaa na sakoge
mujhe tum nazar se

kabhi naam daaNtoN mein aayaa jo meraa
to bechain ho ho ke dil thaam loge nigaahoN mein chhaayegaa Gham kaa andheraa
kisi ne jo poochhaa sabab aaNsuoN kaa
bataanaa bhi chaaho bataa na sakoge
mujhe tum nazar se giraa to rahe ho
mujhe tum kabhigi bhgii bhulaa na sakoge
mujhe tum nazar se

OS below

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Enjoy the vm OS will be updated soon

Arnav just plan not to make her cry he just drive back to office he was totally lost he just try to concentrated on driving but he could not .


Khushi was with LA but she was restless ,she was just doing yes no

LA: tum aur ASR dono aik se ho kab tum dono ka mood off hojai pata nahi chalta ..

Khushi: LA ji hum aap ki help kar raha ha na

LA: nahi chaiya muhje ko koi help . i am scared of ASR agar mood off hogaya engagement wala din tou woh sub chor kar na chala jai

Khushi : LA ji ghar chalta ha kal Anjali di ka saath aajai ga

LA:kaise ko meri fiqr nahi ha ... she just walk out

Khushi: aap ko hum se zaida firq parta ha, Arnav ji..she just walk behind LA.

they reached home

Anjali: hogai shopping

LA: no DI ASR said he could not stay more he just left.

Anjali: LA ji koi kam hoga

Akash: Di bhai kahan ha i am calling him for about 1/2 hour he is not picking up phone

Khushi: just skip a beat .

Anjali: chota bhi na kam mein busy hoga

Akash: DI but he didnot reach office yet.

Khushi: just drop her cell which she was holding in her hand . "DM" she just try to calm her self ...

LA: chamkli try karo na ASR ka number .

Khuhsi: with shaky hand she dialed his number ,someone picked call" aap phone kyun nahi utha raha sub ko dara diya ."

the receiver: " accident hogaya ha jin ka yeh phone ha "

Khushi just felt the world around her had suddenly became dark , she was on floor..her head hit the table edge and blood started coming out of it

Everyone was looking at her LA ran to hold her but she was late as she was all ready on floor .

Akash: just picked the Phone and talked ...

LA: chamkali...

Akash : just socked ...

Anjali: kya huwa ...

Akash: bhia ka accident .

Anjali: kya chota .. she was patting khushi ..

Akash : just picked her up and asked them to come he just made her lay on back seat in LA lap ..

Anjali:c hota thek tou ha na

Akash: di please dont panic he must be fine

LA chamkali ka itna khoon nikal raha ha

Akash please you press it tight

they reached hospital , Akash just picked her up and walk in with LA and Anjali behind her

Arnav was coming out of the dr room " he saw Khushi ..in Akash arm .and LA was holding her head.

Arnav: kya huwa he just ran .and took her from him as she was his property

Anjali chota aap thek ha

Arnav: ha DI. iss ko kya huwa

Anjali she called you

Arnav just rush to the Dr room laid her on the table " please iss ko dekha"

DR: yeh kaise huwa

Akash: she fainted after hearing bhai accident news her head bang with the edge of the table.

Arnav: just felt he just hold her in his arms and say he is fine ,he will not hurt her any more.

DR: ok you all go out let us give her treatment .

Arnav: wanted to stay but he was helpless ,he just look at her pale face her words echo in his ears :'sapnon ke duniya mein rehna hi accha hai lavanyaji...kyunki asli duniya mein sirf dil tootte ha" he just walk out

LA: di khushi is unhappy with her engagement i am sure

Anjali: hum na to pehla din he bola tha chota se

Akash payal ji ko phone karo

Arnav: no no need to call any one . you all go i am here

Anjali: aap ko tou khud

Arnav chota se accident tha .. i wish had taken cell in ,and the Dr staff had not pick the call.

Nurse walk out " are you with that girl"

Arnav: yes

Nurse you have to arrange blood for her .

Arnav: blood

DR: walk out "yes she had lost alot and we have to give her ,her group is AB

Arnav : mine

DR: you cannot give her as

Arnav: you take mine i am fine he just walk in before Dr or anjali could object . he just sit near her just asked nurse to take his .

Nurse you have to lay down he just lay on the bed

Arnav: "Khushi " whisper

Nurse she is under medicine she will get up in hour or so.

anjali walk in she just look at her stubborn chota ... who was staring at khushi . with in few mins the bag was filled with his blood.

Anjali: i have asked door to give you some ..she paused

Arnav: i am fine ..

Nurse :please sir you dont get up.

DR: walk in he just needle his blood in khushi vein. "we are shifting her to room you can too rest there dont drive or stress your self "

Arnav: ok he just walk with her to the room

Anjali chota ab aap lat jai iss sofa per yeh aap ghar jai

Arnav: i will lay down here.

LA: i have to go home and change my dress , as she was has stains.

Akash ok i will take you ...

Anjali i am here with them.

Arnav just closed his eyes .

Anjali: khushi ji tou bohat sensitive ha aap ka bara mein sun kar , bohat lucky ha jin se yeh pyar karti ha.

Arnav: lucky he is a fool ..

Anjali: aap na kuch bola chota

Arnav : no Di

Anjali: saw khushi was moving she was murmuring something .."khushi ji"

Arnav: just got up

Khushi: fariq parta ha

Anjali: kya bol rahi ha

Arnav: just wanted to hold her in his arms but could not ..

Anjali: chota haat pakra she is moving her hand drip nikal jai gai

Arnav: placed his hand on her , her hand was cold as ice" Di ac band kara "

Anajli: why

Arnav: see her hand

Anjali check her fore head it was sweating ..

Arnav: DI call dr please

Anjali : walk out

Arnav: Khushi i am sorry please forgive me . whisper in her ear .she just open her eyes look at him

Khushi"ab thek ha" he just ashamed of him self.

Anjali walk in with Dr

Dr: oh she woke up he just check her

Khushi was giving blank look

Anjali: aap faint hogai thi , aap ko chot lagi ...

Khushi : touch her fore head ..she look at her left hand which was still in his.

DR: she is fine ,she just need rest and you too Mr Arnav: as first you met an accident and then you gave her blood.

Khushi: look at the drip

DR: you come with me i will give you their medicines

Anjali chala, she look back at Arnav "chota larna nahi please"

Arnav: shakes his head

As she walk out

Khushi: try to remove his hand

Arnav: kya huwa

Khushi: nahi chaiya hum ko aap ka khoon ,try to take out the drip

Arnav: shhh hold her other hand too "tum ko bohat Fariq parta ha khushi kumar gupta ,jis tarah muhje ko parta ha "

Khushi: nahi parta

Arnav: acha then why you fainted ?hmmm

Khushi : just started looking on other side ."aap hum ko phir jata daga , hum aap ko sub kuch wapis kar sakta ha per yeh khoon nahi, na hum na humara "

Arnav; i am sorry for what i said really sorry .

Anjali walk in 'kya huwa aap dono ko"

Arnav: kuch nahi di Khushi ko aap ka bhai ka Khoon nahi chaiya .he just left her hand and just try to get up he was feeling weak

Anajli chota she saw him bit shaky

Arnav ;i am fine

Anjali: aap kaise ki tou sunta nahi ha , everyone stop you not to give but you .

Arnav: just walk back to sofa .and lay down ,khushi look at him he was looking very weak. "DI sapnon ke duniya mein rehna hi accha hai ...kyunki asli duniya mein sirf dil tootte ha"

Khushi looked at him his eyes was closed as he was suffering from the same pain as she was


i know a strange OS but i dont know why i felt like writing it

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW ...luvd d VM ...waiting for d OS 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An Emotional VM,Loved it,Thanks👏
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Originally posted by: shaheerdiwani

WOW ...luvd d VM ...waiting for d OS 😊

thx dear added
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it..awsome writing..loved how both feel for eachothers pain..and how they help..they r just like this..they hurt and they feel the pain..it was so tearfull.my eyes welled up.
Edited by sarach - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seriously u need to continue this
Please pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really good plz continue...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS and VM!! Loved how u used the dialouge in today's episode!! that line had so deep meaning! thanks for the PM!
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it's awesome naddiya
however i suffer when i read the indian ... i did my best to understand
i hope the next oses there some english dear ...

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